Penname: Happy2bNappy [Contact]

Real name: Shay

Member Since: December 18 2009

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Okay, my stories weren't gone for long. The muse came a knockin' plus, I feel happy again. :-D




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A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Well, I think the heart wants what the heart wants but I hope Sasha makes Dimitri work a little harder. Sending flowers isn't enough. Carter deserves the truth. I like the old pic of Sasha. She looks so much sweeter and even though her heart was broken, I still think she's the same sweet Sasha. The new pic reminds me of a straight up seductress/diva which doesn't really fit Sasha's personality. Enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Date: May 08 2014

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Well. I'm glad he did some groveling before she decided to give him another chance at least. I hope he stands up to the test of his father's interference when the time comes and I'm sure it will. It will be so sweet if Faye and Jaylen see Sasha and Dmitri together again, that would be so funny. Hope she runs into Natalya again and tells her off one good time and that mother of hers should just fall off a cliff. Great chapter. I'm sad to see this story nearing it's end. I've really enjoyed it so far.

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Date: June 25 2014

Title: Sasha: The Wallflower

What a great story. Bravo!!! I would have liked to have seen if Dmitri's father ever accepted Sasha into the family or not but other than that, it was awesome!!!

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Date: October 24 2014

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Paris finds herself on a deserted highway out of gas.  Little did she know that her life would be forever changed after that.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways, Love In Hard Times
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 558
Read Count: 82570
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: August 27 2013


Title: Chance Encounter

I just caught up with this story over the past couple days and it was great. Hopefully Billy will leave that firm, take Norman with him and those two have the largest firm in Richmond. Those racist old dudes should suffer. I'm hoping Paris can get over her condition so that they can have a functional sex life and here's to many kids. Great story, looking forward to the other epilougues. 

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Date: August 17 2013

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This is the sequel to Tess and Jay; they have been married for two years now, and are happy. However with Tess being very busy all of the time and Jay trying to make a name for himself in the company, sometimes they just don't have the time to be as close as they use to be. Combined with this and Jay's new beautifual assistant, Tess' old insecurities are beginning to creep in. Can this marriage survive the strain?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 52947
Read Count: 28572
Published: November 29 2013
Updated: January 18 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Only Symptoms of the Disease...

Jay is working on my last nerve. He is basically accusing Tess of making him feel insecure. She didn't make him stay in the company. She can't help that she makes more money than him. He married and ambitious woman and now he wants to be a big ass baby because he can't accept it. It's time for Jay to be a man. Quit the company and pursue his own dreams. I never thought it was a good idea for them to be at the same job anyway. Just too much of a conflict of interest. I think once he feels like he's accomplished something on his own, he can stop being such a whiner. Tess should have set him straight instead of shutting him out because knowing Jay, he's probably going to hold this over her head too. They both need to grow up. 

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Date: December 03 2013

Title: Chapter 20: Achieving a Happy Ending Despite All That Has Happened...

Though I still think Jay deserved to kick rocks, I appreciate you sticking with this story to the end. And Tess got her happy ending which is great. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Looking forward to more stories from you and will definitely be giving you ideas. 

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Date: January 18 2014

Title: Chapter 17: A Table For Two and Only Two...

I still think Jay is a douche but will see what happens next. Thanks for the update. Looking forward to more. 

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Date: January 13 2014

Title: Chapter 13: Calm After the Storm...

Jay continues to be the king of dumbasses. Did that fool just try to justify why he cheated. Screw him. Tess has a lot of faults but this weak ass man cheated on her with the one woman who he knew would hurt her. Had he handled his business and nipped things in the bud with that tramp Toni in the first place none of this would be happening but he wanted his "ego stroked" and apparently his dick too. He's incredibly weak and Tess deserves a real man to hold her down. So what if he tells her she's perfect all the time, words are meaningless, actions speak loud and clear and his action show him to be a trifling son of a bitch. Maybe there will be hope for him when he can stop making excuses for what he did. A real man would have asserted how he felt when things were going wrong but instead he cheats not only phycially but emotionally. An affair isn't just sex, he emotionally cheated on her with Toni. That is the ultimate betrayal.  

I'm hoping Tess does to him what he did to her and not talk to him for six months and let him sit and wallow in his misery before or if she decides to take him back. I wouldn't mind seeing a new man enter the mix. A good man. A real man. One who is sure of himself. One who will treat like she deserves. I bet if weak ass Jay see him, maybe it will inspire him to grow a pair. However it ends, I just want Tess to be happy. I'm still rooting for her. I hope she can have another baby and carry it to term.

As for that damn Eric. Tears won't help now when people find out he was part of that set up with that trick Toni. He needs to have a special kind of ass beating. He and Toni deserve to have their entire lives destroyed. They set out to deliberately destroy a marriage. They are sociopaths and deserve to rot in the fiery pits of the hottest hell. 

 

Great update. Please Please Please don't leave us hanging. This story is so good. 

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Date: January 10 2014

Title: Chapter 11: A Series of Bad Choices...

Sorry, Jay doesn't get a pass because Tess kept secrets. He too made vows and he broke them. He didn't just kind of cheat. He flat out cheated. If you let a ho put your dick in her mouth you're a cheater. And actually what he did with Tess was way worse than what she did to him and here's why, when Tess cheated a) technically they weren't really sure what they were, they were seeing each other but Tess was still unsure about making a full committment b) Tess has history with Eric and clearly has emotional issues when it comes to him c) Tess didn't sleep with Eric out of spite. Jay went out with Toni to spite Tess no matter what lame excuse he came up with to satisfy himself. He did it deliberately and set out to cheat. He knew what would happen if he went out with that trick. And for that reason, I'm team Tess.

 

I'm all about her giving his sorry ass walking papers. I hope she gets the help she needs and realize that not all men are super douches like Eric and Jay. Jay is a colossal piece of shit. Die Jay. Die. I hope Tess gets better and I hope she finds the love she deserves. Even if she gets back with Jay, I hope he does a lot of groveling because he's lower than R. Kelly in my opinion. 

 

That all being said, the fact that you've got me cussing in this review should tell you how talented you are to stir up these emotions in me. Looking forward to the next chapter. 

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Date: January 08 2014

Title: Chapter 10: Disastrous Therapy Sessions and Illicit Exchanges at Coffee Shops...

With each chapter I like Jay less and less. Seriously, at this point I'm not even rooting for them to be together and here's why, first I think most people have been stupid for love at one time and sometimes we do things that lead to lots of regret. An abortion isn't an easy thing and obviously it's been on Tess's heart for a long time. There are a lot of psychological ramifications involved in having an abortion. I can't say Tess is stupid or she's evil for what she did, perhaps in that time of her life she didn't feel she could handle a child without its father's support. Whatever her reason it happened. 

As for her not telling Jay about the miscarraiges, should have told him but she probably wasn't far enough along in the first place. Perhaps she planned on telling him in a romantic or exciting way and then lost it. Maybe she didn't want him to be disappointed, maybe she was scared he'd think less of her. That's got to make her feel like she's being punished for aborting her first child. Jay was the one who pushed her to go back to counseling to iron out their issue and when she finally tells him what's been heavy on her heart, he blows up and storms out the room like prick. And apparently he's not over her being with Eric, when as she pointed out they were barely together. It's apparent he really hasn't forgiven her or else he would keep throwing it in her face and he has more than once.

 

AND to put the icing on the cake, he take Hoe-ni's card? Seriously? Thatw as the ultimate sign of disrespect and he did it purposely because his feelings are hurt. And when Tess finds that card, and I know she will, he'll blow it off like he did before. He still doesn't think it's a big deal how he led Hoe-ni on in the first place because he wanted his "ego stroked"

Screw Jay. I hope he gets hit by a bus.

Thank you for another entertainig update. 



Author's Response:

When I read "Screw Jay. I hope he gets hit by a bus." I died...lol...

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Date: January 06 2014

Title: Chapter 15: Apples and Assholes...

I'm so happy to see Tess's  growth. I'm so proud of her. She has really matured and I'm happy she's doing her. 

As for that low down dirty sack of dog doo doo Jay. He hasn't changed a bit. Not only is he still a big fat liar, he's dating a racist. First of all, a racist says racists stuff all the time around the people they think they can get away with it to. I can't believe that's the first racial slur she said around Jay and if it is, he needs to set her straight, tell her off and kick her to the curb. He hasn't changed since Toni. Not at all. How he handles this chick Jamie will be a true test to whether he's worthy to have Tess back until then, he and K K Katie can both go kick rocks. 

Damn Toni is dead? Wasn't expecting that.  I think a worse punishment would have been to make her really suffer and have a come to jesus moment but at least she won't be around to cause more problems. I think Eric got off way way too easy. He still is owed a super ass whooping. Hope his new girl gives him a super STD and his dick falls off.

 

Please update soon. I'm like a junky who needs her fix!!!

 

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Date: January 11 2014

Title: Chapter 16: Fantasies and Process Servers...

Jay will never ever learn. He gets more stupid as each chapter progresses. He doesn't love Jamie but he's stringing her along.  I sincerly hope she wakes up and leaves his ass too.  I'm so glad Tess is finding her happiness. I'm keeping my fingers crossed that she finds another man. An Alpha. One who knows how to handle business because Jay is garbage. I don't know if you plan on doing a new story for Tess and her new love if you decide to go in that direction but I just can't see her and Jay together. He's still making excuses after all this time? Kinda cheated? And then he has Jamie go apologize? He should have apologize and been a man and handled his business but he's not a man, he's dirt on the bottom of Tess's shoe. He's no better than Eric. I hope Jasmine makes a call and Jay gets the Toni treatment. he sucks so bad.

Go Tess Go! Find you a man. A sexy Henry Cavill, Alpha man who will throw down in the bedroom. A man who is your equal professionally and a man who will be faithful and stand up for his woman instead of letting his woman do his dirty work. 

 

Thanks for the update. Anxiously anticipating the next chapter. 

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Date: January 12 2014

Title: Chapter 4: The Sting of Reality...

Jay is pissing me off so bad. He was warned by Tess and Jasmine and even his Mama told him he was being a dumbass but he willfully ignored it. I'm wondering if he ignored Tess on purpose because he's still holding a grudge over what happened between her and Eric. As soon as Jasmine discovered them he should have told Tess but he had to be hard heard. He's getting on my nerves and while I don't agree that she should have slapped him because people should keep their hands to themselves, but HE needs to be the one to put Toni in her place. HE needs to be the one to set boundaries otherwise if he let's Tess handle things then he's not doing his job as a man and who's to say it won't happen again when the next floozy comes along. Jay sucks. But I love this story. Can't wait for the next update.

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Date: December 01 2013

Title: Chapter 12: And Everything Went Dark....

Oh Tess, please live. You deserve to know your worth and you deserve to be loved by someone who won't make excuses for their bad behavior. And I take back what I said about Jay being a collosal piece of shit. He is The King pile of shit. I hate this guy so much right now. He claims he loves her but instead of trying to figure her where about he's sitting at home feeling sorry for himself. He needs to pull a Kobe Bryant and start begging. He'd at least show a little concern that she just up an disappeared. I just can't with him. I'm still rooting for Tess to have her happy ending because I swear that woman has been through so much that it just seems all that she went through would have no meaning if she doesn't find some measure of happiness whether it be with someone new or with Jay after he has atoned that is.

As for the video someone sent her, I think Hoe-ni and Eric are in cahoots. It just seems way too convenient that Eric shows up when he does. I beg you on my hands and knees to please let those two get what they deserve. I think Tess should make good on her threat and have that trick blackballed all over the state. As for Eric, he needs an ass whupping so bad. 

This chapter almost broke me. I don't know if I can take any more bad news, it's really causing me anxiety. But it's so good I can't stop reading. Please don't keep  us waiting too long for the next update. 

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Date: January 09 2014

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In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91991
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Happy New Year?

So happy they are together again. I just hope Sabrina doesn't go all Fatal Attraction on them, but I have a feeling she's going to use Anthony's family to get him to talk to her. She is turning out to be psycho. I really hope Anthony puts his family in their place otherwise he doesn't deserve her. Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

As suspected, you haven't seen the last of Sabrina.  How crazy she does and doesn't get and whether Anthony is ready to take on his meddlesome family remains to be seen.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Happy2bNappy!

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Date: February 17 2015

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

Oh wow, now I can almost understand why Richard treated Anthony the way he did only almost because Anthony was an innocent child and if he didn't want to raise another man's child, he should have divorced his wife at the time instead of mentally abusing an innocent child. As for Anothy's mother, wow. She's got some damn nerve. Once Anthony finds out his mother better not open her damn mouth about how he should run his life when she had the nerve to try to pawn another man's baby off on her husband. I bet she thinks she got away with it but for some reason Richard must have forgiven her. Maybe he was in love with her at one point and thought he could stay in the relationship with her but as Anthony got old, he was a constant reminder of her infidelity. That could possibly be why Richard is such a selfish douchebag, but then again he might have already been a douche because he got a vasectomy without telling his wife. That woman can have several seats. She's worse than the hood rats on Maury. This will hurt Anthony, not because Richard isn't his father but because his mother is a self righteous liar but this will make it easier for him to tell her to go kick rocks. I also hope he finds his real father and forms a real father son bond. This chapter was amazing. I love this story so much. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Happy2bNappy!  So happy you're enjoying the story!

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Date: February 28 2015

Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Losing Another Talerico

Wow, those Talericos are something else. That cousin called Natalia a racial slur as if it was nothing. Anthony or Rich owes that dude a pop in the mouth. Joelle, I don't know how you do it but you keep my emotions on high alert every chapter. I'm begging you, please show how everyone reacts to what Mercede did, because she desevers all the scorn thrown on Natalia and Anthony. Please have Rich tell everyone that Natalia was actually married to Richard and not just some whore he slept with as Richard it making it out to be. They need to know Richard's duplicity as well. I want Richard and Mercede to suffer for all the pain they're responsible for causing in Anthony's life. I need Anthony to give this racist group of a-holes the cuss out of their lives before throwing up the dueces and exiting from all their lives forever. All Anthony needs is Natalia and those babies, and Rich, I hope he can forgive Rich. Maybe one day he can forgive his mother but he should let her suffer for at least a year and if she doesn't respect Natalia, then he needs to cut her out of his life. I also hope Anthony knocks Richard the f out. He was dead wrong for what he did. Dead wrong. 

Joelle, you did the damn thing with this chapter. I loved it. Now I'm going to have to ask you for more. Please hurry and update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, the Talericos are pretty repulsive as a whole.  Ant and Rich are two of the few good apples and each other's rock, but the way things went down is sure to test their relationship.  You can pretty much rule out them never speaking again because their bond was just too strong for it to be completely severed over this.  Will they get back to where they used to be is another matter.  Forgiving Mercede is going to be a tall order too because, unlike Rich, she has a habit of not respecting Ant's decision and owning her mistakes. 

Your requests are duly noted and will appear in some form or fashion in the upcoming chapters.  Thanks so much for the wonderful review, Happy2bNappy!

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Date: March 30 2015

Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - The Bridges We Burn

Really Richard? he's got a lot of damn nerve. All he wants is an apology from Anthony like he's the injured party. I know that Nat doesn't like the family to fight but I'm about tired of her trying to be the diplomat. Richard deserves that ass whoopin he has coming and she has no business standing in the way of it. All she needs to do right now is love and support Anthony and take care of dem babies she's carrying. They say in church don't block the blessing well Nat a lot of people would be blessed if Richard got jacked up. I now I certainly would.  As for Mercede what the heck does she think she'll accomplish by trying to talk to Anthony? Does she think she can still manipulate him? That boat has saled. And what's up with the Talerico's trying to get in contact with Ant? Please let Ant find out what they did to Nat because they're all still owed a cuss out. Why hasn't anyone gotten their comeuppance yet? Mercede and Richard seem unscathed. In fact those two are trying to figure out how they can turn this around to make themselves look like the victims. These people frustrate me so much. Can we have a little karmic justice in the next chapter? Pretty please? Ant needs to know that Richard assualted Nat and the Talericos reveled in it. Richard needs to be finished Mortal Kombat style. FINISH HIM!! Mecede deserves a permanent yeast infection. I hope she dies alone with cats and when she dies the cats eat her face. 

I hope Ant can find out what happened to David and maybe he has some family he can connect with. It would be great for the twins or triplets to meet their palestinian family. I hope Ant can forgive Rich soon, he's suffering too. 

Again another great chapter. You like playing with my emotions don't you JJ? Yay! I started a movement!! We wants twins! We want twins! We want tiwins! LOL 

 



Author's Response:

Natalia has chosen to keep quiet about Richard manhandling her, not strictly for the sake of keeping the peace, but to avoid seeing Anthony go to prison for Richard's murder.  As I warned, Richard, Mercede, and the terrible Talerico are not going to be maimed or wake up bald and penniless in the gutter with fleas and some incurable disease.  Granted, that would be very satisfying, but not realistic or necessary.

Mercede has, for all intents and purposes, lost her son.  And Richard has lost the woman he loves to the son he mistreated, and they're both happy and completely committed to one another with a significant number of supporters in Richard's very own family--the same family he ruined his relationship with her for.  For a mother and man as in love with Nat and himself as Richard is, there is no worse fate. 

Rich and Ant will find a way to work it out.  At the end of the day, Richard is Rich's father, and even if Ant can't respect the man, he can respect the relationship.

After all your campaigning and chanting, I might have twins.

Thanks for the thoroughly entertaining review, Happy2bNappy!

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Date: April 10 2015

Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

YAY!! My campaign worked!!! Whoot! Twins! Oh yeah!!! That's so great. And the best part is, Mercede will never see them. Or maybe she will and Nat and Ant will tell her to fuck off. I'm still rooting for Richard to get hit by a car. At least get herpes or something. But I'm satisfied. So sad this story has come to an end. Looking forward to the epilogue. Looking forward to Richard's story! YAY!



Author's Response:

Thanks Happy2bNappy!  Glad you enjoyed it.  Epilogue in the works.

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Date: April 13 2015

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - While the Cat's Away...

I just started reading this story last week and I'm finally caught up. Wow, Anthony you ain't shit. If he ends up with Sabrina, then he deserves every bit of unhappiness coming his way. He doesn't love her and Sabrina knows he doesn't love her either but I guess she's willing to settle for whatever he's willing to send her way. They're both sad and pathetic. At least Natalia is finally getting her stuff together. Hopefully Anthony wakes up and does the right thing and stands up to his family and fights for Natalia who clearly still loves him, otherwise, he's the punk of all punks. I hope Natalia and Rich don't end up sleeping together. I really hope Natalia gets a happy ending whether it be with Anthony or someone new because she's been through so much already. And the way Anthony has been acting lately, I'm leaning toward someone new who will make her forget about all those jokers from her past

 

I love this story! Great job!



Author's Response:

You might very well get your wish for Nat to move on to greener pastures uninhabited by Talericos, especially if Anthony keeps waffling.  We'll soon see.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Happy2bNappy!  So glad to have you along for the ride!

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Date: February 01 2015

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - While the Cat's Away...

I just started reading this story last week and I'm finally caught up. Wow, Anthony you ain't shit. If he ends up with Sabrina, then he deserves every bit of unhappiness coming his way. He doesn't love her and Sabrina knows he doesn't love her either but I guess she's willing to settle for whatever he's willing to send her way. They're both sad and pathetic. At least Natalia is finally getting her stuff together. Hopefully Anthony wakes up and does the right thing and stands up to his family and fights for Natalia who clearly still loves him, otherwise, he's the punk of all punks. I hope Natalia and Rich don't end up sleeping together. I really hope Natalia gets a happy ending whether it be with Anthony or someone new because she's been through so much already. And the way Anthony has been acting lately, I'm leaning toward someone new who will make her forget about all those jokers from her past

 

I love this story! Great job!

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Date: February 01 2015

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - While the Cat's Away...

I just started reading this story last week and I'm finally caught up. Wow, Anthony you ain't shit. If he ends up with Sabrina, then he deserves every bit of unhappiness coming his way. He doesn't love her and Sabrina knows he doesn't love her either but I guess she's willing to settle for whatever he's willing to send her way. They're both sad and pathetic. At least Natalia is finally getting her stuff together. Hopefully Anthony wakes up and does the right thing and stands up to his family and fights for Natalia who clearly still loves him, otherwise, he's the punk of all punks. I hope Natalia and Rich don't end up sleeping together. I really hope Natalia gets a happy ending whether it be with Anthony or someone new because she's been through so much already. And the way Anthony has been acting lately, I'm leaning toward someone new who will make her forget about all those jokers from her past

 

I love this story! Great job!

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Date: February 01 2015

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Impatience is a Virtue

Go Rich!!! Finally Anthony got his ish together but I won't believe it 100 percent unless he 1) gets rid of Sabrina once and for all in no uncertain terms and 2) tell his judgmental family to kick rocks unless they learn to respect his woman. Natalia on the other hand has got to stop eing so darn wishy washy. She needs to proudly proclaim him as her man and get those restraining orders to keep Richard and Barbara away. I loved this chapter so much. Yay! More please. 



Author's Response:

I agree that both one and two need to take place, but may prove much easier said than done.  Anthony's family has gotten a taste of Sabrina and now they want more.  

Nat, more than likely, will never get those restraing orders.  She's just not that hardcore with it comes to people she loves or used to, not matter how much she wants to be.  Then again, she might not have to worry about either of them popping up.  More on that next chapter. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Happy2bNappy!!!

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Date: February 04 2015

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Four's a Tough Crowd

Thomas was begging for a knuckle sandwich and I have a feeling he'll be the easiest to deal with out of the family Natalia hasn't met yet. After Anthony and Nat have gone through, I hope they don't allow his family to drive a wedge in between them. They deserve to be happy. Update soon please. I love this story. 



Author's Response:

Lol @ the knuckle sandwich!  You're right about Thomas being one of the easiest to deal with.  The others can be beasts.  Hopefully, Nat and Ant can withstand the charge.  Hopefully...  Update posted.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Happy2bNappy!

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Date: February 22 2015

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The One That Got Away

Oh Joelle, I'm throwing myself at the mercy of your kindness and goodness, please let the baby be real, in fact, please let it be twins, a boy and a girl cause let's face it, Natalia's not getting any younger and I read somewhere that a person has a greater chance of having twins the older they get. Js. Besides, after all those two have gone through and probably will go through with his disapproving family and crazy Sabrina, they deserve to be happy. I think Sabrina will try to cause more trouble but might back off when she finds out about the babies, I doubt someone like her will want to raise someone else's biracial kids. I can see Anthony's mother giving Natalia a hard time but  I think she will behave when the babies( I hope babies, lol) come because she wants to be in her grandkids life. She may never like Natalia but she'll behave for the sake of her grandbabies. As for Anthony's father Richard, he can go kick rocks. I hope he remains bitter until the end and dies from psoriosis. Another great update.



Author's Response:

I love how you took that twins idea and ran with it.  Sabrina is still very much in love with Anthony (or thinks she is), so a couple biracials babies might not be too much for her to handle.  And you're right that Anthony's mother would likely be softened by the propect of not getting to see her grandbabies (grandbabies? Now you got me doing it) if there are any babies to by had. 

No need to wait for cirrhosis to take Richard out (Lol).  When he finds out about Nat and Ant and the pregnancy, he'll more than likely have a coronary. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Happy2bNappy!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24 2015

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