Penname: Happy2bNappy [Contact]

Real name: Shay

Member Since: December 18 2009

Membership status: Member

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Okay, my stories weren't gone for long. The muse came a knockin' plus, I feel happy again. :-D




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Consequence by Joelle Jax
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Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91991
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015

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Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

Oh no, Natalia doesn't need anymore stress, she has to take care of the those babies. (Yep, I said babies. LOL) I think Anthony has the right to know and if finds out Natalia knew and didn't tell him he's going to be so hurt. I never thought I'd say this but I kind of felt a little sympathy for Richard but not a lot, he shouldn't have left a good wife for that skank Mercede (yeah I said it) She's got a lot of nerve to try to perpetuate this fraud all these years. And if the people in Philly find out what she did, she'll probably be shunned and she knows it. I hope Anthony lets her have it. Richard is still an ass though. He's only holding on to the secret to get back at Natalia. Gosh this story is playing with my emotions but I love it so much. Thanks for the update. 



Author's Response:

Lol @ you and those babies.  Richard is definitely a villain, but, as with most villains, at one time he was also a victim.  He deserves a little sympathy, but not a pardon or a pass.  And Mercede is just as guilty as he is, if not more so. 

Sorry for puttin' you through, Happy2bNappy (sort of ; ).  The torture won't last forever.  The story is drawing to a close.  Glad to hear you've enjoyed it thus far.  Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

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Date: March 02 2015
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Friends and Foes

Oh my God! Barbara makes me just want to fight her all up in the face Where te hell does she get off. It looks like she hasn't learned nor will she ever. It seems like she with the express purpose of shaming Natalia into forgiving her. I just want her to suffer a little. Could you please make that happen Joelle. I need her to come to a realizationthat she screwed up like Richard did. But honestly, I'm not sure if she has a consciene if she wold bring a baby to sister's house after her loss. Maybe there is hope for Natalia's parents if they want to see those babies (I'm still hoping, lol) but I don't think there is any for Barbara, she's a narcissict. I just want Nat to cuss her out one last time before inviting her out of her life for good. 

Sad to hear about Pop Pop dying but I think maybe Nat should tell Anthony the truth before its too late because he's going to be so mad at her and she doesn't need the stress. She needs to be nurturing the babies. If he does find out, there will definitely be more drama but hopefully he will see that she did it because she loves him and not for selfish reasons like Richard. I think he actually might even be relieved that Richard isn't his father and turn on his mother. She deserves it for being a liar all these years.

One final request, please do a story for Takara and Rich, I think Takara can put Rich in his place and she won't take his crap. She'll whip him in to shape and it will give his extended family heart palpitations because another black woman is in the family. haha, that story will be epic. Thanks for another great and emotional update. 



Author's Response:

Lol @ wanting to fight Barbara all up in her face!  Priceless.  You're right about there being no hope for her.  Nat knows that and has no intention of inviting her back into her life.  Whether Barbara realizes it or not, that dismissal at the door was goodbye.

SMH at you and those babies.  And now you've recruited Yuukiyanagi (Cassius Noir) to your team.  Y'all ain't tryin' give Natalia's poor virgin uterus a break. 

Telling Anthony the truth now might not be the best idea--at least not in Natalia's mind.  More on that next chapter.  But whenever it happens, Mercedes will not go unscathed.

I've got a couple requests for a Takara and Rich story, and y'all are starting to make me second guess my "no new stories" rule.  *Sigh*  I'm such a pushover.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Happy2bNappy!

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Date: March 03 2015
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Friends and Foes

I already left a review but another thought occured to me. Why do I get the feeling that the clueless Sabrina will show up to the funeral. If that happens, I'm going to need Anthony to let that chick have it. Nothing is more unattractive than a woman who can't take a hint. 



Author's Response:

You get that feeling because you know Sabrina well.  Thanks Happy2bNappy!

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Date: March 04 2015
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Flight Plan

The longer they wait to tell Anthony about Richard not being his father, the more hurt and betrayed he'll feel. I swear Mercede isn't worth sh*t. She needs to tighten up before she's kicked out of Anthony's life permently. I have a feeling he'll probably not want to talk to her for a very very very long time which is why she needs to tighten with the way she treats Natalia, especially if she wants to see those babies. I bet the family in Philly will shun her too and it's no more than she deserves. Skank. 

I'm already anticipating the epic cuss out coming Sabrina's way when she shows up and I know she will because she has no shame whatsoever. I think Nat should fly back to Philly with him so she can be that moral support Anthony will need because he did love his Pop Pop. 

Well, yet another excellent update and well worth the wait. Thank you!!

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Date: March 13 2015
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

OMG!!!! Those last two chapters made me catch a damn case. Are you serious Richard? If he hurts dem babies....oh lord. I can already see it now. Anthony and Rich are going to run out and see the commotion and Anthony is going to give Richard the ass whopping he has been begging for and Natalia won't be able to stop him. I bet Rich will help him lay into that ass. And that's when Richard will drop the bomb out of pure spite. He's going to tell Anthony he's not his son and then hopefully people will turn on Mercede as well.

Mercede....whooo child there's a special place in hell for that woman. That whole Philadelphia crew except Theresa are a bunch of creeps and Anthony needs to cut every single one of them out of his life even his mother is she don't get her crap together. Screw them. These chapters made my blood pressure escalate and I don't know how in the world Natalia didn't lay into every single one of those bitches. 

You see how passionate I am about this story? LOL,girl you did the damn thing. Great updates!!!! 

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Date: March 15 2015
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

I had one more thing to say. Those bastards heard Richard assualting her and they did nothing to help her Are you kidding me? Those people are evil and I hope Anthony gives them all what is coming to them. 

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Date: March 15 2015
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - The Cruelties of Fate

Oooooooohhhhh, this chapter made me so mad. I am furious!! Really Mercede? She bold face told him that she didn't care about his emotional abuse. I was thinking maybe in her head she thouht she was doing the right thing but she not only allowed her child to be abused, she kept him from his real father. Are you kidding me? This woman (and I use that word lightly with her) needs to be kicked right in the vagina. I was thinking that maybe Ant could eventually forgive her but screw her. I hope he never forgives her. Cut her ass off. At this point, she's an even bigger villain than Richard. Could you please show her getting her comeuppance? Pretty please with sugar on top? Richard's too. I don't know how Thomas will react to this news or whether he will still treat Anthony like a brother but he kind of sucked too so he can go to hell too, but please let Anthony eventually forgive Rich. Maybe Nat can foster that between them because they may not be related by blood, they are brothers. All those Talericos need to go to hell, but I have a feeling Mercede will feel their wrath, not for what she did to Anthony. They don't give a dame about Ant but they will turn on her because she betrayed Richard, and Richard is one of their own. I hate these people so much and these aren't even real people. But you have a way with words that brings these characters to life.

I really really really really really really really hope Anthony meets his real father and maybe gets him a Visa so he can meet his twin grandbabies. (LOL, yep, not giving up on the twin thing, I would ask for triplets but I don't want to push it, lol) I hope he is able to establish a loving relationship with his father and maybe his father has other children Ant could meet and his new family is welcoming and loving and welcomes Natalia. 

I hope every house inhabited by a Talerico burns down to the ground( except Rich of course). I hope Mercede gets what's coming to her. I hope Richard loses all his money on the stock market. I hope the cousin who called Natalia a racial slur gets beat up by a bunch of brothas and the brothas get away with it. I hope they all suffer and get really bad halitosis. I hope they repell everyone who comes in contact with them, while Anthony and Nat continues to prosper. Fuck the Talericos. May their pasta never taste good again. 

Girl, see how passionate I am about your story. You did the damn thing again. Loved it loved it loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter. 

 



Author's Response:

Lol @ kicking Mercede in the vagina.  She definitely deserves it.  If Ant does find it in his heart to forgive her, it's sure to be many month down the line.  Him and Rich are bound to work things out much sooner.  They love each other too much to let Rich's mistake ruin them.  And Thomas has known for months that Ant isn't his biological brother.  Their relationship isn't likely to change unless Ant wants it to.

LMAO @ the plagues you wish upon the heads of Mercede, Richard, and the terrible Talericos.  I'm not sure they'll experience the level of retribution you and other readers are hoping for.  But they will not go unscathed.  

I can't with you and those twins/triplets.  You've started a movement.

As lovely as a father-son reunion would be, no one has heard from David in over twenty years.  I hate to say it, but there're aren't a lot of favorable ways to explain that. 

Thanks so much for sharing your insight, Happy2bNappy, and for the fantastic review!



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Lol @ kicking Mercede in the vagina.  She definitely deserves it.  If Ant does find it in his heart to forgive her, it's sure to be many month down the line.  Him and Rich are bound to work things out much sooner.  They love each other too much to let Rich's mistake ruin them.  And Thomas has known for months that Ant isn't his biological brother.  Their relationship isn't likely to change unless Ant wants it to.

LMAO @ the plagues you wish upon the heads of Mercede, Richard, and the terrible Talericos.  I'm not sure they'll experience the level of retribution you and other readers are hoping for.  But they will not go unscathed.  

I can't with you and those twins/triplets.  You've started a movement.

As lovely as a father-son reunion would be, no one has heard from David in over twenty years.  I hate to say it, but there're aren't a lot of favorable ways to explain that. 

Thanks so much for sharing your insight, Happy2bNappy, and for the fantastic review!



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Lol @ kicking Mercede in the vagina.  She definitely deserves it.  If Ant does find it in his heart to forgive her, it's sure to be many month down the line.  Him and Rich are bound to work things out much sooner.  They love each other too much to let Rich's mistake ruin them.  And Thomas has known for months that Ant isn't his biological brother.  Their relationship isn't likely to change unless Ant wants it to.

LMAO @ the plagues you wish upon the heads of Mercede, Richard, and the terrible Talericos.  I'm not sure they'll experience the level of retribution you and other readers are hoping for.  But they will not go unscathed.  

I can't with you and those twins/triplets.  You've started a movement.

As lovely as a father-son reunion would be, no one has heard from David in over twenty years.  I hate to say it, but there're aren't a lot of favorable ways to explain that. 

Thanks so much for sharing your insight, Happy2bNappy, and for the fantastic review!



Author's Response:

Lol @ kicking Mercede in the vagina.  She definitely deserves it.  If Ant does find it in his heart to forgive her, it's sure to be many month down the line.  Him and Rich are bound to work things out much sooner.  They love each other too much to let Rich's mistake ruin them.  And Thomas has known for months that Ant isn't his biological brother.  Their relationship isn't likely to change unless Ant wants it to.

LMAO @ the plagues you wish upon the heads of Mercede, Richard, and the terrible Talericos.  I'm not sure they'll experience the level of retribution you and other readers are hoping for.  But they will not go unscathed.  

I can't with you and those twins/triplets.  You've started a movement.

As lovely as a father-son reunion would be, no one has heard from David in over twenty years.  I hate to say it, but there're aren't a lot of favorable ways to explain that. 

Thanks so much for sharing your insight, Happy2bNappy, and for the fantastic review!

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Date: April 04 2015
Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

Dammit, why you gotta go and make a sista cry. That epilogue was amazing, this entire story was outstanding and ended the way it should have. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I'm so so glad Father and Son was reunited. I'm all up in my feels now. 



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks Happy2bNappy!  So glad to have had you along for the ride.  Thanks so much for reviewing and sharing your insight.  It is much appreciated.

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Date: May 03 2015
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Bruised Heart by keluboo
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 338]
Summary:

She was only a debt to him... or so she thought.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 26251
Read Count: 83552
Published: February 23 2014
Updated: July 08 2015

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Title: Chapter 14: Fourteen

Oh Amora, you had to see this coming as many times he took you without protection. But I do feel for her. She's trapped with an uncertain future and Noah hasn't exactly been upfront with what he wants from her. I think it's time for Noah to open up to at least put her mind at rest. Thanks so much for the frequent updates. Really enjoying them. 

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Date: January 22 2015
Title: Chapter 2: Two

I'm really excited to see where you plan on taking this story. Please don't wait too long to update. You have me on the edge of my seat.

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Date: February 25 2014
Title: Chapter 11: Eleven

Loving this story so much!! I love that Noah is so rough around the edges because once he realizes he's in love he's going to be that muc more protective of her. Please ignore the negative commenters and keep writing the story as you see fit. Can't wait for the next update!!!

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Date: January 18 2015
Title: Chapter 12: Twelve

I get the feeling that Noah knew Amora before she knew who he was and he had become obessessed with her. I think he's in love and doesn't know how to express himself to tell her how he feels besides sexing her up. I think Amora is scared to fall in love with him because then she's afraid to love because of her irresponsible father. I have a feeling Amora is going to do soething crazy before she gives in to Noah. Love this story. 

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Date: January 19 2015
Title: Chapter 13: Thirteen

I knew it! All that sex without protection was bound to make her preggars. I'm really scared, she'll try to run away again, and he'll keep her locked in the basement. Maybe it's time for Noah to open up so Amora can begin to feel something for him besides lust. I really love this story and can't wait to see what happens next. 

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Date: January 21 2015
Title: Chapter 15: Fifteen

Oh, more more more!! This story is so good. I think this is about as close as Noah is going to get to admitting his feeling for Amora. I'd love to know what his thoughts were when he saw his baby's heartbeat. Maybe the child will soften him some. Hope his brother doesn't start trouble. Question, Keluboo, what actors did you envision when you were writing these characters? I keep thinking of Jason Mamoa and Camille Winbush.

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Date: February 01 2015
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For Her Pleasure by Alexandria Glass
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Banner by: Sienna Gray

 

All Camryn Clifford wanted to do was live out her dream. She had made it out of her dead end town but her old life wanted to pull her back in.

Richard Hammonds wanted Camryn and he would have her. He has skeletons in his closet that he needs to keep from her to win her.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 68991
Read Count: 57815
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: May 24 2015

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Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Welcome back! I missed this story. I can't wait until Annabelle finally gets hers. She sucks so bad. I'm glad to see Camryn and Richard connecting on an emotional level. They're sharing personal aspects of their lives and that's a positive sign. Love this story. 

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Date: March 30 2015
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I missed this story! I hope Annabelle gets the hint and doesn't cause anymore trouble but she probably will. Camryn's mother isn't going to like Richard but oh well, that's her problem. Why do I get the feeling her mother is going to invite that fool Trey to Christmas dinner or some craziness like that. I guess her mother is more interested in being right than having a relationship with her daughter and Camryn may have to lay down the law. Love this story. Please don't take too long to update. 

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Date: May 08 2015
Sugar Baby Love by Jonara2010
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Summary:

Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.

Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.

What happens when both of these two get together?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 50520
Read Count: 111872
Published: June 24 2014
Updated: August 25 2017

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Title: Chapter 17: Movers and Antics

Oh Jonara, you're killing me. Killing me I tell ya! It's a good thing Jamison realizes the timeline is off if Jen is saying she's four months pregnant But I can see some problems with that nut. I hope Jamison nips it in the bud. He and Elise deserve to be happy. Nice update. 

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Date: February 24 2015
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COLORLESS by marchpisces92
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215322
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 51: Epilogue

The Baxters should all die off. They suck so bad. And rotten to the end. I'm glad that Camille said good riddence to those jerks. Glad Savannah and Ethan are together and happy for the whole family. Nice ending.

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Date: October 26 2015
Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 43

I hope Camille doesn't get the test but I bet she will wonder what if because she's too good a person. Maybe they'll find out that either she's not a match or she is a match but for some reason Mildred dies anyway. That family is disgusting. As for Savannah, I hope Ethan goes to her Bat Mitzvah, or maybe they can change the date so more people can come to Savannah's party. It would be hilarious if people say Chelsea's party was boring and Savannah's was better. I'm sure Chelsea has some hateful ass parents for her to behave like that. I hope everyone gets what's coming to them. 

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Date: September 29 2015
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24

The Baxters are rotten to the core. I hope nothing but bad befalls on that family. Camille is better off without them but after all Camille and Hiram have gone through, can they hit the lottery or something or inherit lots of money and do good for the commuity while the Baxters crash and burn? I think it's only fair to allow Camille to see their downfall and knowing the Baxters, they will probably never be ask for forgiveness but I'd like them to regret what they did to her. Uhh, they make me so mad!!

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Date: December 05 2014
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25

Can something good finally happen for them? Please?

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Date: December 15 2014
Title: Chapter 29: Secound Act

Looking forward to the next part. From your description, maybe one of Hiram's family members is passing. How funny if that turns out to be the case. As fair as the Baxters, they are despicable people, and I really hope they come back into Camille's life to see that she's way better without them and that they do need her for something. I want them to regret what they did. Also can't wait for Debbie to get hers. 

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Date: December 15 2014
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 36

So glad Debbie is dead. She needed to go. I hope the police has rounded up the rest of those klansmen.  Could Camille's family that abandoned her get their comeuppance. They shouldn't get away with what they did to her. I hope all of Hiram's family burns in the hottest pits of hell. They suck so bad. It would be awesome if Camille gets pregnant. Looking forward to and update. 

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Date: May 08 2015
Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 39

Glad their family is now complete. I really hope, Camille's birth family get what's finally coming to them. What they did to her was heartless. 

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Date: August 14 2015
Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 41

I had hoped maybe some of Camille's biological family would have a little contrition after what they did but I can see they are still rotten to the core. Screw them. If that old lady dies, it's because she was meant to. Screw that family. Don't do it Camille. Don't allow those vipers anywhere near your children because they would try to poison them and put things in their head that isn't healthy. Her two sisters are bitter bitches and I hope they rot. Stay strong Camille. You don't owe them a thing. 

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Date: August 22 2015

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