Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Out in the Open
Haha, that was epic! I'm glad my review inspired you. I giggled when I saw what I read the put the pipe down part. Crackhead Margie got what she deserved. I wouldn't even be surprised if she knew Raymond was going to have rape Ophelia. She probably facilitated it so she could get her hand on Raymond's money. Kind of makes me wonder why she even bothered fighting to regain custody of Ophelia is jail. Well, good riddance to her.
Alicia is hilarious. Am I bad for laughing when Kevin admitted to not having a big penis? Is it as small as Max's from The Perfect Fit? If it's that small, homegirl may have a bit of a problem. But hey, if Kevin has a talented tongue she may give him a pass. Can we get pictures of those two?
I hope everything is okay with Abigail. I'd hate for something to happen to her. Benny has been through too much already and it would be so tragic if he were to lose his mother.
Raymond, man oh man. What can I say about him. He has no regrets. And his reputation is ruined but I guess I can't get past him sleeping with an eleven year old. I know if I had a daughter and a grown ass man sleeps with her when she's underage especially that young, I don't even know if he'd make it to prison because like Miss Sophia said, "I'll kill him dead!" Raymond seems to be getting a happy ending when he clearly doesn't deserve on. Ick.
The only people who need a happy ending is Bennie, Abbie, Keshia, Jacob, Alicia, Kevin, Justice and yes Ophelia. I know some people think she's sick, stupid and just as evil as Raymond but I gotta say, how well off in the head would the people who are saying that be if they were raised by a selfish drug addicted mother, was in foster care for a while which that in itself would scare some children, then given back to the crack addicted mother and then taken advantage of by a man while she's still a baby. Has a baby and loves it because its really the first constant in her life who truly loves her for pure reasons, to have that child taken away after a year and then moving from one section eight project to another. Let's see how well your mental health holds up to that. I think its pretty remarkable that Ophelia isn't in jail or a victim of the system herself. So yes, that's why I'm still rooting or Ophelia.
This story is so good and I look forward to every update. You never dissappoint. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Who said that Raymond will have a happy ending? I certainly didn't. LOL Hold onto your seat, I may have to go hide after the next chapter.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed
Date: June 10 2013