Penname: tcarey [Contact]

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Member Since: December 19 2009

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[Reviews - 92]
Summary:

Porter had been gone for while, traveling and moving on with his life. His father’s illness brings him home, but what he didn’t expect was to be drawn back in by the reason why he left—her.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14802
Read Count: 11212
Published: December 28 2013
Updated: April 12 2016


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

So, I am guessing that Travis is Porter son and Avery never told Porter she was pregnant. Hudson is the man that was with Avery throughout her entire pregnancy. Hudson and Porter both was in love with Avery and have some unfinished business they both need to take care. Well, let the fireworks begin.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: April 12 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

The next generation has arrived, Chloe Piers is the very smart and beautiful daughter of Tess and Jay who is now 13 years old and entering high school. Maia Ellington is her very best friend, and they share a friendship just as close knit as their mothers do. Khalia Ellington is now a senior in high school who has lofty goals and a sharp tongue, and seems to take more after her uncle. Can our favorite characters, especially Jay, survive being parents to teenaged girls? And what lessons will Chloe, Maia and Khalia learn?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 8528
Read Count: 3085
Published: January 19 2014
Updated: February 03 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Meeting Chloe

in my opinion i think Chloe she be a bit older than 13 but this your story

 

 

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: January 19 2014

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[Reviews - 519]
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Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.

Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.

What happens when both of these two get together?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 50520
Read Count: 111872
Published: June 24 2014
Updated: August 25 2017


Title: Chapter 23: Underground

You left with a cliffhanger i don't like those. I want Jen and Mason to get what is coming to them in this chapter

 

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: November 06 2015

Title: Chapter 22: Birthday Woes

Good ending. You have to deal with Jen and the doctor that wants Elise. Those two need to be dealt with soon. Elise and Jaimie can be together finally. From reading this chapter is Elise pregnant along with the fact that she is dealing with the lost of her dad.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: October 17 2015

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Zoey Vance woke up in the hospital with no memory of her life before that moment. She doesn't even know her own name. Now she has to try and put the pieces of her life back together with the help of the man who hit her with his car that fateful night. As her memories start to return she wonders if she is better off not knowing who she really is. 

Brian Preston is consumed with guilt, the woman just ran out into the street with no warning. He coudln't avoid hitting her. He feels it is his personal responsibility to care for her until she can care for herself and moves her in with him and his fiance, Macy. As time wears on he starts to wonder if he wants her around to ease his guilt or if there aren't bigger emotions at play.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 77720
Read Count: 103526
Published: July 19 2014
Updated: October 14 2018


Title: Chapter 26: Uninvited Pt. 2

 I'm all for Zoey getting her memory back. Macy needs to be gone for good never to be heard of again.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: July 11 2017

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 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215324
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 43

Let Ethan go to Savannah bat mitzvah. It is more than  Mildred hating Camille skintone I think someone need to pay her a visit like a aunt perhaps or a cousin that look like Camille i think it time for Mildred skeletons to come out of the closet. So Camille can heal from the rejection

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: September 25 2015

Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 45

Please you have got write what happen to the baxters kids because they deserve to get their just reward for treating Camile so dirty

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: October 14 2015

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Working as a Home Health Aide and struggling to make ends meet. All Aries Washington wanted to do was prove the child she had three years ago, was in fact the son of Cameron Marino. She didn't have any delusions about them putting their differences aside and falling madly in love. Why would she? Cameron was engaged to her ex best friend Ambrosia, A.K.A Ms. Perfect. So imagine her surprise when he not only demands she moves in with him, but marry him too.

Aries had no idea that once she gave birth to her own little Marino, that, that meant she automatically belonged to the whole Marino family. With a group of people who take their strong family ties seriously, she's about to find out that once your in, there's no out. 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Marino Family
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 19092
Read Count: 53289
Published: May 14 2015
Updated: June 01 2015


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

Loving this story. I have read it five times already. Please come back and finish it.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: June 12 2018

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Dear Hopefullness

You have been gone far to long and I hope you are in a good please mentally since losing someone close to you. Please come back to complete your story. You are a good writer and this story need to be told and finish. Great hugs to you and thank you in advance. We do appreciate you for taking the time to write.

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Date: April 06 2020

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[Reviews - 200]
Summary:

Nathaniel Hendricks lived alone in his lakehouse on Lake Michigan spending his days remebering the young son he tracgically lost and the wife who left him when he needed her the most. The only thing that kept him remotely happy was the lake he lived by boating and fishing. He already failed as a father and a husband so why would God give him another chance?

Eden Wilson spent most of her life running from abuse and now as a young adult she finds herself running from an obsessive abusive ex-boyfriend. Not wanting the child she's carrying to be in danger she spends most of her pregancy running until she tries to get in contact with her uncle for help. Eden finds herself with her uncle's friend a lonely handsome man Nathaniel who gives her shelter in a snowstorm. 

Little did either of them know how close the baby would bring them together or how much this little bundle of joy would help them learn about secound chances.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 28561
Read Count: 37469
Published: June 16 2015
Updated: June 14 2016


Title: Chapter 11: FEBRUARY 23RD 1990

Wendy bares watching she is going off the deep end.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: July 27 2015

Title: Chapter 12: FEBRUARY 28TH 1990

Please let Walter Wendy and Charlotte get what is coming to them

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: July 28 2015

Title: Chapter 10: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

How about Wendy and her husband end up losing everything. How did Curtis actually know to find Eden.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: July 21 2015

Title: Chapter 14: MARCH 12TH 1990

Wendy is psycho she needs help. I wondering how many friends does Wendy have in that town besides Charlotte. I hope not everybody agrees with Wendy. Because the way she treats Nathanel is beyond crazy true Marty drown but it was not Nathaniel fault it was an accident. It time for Wendy and her husband to get their just desserts especially her husband.

 

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: September 26 2015

Title: Chapter 14: MARCH 12TH 1990

I hope you comeback to update this story. Wendy need to be dealt soon and so does her husband. I wondered do Wendy other friends keep in touch with her besides Charlotte. It would be great to see how Nat and Eden relationship evolves.

 

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: February 03 2016

Title: Chapter 15: REWRITE COMING SOON

Marchpisces92 thank you for revising this story. All of the plots sound fine to me. This is your story so however how you write it. I look forward to reading it again.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: June 15 2016

Title: Chapter 15: REWRITE COMING SOON

First of all keep the story as it was originally written with a few changes. Keep Curtis character dead never to come back.  Let Walter Wendy  and Charlotte get what is coming them both. 

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Date: June 25 2018

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Summary:

While returning home to Chicago from a business trip Anika Wallace and Hunter Sterling IV find themselves the only surviors of a plane crash on a South Pacific island. There's no telling when they'll make it back home or if they ever will make it back home for that matter. One thing is for sure they're going to have to learn how to get along their survival is depending on it.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 36
Completed:No
Word count: 54201
Read Count: 121653
Published: August 12 2015
Updated: March 02 2017


Title: Chapter 30: BACK AT HOME 6

I think it time for Sterling to start divorce proceedings against Corrine she is a total bitch. I just wish Anika grandmother was a little bit younger or that Anika had a cousin Sterling age that will appear in the story to care of the twins while their grandmother is in the hospital. I'm sorry marchpisces92 that was just a thought or idea that came to me.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: May 28 2016

Title: Chapter 11: DAY 12

I like the story line. But i don't like Hunter's mom. It is time dear old Dad to leave her. All she cares about is money prestige and what her friens think about her. Why did he married her in the first place. It is time for Corine to go.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: September 05 2015

Title: Chapter 35: DAY 58

Thank you for update on this story. Look forward to reading more. I know it is not easy writing but i really do appreciate you for writing wonderful feel good stories.

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Date: August 30 2016

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Summary:

The year 2016 looks promising for Faith Jamison she's finally going to acheive her purpose in the world and feel good about herself for the first time in her life. Women are now finally allowed to train to be Navy SEALS. Faith isn't going to let that oppurtnuity slip by her not when she sees a future that is brighter than her painful past.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 25940
Read Count: 51744
Published: September 29 2015
Updated: March 21 2016


Title: Chapter 9: A YOUNG GIRL'S DREAM

Please let Conrad find that Lukas is not his son, it will hurt him for sure but it would be better is knows the truth now than 18 years later.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: January 21 2016

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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

 

What will a woman do when her back is up against a wall? Will she take the beating or will she charge forward? Follow the story of Ariana as she escapes an abusive relationship and tries to redefine herself. As she moves back to Texas, she struggles with adjusting to a life without the abuse. Take this journey as she tries to move forward with her life because she refuse to let her past control her future. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4413
Read Count: 2241
Published: December 08 2015
Updated: February 02 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Broken Heart [1]

I want to read more. Please continue

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: December 08 2015

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Summary:

Isabella "Izzy" Salvatore is just like any other first grader who likes to draw and color pictures and is living the happy carefree days of childhood. However some of Izzy's drawings are not so happy and carefree some are just really dark and twisted.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Psychological
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 27153
Read Count: 7089
Published: February 07 2016
Updated: November 26 2016


Title: Chapter 4: CAST

Give Luc a brother and best friend to help him run his gym and keep him sane

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: February 13 2016

Title: Chapter 1: ELEPHANT TRUNK

Interesting story. Please continue

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: February 07 2016

Title: Chapter 6: HIS HEART II

Love reading your stories. Please update soon. I hope mojo comes back soon so you can update A Child Called Soloman. I would not like to see that story goes to waste. Can I make a suggestion, you can always revise the story with a different plot.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: March 07 2016

Title: Chapter 6: HIS HEART II

Please update soon

Reviewer: tcarey Signed
Date: March 15 2016

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.