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If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


~Jon Stewart




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Summary:

Coming home can be harder than staying away sometimes.

Home has now been published on Amazon and there's quite a bit more added from where I had originally ended this story. Hope you all enjoy it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 21
Read Count: 18591
Published: June 10 2016
Updated: October 06 2016


Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

So, Charlie is being passive-agressive since the talk between Sean and Alec? Please. Alec was right in his opinion, but I believe some of his anger is really because of what Charlie did, but he doesn't want to unload on her, so he does it to Sean.

I can definitely see why he's so pissed, she relied on another person for help when it should've been Alec. That's on Charlie. Alec is correct to remind Sean that "Lottie" is not his daughter. Yeah, I was ticked at the nick name. That speaks to an intimacy that while not sexual, it is emotional and Alec is not comfortable with that and considering the situation, I can understand.

It was good that she could count on Sean, but damn, I think it went a bit too far. Her kids were without her for 3 f'in' years. And poor Jamie doesn't even remember her.

I do wonder, did Sean know that Ols was sick? Would Sean have ever let Alec know where Charlie was? Charlie was supposedly all better when Ols sent the letter, so the question is, would Charlie have ever come back if but for Ols? I'm starting to give Charlie the side-eye again. She wants to continue to beat herself up to have Alec continually reassure her, yet she doesn't seem to understand and I mean TRULY understand what this has done to Alec and the boys.

I'm willling to give Alec a bit of slack. He's allowed to lose it every once and awhile. He's the one who had to maintain the family for 3 years not knowing if his heart and the mother of his children would ever return. He's responding better than I would.

Really good update, Chica. Thank you.

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Date: August 06 2016

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Summary:

When Wilhelmina "Mina" Porter comes back into thier lives after ten years; Wide reciever Reid Stone finds himself questioning who Blake McCarthy is as a person again. Mina was Reid's best friend and maybe even more. Blake was also his best friend, teammate and almost like a brother to him. However one secret that Mina has been harboring for the past decade could very well force Reid to pick one friend over the other.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9838
Read Count: 23379
Published: July 23 2016
Updated: September 08 2016


Title: Chapter 5: OLD FRIENDS REUNITE

There is something sick and twisted about Blake's seemingly weird obsession with having Reid to himself when it comes to Mina. What is it about Reid and Mina that seems to threaten Blake. It makes no sense. It's not like Reid and Mina was always together and Blake got none of Reid's time. This is really creepy.

I so hope that Mina doesn't become a victim of Blake yet again. She has gone on to make a pretty good life for herself. She is a strong young woman who has withstood a lot. Hopefully, she's aware of her strength.

Blake is a weak ass coward and has not grown into a man.  And what about Reid. He gives Blake so much slack. Doesn't he see that this cretin is rotten to the core. There must be something else going on here that causes Reid to overlook some of Blake's less than stellar behaviour.

Anywhoo, thank you for the update. This is really a good tale, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 08 2016

Title: Chapter 1: PROLOUGE

Blake has an unhealthy attachment to Reid. What in the blue blazing hell is wrong with this subhuman fool? How many other women has he done this to?

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Date: July 25 2016

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Summary:

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Pandora Steele is your everyday geek who has never had a guy look at her twice...until she meets Bradley Phillips. Bradley Phillips is tired of the kind of life he leads and searches for something different. He finds her and magical things happen. Tale of Two follows Bradley and Pandora throughout the years as they fight for love but life fights back.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 16278
Read Count: 10791
Published: August 17 2016
Updated: August 29 2016


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Brilliant. A few grammatical issues, but still very good.

I'm feeling sorry for her in advance seeing as he was her first and she seems to have given not just her virginity, but her trust to him.

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Date: August 26 2016

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Summary:

Morena is a woman who’s completely satisfied with herself. She just got a new job in a new city and her best friend, George, thinks that all she needs now is a man. Morena, though, tries her best not to get involved with anyone until Travis Keegan bumps (awkwardly) into her.

Travis is a handsome, and complicated fashion photographer, whose lust and inexplicable attraction-at-first-sight to Morena changes the plans they both had for their lives.

But Morena has walls around her, and Travis has way too many  issues he needs to work out. So how is it possible for anything to happen between them?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 85792
Read Count: 8834
Published: August 22 2016
Updated: November 27 2016


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: A crack in the wall

She just had to go there. It's not your business who he's sleeping with. You racist pig.

 

This is such a well written story. Travis is so complex. And Dindi is one strong young woman. I hope she doesn't let that racist woman affect their budding relationship. Well done, Chica.

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Date: October 26 2016

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: All good things...

This was so very good. I FELT Travis' desperation.

Brilliant, Chica.

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Date: November 30 2016

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Summary:

As a young woman struggles to provide a better life for her and her brother. She first has to face the many challenges that come in her path. One being a big bad wolf.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5788
Read Count: 15268
Published: September 22 2016
Updated: October 11 2016


Title: Chapter 2: The Beginning

By all means, please continue.

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Date: September 22 2016

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Summary:

Sometimes you have to look in your reflection to find the truth.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 3170
Read Count: 3739
Published: November 18 2016
Updated: November 18 2016


Title: Chapter 1: THE MIRROR

Wow. I was a little leary at the beginning, but then I found myself reaching for popcorn that wasn't even there. The story was so good. Well written short story, Chica.

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Date: November 20 2016

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Summary:

One Night Stand (n): Sexual realtionship only lasting one night.

Yeah right google and urban dictionary, yeah fricking right. Tell that to my life.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 7460
Read Count: 3484
Published: December 14 2016
Updated: December 14 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Nick is going to kick Erik's butt.  Thanks for the update.

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Date: December 15 2016

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Summary:

The Universe has a funny/morbid way of completely turning your life around.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:Yes
Word count: 92790
Read Count: 32405
Published: December 29 2016
Updated: June 21 2017


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Dena, now you know Aisha just wants you to let loose every once in awhile. I'm liking Aisha and the fact that she's married, yes.

Dena, did you notice that Clark donated to an animal shelter?

Roll on, Chica, roll on. Good update. Thanks.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! Aisha is my favorite person.

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Date: December 30 2016

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

JD, that poem, Brilliant. It was sad yet joyful. I have not had a pet since I was a child (I think the death of my pet scarred me for life), it's heartening that she might be waiting for me.

Ruger, le sigh.

The two main characters seem like really good people and not in any saccharin way, but just decent people, who might have their flaws like the rest of us, but at the core, good and decent. I like that.

Chica, you are killing it. Every update is greatly appreciated. You have a gift. Nuture it. Congrats on graduation and going into a profession that you can only make better. Good on you, Chica.

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Date: December 31 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm really interested in this story. You referred to Ruger being 14 in the beginning and then 16 later. Other than that, great start at writing an engrossing story.

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for pointing that out! I didn't even notice it lol

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Date: December 30 2016

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Dena, I think Gabe is reacting the correct way. I don't think he wants to be a substitute for Clark. Why should he get hurt when he knows that she's not all in. I hope Gabe is who I think he is. Yeah, he's willing to wait, but that's exactly what he means. WAIT. No sex, because that really complicates things. Dena, you need to come out of it being about you and actually see it from Gabe's perspective. The big question is why doesn't Gabe share a bit more of who he is with Dena. I haven't been able to connect with Dena, yet.  I know this is her story and probably Claark's, so I don't see it ending well for Gabe and that saddens me.

Thanks for the update.

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Date: February 04 2017

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Summary:

Laura and Riley have been best friends since childhood. They also were one another’s first love. Now they’re best friends. But can that work between two people who used to be in love with each other?




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 36370
Read Count: 1835
Published: January 10 2017
Updated: March 08 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Friendship between a boy and girl

Brilliant.

Riley, you've had numerous chances. Your laziness is going to cause you to lose Laura. And now you're falling into a relationship with Sue. You seem so passived, my friend. Well, Rocco isn't for sure. Good for Laura for trying to have a life and a family.

Chica, you have some raw talent right here. Well written and such an eye for detail. I like the structure of the story. Well done, Chica.

 

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Date: January 11 2017

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Summary:

The typical bag of sugar experiment in 11th Grade made Aurora "Rory" Campbell realize that she liked her friend Sean Sullivan as more than just a friend. (Working Summary)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 17139
Read Count: 32686
Published: February 05 2017
Updated: November 19 2017


Title: Chapter 1: DECEMBER 2016: HIS RORY

Aurora has some real issues. Looking forward to reading this story.

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Date: February 06 2017

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Summary:

Natalia loves children, and she loves being a nanny. After being fired from her job, she goes in search for a new nanny job. That's when she meets Jesse Stone, the badass rockstar and his sweet daughter Sydney. Jesse makes her job harder by being an asshole, but she loves being there for Sydney. Will Natalia push through and keep being a nanny to Sydney or will she leave, causng Sydney...and Jesse to miss her?



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Categories: Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 14256
Read Count: 15253
Published: April 04 2017
Updated: July 14 2017


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Before I started reading this chapter, I was wondering if he'd have to quit the band to maintain his sobriety. His band "mates" are not his friends. They're co-workers and useless ones at that. Xavier seems to be a decent sort. Those other a-holes did him a service by kicking him out. It saved him from quitting eventually. I just hope Xavier can get the hell away from these fkrs.

Enjoyed the update. I hope that Jesse can progress in remaining in recovery. I hope he realizes that it is a lifelong process.  Thumbs up, Chica.

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Date: July 14 2017

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Summary:

 

Sometimes people are beautiful. Not in looks. Not in what they say. Just in what they are.     




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 36570
Read Count: 15099
Published: July 15 2017
Updated: September 30 2017


Title: Chapter 3: No Regrets, No More Subtlety

Poor John. With all those clothes on and sweating so much, Rae's kiss just sent him over the edge. I howled.



Author's Response:

LMAOOOO!!! He got overheated. It was just too much.

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Date: July 24 2017

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COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 284373
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019


Title: Chapter 14: Sweet Satisfaction

Chef, Damn, if you ain't the man. Sugar found her inner "kick that azz". They're perfect for each other. Lance, who?

Glad that you listened to Chef, Chica. Enjoyable chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Chica! <3

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16 2017

Title: Chapter 6: Sweet Jasmine

"How do I feel?"

"Like a goddamn blessing," he admitted huskily.

"Then just show me a peek of what you've got. I'm a low-maintenance man, honey," he said. "I don't ask for much. I can survive off whatever crumbs you throw at me."

"No one has ever put your needs before their own like they should, but if you let me in, Sugar, I'll always put you first. I'll give and you'll take until your heart's content."

"There will be no other man in your life except me. Do you understand?"


Panty drop. LMAO.



Author's Response:

LMAO!!!! Chef knows how to lay down some words. 

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Date: July 27 2017

Title: Chapter 8: Yummy Cake

ummm, whoa, *cough*, whew chile. Yeah. whew. little hot up in herre. whew.

“Um, shouldn’t we go…to the bedroom…first,” she asked

“Where else would, um, this happen?”

See now, it's very clear that Lance was not handling his business. If loving was limited to just the bedroom, Shug has been missing out. Even if she and Miles don't make it, he will open up a brand new world to her as to what she should EXPECT and DEMAND from a relationship.

“Let me in, honey,”

Yeah, not just the physical, but much, much deeper. Does Shug even realize what he's asking of her? Chef is a rascal, but he is dead serious when it comes to Shug. Every word has more than one meaning.

Her girl squad cracked me up. I love their dynamic. Their support of each other is really a joy to behold. Even if they get into spats ever now and then, they are all fam.

Yeah, Shug no longer needs a dildo. She's already gotten rid of that ineffective dildo, Lance "I don't know what to do with good pussy if it came with instructions" Wallace.

I sound like a broken record, but, great chappie, Chica.

So, I had to read this a few times, you know, for literary reasons, ahem.



Author's Response:

Uh huh, "literary reasons"! *side eye* LOL

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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03 2017

Title: Chapter 1: Bittersweet

MJ, I'm all in. This is bound to be a pleasure to read.

I'm with Rochelle, blood needs to be shed.Looking at her papa and her twin, I can't imagine them not being ready to beat that ex-husband's behind.

I really like how Sugar has all of her ducks in a row and is really looking forward to her freedom. That ex-husband really pissed me off, with his smug ass. For someone who doesn't care anything about Sugar, he sure was throwing barbs. Karma is coming for his butt. Was he phsically abusive? It's clear that he was verbally and emotionally. I'm so damn glad that Sugar has gotten rid of that fkr. On to bigger and better things, in more ways than one, if Chef is any indication. hee

Good first chapter, Chica.



Author's Response:

Thanks, chica! Let's just say there's a good reason why he stopped being abusive in one kind of way, so he relies on other kinds. 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19 2017

Title: Chapter 2: Unsweet Beginnings

This was an interesting chapter.

Lance and his concubine took time out of their day to come and needle Sugar. Are their lives so bereft of any joy that this is how they get some in it? Sugar handled that just right. Lance and the concu are really quite ugly inside of their so called "handsome/beautiful" wrappers. They are quite superficial and prolly think that they are "winning". But why does it matter to them? Do they sit around being consumed by Sugar?

Sugar is living her life (businesswise) and exacting revenge on those two fools in the process, 'cause it's obvious that they are burning with resentment. Sugar can't afford to harbour hate against these two. It hurts her more than it would hurt them if she does. I'm liking Sugar ever so much. She's said, "get thee behind me satan" to that lance person and kicked dust in his face. I understand Sugar and giving her a slow clap for handling her business. She just needs a little more "life" in her personal life. Chef, can't wait until you get there. I'm thinking Chef is going to show her what "life" is all about. She hasn't had one since she married that stoopid fool and so young.

MJ, gurl, loving grown folks tale. btw, Lory is a sweetie and love their relationship.



Author's Response:

Sometimes, people get so miserable in their own lives that they have to try and suck the joy of the those they've hurt in the place. Lance and Mariah are putting up a good front, but there are some secrets they've got. As for Chef, he's on his way!

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Date: July 19 2017

Title: Chapter 4: Sour Sisters

MJ, every interaction between "C" and Shug, no matter how mundane, all I can think of is FOREPLAY. HEE   Is it because they are grown and sexay? :)

"I don’t want one. I don’t need one and if I did, it wouldn’t be you."

Shug, we're getting ahead of ourselves, aren't we? Shug is about to learn what it is to deal with a MAN. She's been with Lance since she was 19, right? He wasn't and isn't a man. This will be new territory for her.

Her sisters are a trip. Who knew that babygirl would be the peacemaker.

This is a delight to read, Chica.



Author's Response:

Their conversations are very much like foreplay. I love writing intense love/hate banter. "His Mercy" is filled with it. But you're absolutely right. Sugar is about to come face-to-face with a real man, who is nothing like Lance, LOL. As for Odette, she hates fighting. So she'll spill tea to end a war. 

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Date: July 24 2017

Title: Chapter 5: Salty Reunion

“The one thing you need to know about me, Sugar, is that I love to work. Being a hard worker is a part of who I am. I keep going and going until the job gets done, but maybe my words don’t do me any justice in this instance. Say yes for tonight and I’ll gladly let you see my work ethic firsthand.”

Is it me or did the temperature go up a few notches? LMAO

Shug's mom is a pistol. I can see where the girls get it from. I'm loving all of the Hartwell clan.

Regarding chapter 4, I forgot to comment on the fact that it looks as if Lance might've hit Shug during their marriage or did I read too much into the sister's conversation?

MJ, another great update.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

You read into it perfectly, chica. I am so happy you caught that considering Rochelle was cut off mid-sentence by Odette. But that is what definitely happened. More details to come. 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25 2017

Title: Chapter 7: Hot Soup

This man, and when I say this man, I mean Chef, because Lance... NOPE.

Chef does not play games. That's being GROWN. Lance on the other hand... NOPE.

Chef is very clear with Shug and is all about Shug. Shug is liking that A LOT. He's just getting started.

Lance is so low rent. I can't see him faring well when you have him standing next to a real man. It's quite easy to see counterfeit when you're experiencing the REAL thing. Shug will come to see that. She's already starting to see it.

Wonderful update, cher.

RE: your co-worker, I've had several who've tried to sabotage me during my career. One thing that I did was to memorialize any conversations of consequence that we had with a follow-up email documenting what was said.



Author's Response:

Chef can be playful, but he doesn't play games at all. You are absolutely right. Lance is all about games and winning, but he's gonna come correct when he goes toe-to-toe with Chef. Sugar will realize that Chef is the real deal.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31 2017

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