Penname: BellaChica [Contact]

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Member Since: December 26 2009

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“If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.”


~Jon Stewart




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The Bones by Smartcooki3
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[Reviews - 187]
Summary:

The Bones is the sequel to Outlander.

Four years after getting married, Landon and Daphne appear to be happily married. Behind closed doors, the two are struggling with fertility issues that threaten to claim their marriage.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Outlander
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 85331
Read Count: 11479
Published: January 08 2020
Updated: November 02 2022

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Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22

At this point, Daphne needs to be protected from Claire's wrath and Landon's stupidity. He still doesn't get it. What part of Fatal Attraction doesn't he understand. He's exhibiting a certain amount of hubris in thinking he knows all by wrongly thinking that he knows what the nutter will or won't do. Dude, somebody had to TELL you what you hired and brought to your wife's doorstep. Daphne, protect yourself.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 28 2021
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A Wrong Turn... by Blackmagic
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 242]
Summary:

 

West Virginia Hills

 

Wallflower Abby Kensington is ready to start living her best life!  This road trip is the first of many exciting steps she is taking.  However, on her journey she meets a man who has a different plan in store for her...

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 153219
Read Count: 50709
Published: March 24 2020
Updated: March 18 2024

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Title: Chapter 5: Abby starts to suspect...

Is that banjo music that I'm hearing in the distance?

This such a really enjoyable read. The next chapter should be interesting. I'm not ready to say "Abby, you in danger, girl" just yet. But, I'm damn sure got my eyes on possible exits. Abby, I suggest that you do the same.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 31 2020
Title: Chapter 7: Abby's first day...

He still crazy.



Author's Response:

Yep...Thanks for reading!

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07 2020
Title: Chapter 6: Abby runs...

He crazy.



Author's Response:

Yes...They're a bit insane on the mountain...lol

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02 2020
Forget Me Not by K Carr
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 77]
Summary:

New story



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 50846
Read Count: 3786
Published: October 17 2020
Updated: November 21 2020

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Title: Forget Me Not

I'm trying not to anticipate where this is going. I don't want to get ticked off needlessly.

My hope for Willow is that she first takes care of herself and her baby. She's reeling right now, but I hope she can right herself and deal with Jared the way that he is now and not how he was. She's walking on eggshells around this asshat and allowing him to be abusive to her. Hopefully,  she will talk with professionals for  info as to what to expect and how to deal with it.

My hope for Jared is to address WHY it is Willow he's focused ALL of his anger and frustration on. There seems to be a boatload of issues that existed between him and his family before Willow, yet it happened within the last 5 years but before Willow, otherwise, he'd remember. 

If "dude hadn't bumped his head", I'd want to slap the ever loving shite of the little pissant.

I'm really enjoying the story and the character development. It's clear that they both have been less than open with each other.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02 2020
Title: Forget Me Not

I'm starting to feel smothered. I can understand why Jared would. ðŸ˜

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 11 2020
Title: Forget Me Not

Is she even going to a therapist.  He doesn't remember. He can't help that and the pressure to remember her and their life together is wearing on him. Why aren't they getting help. It's almost like, discharge from hospital, see ya. No after care for either of them. 

Great update.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 11 2020
Title: Forget Me Not

She is in so much denial. Good question, why didn't he tell her. There seems to be a few things that she doesn't know about him.

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Date: November 21 2020
Thankful by Fik Freak
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 42]
Summary: Up and coming romance writer, Raven Baines, needs a break. From life, from love. From everything. But where can a city girl find a respite from her own romantic mishaps during a pandemic? In quiet, idyllic Maine, over the holidays, Raven gets more than she bargained for when she encounters ex-hockey player, and small town grump, Ashe Murphy. Can their unlikely romance give them both something to be thankful for?

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 29963
Read Count: 6016
Published: January 03 2021
Updated: March 07 2021

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Very nice.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 16 2021
MEANT TO BE by marchpisces92
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 42]
Summary:

Stop your boss from committing suicide. It might result in him falling in love with you.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 12604
Read Count: 8673
Published: April 09 2021
Updated: August 23 2021

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Title: Chapter 2: TWO

Trent really a useless piece of trash. A wife beater and a child abuser. There's no coming back from that. I'm looking forward to their little Christmas vacation.

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Date: April 19 2021
WHAT'S HIS NAME? by marchpisces92
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

A reupload of a romance between to former college friends.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6094
Read Count: 1388
Published: April 18 2021
Updated: April 18 2021

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Title: Chapter 1: WHAT'S HIS NAME?

Nice.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 19 2021
Once In A Lifetime by Miss_Carmel_smootee
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 80]
Summary:

    Poster-Once-Time-2

 

Life as you know it can change in an instant. Every touch, every kiss, and every embrace. How do you cope when the memories fade, but the faces remain the same? Ayana has been married to her husband Jason for four years, it was love at first sight, literally. Everything isn't perfect, but Jason found a new meaning in life when he met Ayana. But what happens when Ayana forgets the warmth of his embrace?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 55661
Read Count: 12532
Published: June 07 2021
Updated: March 12 2023

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8:Damage

That one little statement "until she left for good" scares me. She still intends to leave him. I go back and forth on Jason. The way that he treated her during her pregnancy makes me want to smack him, yet I know he loves her. What she'll do when she remembers the baby is going to be, at the very least, traumatic.  Great update, Chica.

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Date: August 02 2021
To Err is Human; To Edit, Divine! by Blackmagic
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 

Editing

 

 

Mia had been his editor from the beginning, and James said he would not work with anyone else.  What Mia would never tell him, though, is that she would cut anyone who tried.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 17304
Read Count: 5831
Published: March 03 2022
Updated: May 15 2022

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Such an enjoyable read. Well written, too. I look forward to more updates.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It was rolling around my grey matter for a while!

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2022
Magic Man by SouthernSwampMamma
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 49]
Summary:

Yolana Humphry spent her entire life stuck in Tapioca, Alabama, under the thumb of her controlling Aunt Freda. That is, until a stranger comes along and swoops her off her feet. A charming man, that everyone but herself seems to know; who easily bypasses her fragile walls and embeds himself in her heart. Escape, however, doesn’t seem to be the end of Yolana’s journey. With her newfound freedom, she now has the opportunity to pursue something she never thought she could obtain.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 61995
Read Count: 4437
Published: March 13 2023
Updated: April 13 2024

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Title: Chapter 8: One Way Or Another

Before I started this chapter, I was thinking, why don't they just run away.  And lo and behold! This was a real nail biter. I'm so glad that they got away. I have to side-eye the uncle, he allowed that wife of his to almost destroy Yola's spirit. 

An exciting chaper. What a way to start the new year.! Well done.



Author's Response:

I believe Belvin letting Yolana go was him righting all his wrongs and apologizing. Though he would prefer her somewhere he can see her. Glad though you were on the same page as me and wanting Nathan to just take her away lol. Thank you for reading!

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15 2024
Title: Chapter 7: Easier Said Than Done

A damn good chapter. Freda is Satan's handmaiden.



Author's Response:

 It's always the "Holier than thou" people. Thanks fore reading.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10 2023
Platonic Facade by apathetic_smileyface
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

It is a tedious thing... to love someone with every molecule of your being, yet keep them blissfully unaware. How long before the facade crumbles...?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 30227
Read Count: 2235
Published: June 26 2023
Updated: September 10 2023

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Title: Chapter 5: Questions and Answers

I am so enjoying your storytelling. The talk should be illuminating. Are they both that clueless.  We shall see.

What's with this pain thing that Syd has going on. 😆

Well done, Chica.ðŸ‘



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like my storytelling style and thank you for the compliment :D I've been trying to maintain the same tone with each chapter, so I hope I can continue to produce that. I did NOT mean to make the end of chapter 5 to be such a cliff hanger though lol I'm wondering if what I come up with will be what people are looking for...but we'll just have to see in chp 6! Thanks so much for your review, I hope you like what happens next.

 

- apathetic :)

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08 2023
Title: Chapter 6: Shut Up and Listen pt.1

Ruh roh! 

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10 2023
Heaven and The Reapers by MonieDivine
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Heaven broke the biggest tradition in her family and chose to become a nurse, to help people instead of becoming a lawyer and carrying on her family legacy. She was a self proclaimed nerd, happier with her head in a good book curled up under a blanket than attending parties. After an encounter with Bikers at an event hosted in honour of her father, she is drawn to the very men intent on ruining her fathers reputation.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 5145
Read Count: 1616
Published: August 22 2023
Updated: August 25 2023

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Something about this story is compelling. So much so that I'm looking forward to your next installment. This has the makings of a really good story. Well done, Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 26 2023
Unbecoming by Artamiss Caine
Rated: Teen or Above
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Summary:

Aasefi Selbeni and Gaetan Duvernier face their fiercest battle since being forced apart...parenthood.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 3821
Read Count: 1021
Published: September 05 2023
Updated: September 05 2023

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Title: Chapter 1: In Dreams They Come

I hope they find a way to reunite mother and child on a more permanent basis. This is going to be good,  Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 08 2023

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.