Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"
So this was one very intense chapter, and maybe it’s me but I have a feeling Diya didn’t stay because her father commanded her to but to protect Brandon. Her father crossed the line when he brought a time in Brandon’s like where his life meant nothing. He thinks he knows, he thinks he has the facts but all he has is a piece of paper and the knowledge of an idiot. I will say that Diya should have opened her mouth, I think her silence fueled her lunatic of a father. And if anything happens to Brandon that is on her. Brandon needs to know not to feel so much all at once it wasn’t Marisol and her being brought up that turned him into a bull in a china shop but a part of his life where he didn’t feel or need to be alive anymore. William kept on and I am truly surprised that Brandon didn’t put his ass thorough the wall like I would have. Some think Brandon needs to open up about Marisol and that relationship, I ask why? Marisol to me represents the parts of Brandon, that Brandon himself couldn’t protect so he does everything in his power to protect her. That relationship is built on his need to be a protector because he made a promise and unlike some he doesn’t intend to break it. I will say Diya needs to be afraid and not of Brandon but of the fact that she has a family that is willing to torment someone just to get rid of them. William crosses the line but no one not even Diya called him out on it yet everyone is ready to call the cops on Brandon. That is what irritates me the more dude deserved more than that and William deserves to feel the wrath of Diya.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 SignedI do t know but I feel like everyone wants to blame Brandon for the decisions that Diya wants to make because she wants to know him. But for me it's very interesting to have to characters like a radon and Diya that hide away from each other because they don't believe in what they have. If Diya believed in Brandon she would have never gone to that house that he stays far away from. And if Brandon believed in Diya he would never let anyone even Marisol be in the relationship. Marisol is an open book Brandon isn't continually with her because of her I truly believe it's because of those girls and a promise he made to himself about never giving up just because the passed ended the way it did. Mannie and Marisol might believe they have a chance because Brandon and Diya won't just be open and honest with each other which is why they are self destructing. Brandon isn't spying on Diya because he doesn't trust her I truly think it's the only way he knows to see her. Him asking her about cheating is the same reason she keeps asking about Marisol. Diya doesn't believe him and Brandon doesn't know anything else but Diya hiding from him. Do they need time apart maybe but the fact that Diya is still unable to trust Brandon isn't about Brandon but her self doubt. And Brandon not wanting to share with Diya is t about not trusting her but about a past he really wants to forget, he doesn't want to think about those people that raised him or about how Marisol nearly killed him. He wants to believe that he can have a family chosen by himself even if that family includes someone that Diya is insecure about because it's all he has.
Hopefully with time both Diya and Brandon will be able to talk and air their feelings out and hash out the pain and torment they both have rather than hiding from each other. But for both of them holding onto past significant other ie Mannie and Marisol is never going to be what they truly need unless they are truly ready to let each other go.
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Need I say more?
I am so glad you decided to do Rich's story. Him and Kara as F*** buddies is very interesting seeing as how I didn't think Rich did seconds. Lol I love that we got to see into Natalia and Anthony's baby shower and some of Natalia's pregnancy.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Thanks JovanBleu!
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The past never leaves. It's all in how you deal with it that determines how well you move on . . .
Vera Cooke thought she'd moved on, thought she'd buried her past well enough to get married and have a son and enjoy the life she'd been wanting.
But the past has a way of creeping back up. For Vera, it erupts disturbingly, violently, forcing truths to be revealed and a demanding need for revenge too hard to ignore.
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And things were heating up... Both Vera and Nicky seem to be feeling the sexual tension. And someone is about to loose his mind with all the interruptions. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed Wow, didn't see that coming. They beat the baby out of her. I wonder who they were? But I am glad she finally got that pain off her chest. Nicky is so tender with her and her son. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed Very interesting start looking forward to how this story plays out.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 SignedSo Vera and Nicky have a past? I wonder if William actually made up those stories to get Vera? Because for some reason I get the feeling Nicky doesn't really want to run the family but is doing it because he must. Looking forward to learning more about Vera and Nicky's past. Another interesting chapter!!
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed Another great chapter. For someone that moved on she sure keeps track of how long it has been since she was with Nicky. Wow, she just blurts out she was pregnant, I wonder what happen to her first child and how Nicky reacts to learning the truth. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed How you going to leave me hanging like that. They terrorized her and her life to keep her and Nicky apart. They killed William to make her suffer but didn't that just bring Nicky and Vera together? What happened with Nicky's mother? You left me with so many questions.... But I enjoyed this story.
LoL. response like this has me toying with the idea of a part two . . .
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One Night Will Change Their Lives Forever.
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Another amazing chapter. Harvey and Aria literally are not making it out of that gala without jumping each other on the floor when all is said and done. Gladys better not be involved because Aria will kick her ass. Harvey suspects something as it is. What is Harvey up too? Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed Aria, is one badass chick, taking out those technically 3 men without breaking a sweat. Harvey is a military man as well... What is Glady's up too since the safety is on, is she apart of this hold up? And will Harvey need to protect his man parts befor Aria can react. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed There is an interesting dynamics to Aria and her frienf Glady's. Glady's is very protective of Aria but needs to let Aria live her life. And Aria has the hots for Harvey. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed This is a very interesting start. Looking forward to the next chapter and seeing how Aria and Harvey interact with each other.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed Wow, this was one very intense chapter. Apparently Gladys thought she was helping Aria find something that she lost and to prove that she was a hero. Wow....just wow. She lost her live for it too. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed When Wilhelmina "Mina" Porter comes back into thier lives after ten years; Wide reciever Reid Stone finds himself questioning who Blake McCarthy is as a person again. Mina was Reid's best friend and maybe even more. Blake was also his best friend, teammate and almost like a brother to him. However one secret that Mina has been harboring for the past decade could very well force Reid to pick one friend over the other.
This was an intense chapter and Blake is one entailed douchebag. he thinks he owns Reid like Reid is not allowed to have anyone else in his life but him. I hate to say this but Mina was niave but she didn't deserve what Blake did to her. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed I wish mona would have told the truth because who knows how many other women Blake has done this too. She didn't want Reid to loose his friend but the douchebag was never his friend to begin with since he thought he had the right to rape a girl and treat her like trash. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed This was a sad chapter. Mina did what was best for her son but was it best for her? Only time will tell. It sucks that she had to loose touch with her friend Reid over that douche. I am looking forward to seeing how she grows from this experience. I hope Blake ends up in a grave and Reid puts him there. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.