Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Tug of War
I have missed this story so much. Brandon needs to kick Marisol to the curb. She is shady and wants to break him and Diya up as evidenced by the amount of calls she makes to distract him from his relationship. I bet that if she knew that he wasn't around Diya, she wouldn't call so much to disrupt him.
Diya's family needs to let her breathe and be able to enjoy her relationship and life. She also needs to find a new job and not work for her father anymore. As long as Diya's father thinks he has control over her, he thinks he can tell her how to live her life and who to date/marry. If he wants to try and disown her, she needs to be strong enough to say "that's fine" and keep it moving with Brandon.
Even if Diya and Brandon break up (which I hope never, never happens), she needs to be strong enough to stand on her own and not be intimidated by her parents or her sisters who need to mind their own business.
I can't wait for the next chapter. This is one of my favorite stories. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, dcphoenix1!!! So glad you're enjoying my little tale : )
Marisol and William, and Brandon's and Diya's weakness for them, pose the greatest threat to their relationship. Question is, can they create the boundaries necessary to preserve what they have? Will any of the relationships survive it?
We shall see...
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed
Date: September 26 2018