Penname: Divsionred [Contact]

Real name: Sharon

Member Since: July 10 2008

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I am not a writer but I love reading all the stories that have been posted on TST and FanFiction.



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Penny with a Hole in It by intellectual titmouse
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 721]
Summary:

*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168992
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014

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Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Prince....poor Prince.  Kendra is fucking like she hasn't in a long time because she was with the loser.  Dude you might not have a chance and that is a damn shame.

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Date: March 22 2011
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Thanks  :(

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Date: March 22 2011
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Thanks for the update.  :(

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Date: March 22 2011
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Oh man, Kendra what the fuck did you and Deleon just do.  Damn. :(

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Date: March 22 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Thanks for the update.  I was LOL at Dax.  I think that he is so cute.  Still team Prince. Especially since he punched Chase.  Go Prince.

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Date: March 19 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Oh. oh, Kendra  is definitely not feeling Dax.  Damn.  Ok, still team Prince.  Thanks

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Date: March 20 2011
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Oh man, they were in the same mall and Dax and Tabbi didn't say anything.  Pox on the both of them.  YEESH!!!!!!

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Date: March 22 2011
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

Oh, oh, I think that Deleon is in trouble now.  Donald is out to get that asshole.  Go Donald....sorry :(

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Date: March 22 2011
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Oh no, no, no...damn.  Thanks

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Date: March 22 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Thanks for a great update.

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Date: March 19 2011
Crossing the Finish Line by wisedec4u
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
Summary:

 

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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

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When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214674
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014

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Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Thanks for a great update. A lot of revelations. To bad Felicia was cheating any got caught. I liked her boyfriend Roger. As fir Chad bending iver fit the Mayors son didn't see that one coming. I hope that Ryan beatvthe heck out of Danny.

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Date: October 27 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Cast of Characters

Good cast. I like the way you have descriptions if the cast. Thanks

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Date: July 26 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Great start to the story. She has to be so scared. Having to move to a new state and a new high school is always challenging. Then the reason for her move is very sad. I like her grandmother. I thought that Charlene.'s ongoing dialogue in her head was entertaining. Thanks

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Date: July 26 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Had a feeling that she would end up being his tutor. Thanks

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Date: July 26 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

The attraction is there tor Ryan and Charlene. Will she end up being his tutor? Thanks

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Date: July 26 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I think that Ryan.'s friend the rascist one is an idiot. Poor Ryan lost to his rival. It is sad that his boss nephew was lynched. The good ole rascist south. Yikes. At this point Charlene and Ryan would be crazy to try and date esch other. They could be hurt.Thanks

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Date: July 26 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

What a *B* that Christi is. I was hoping Charlene would have punched her but I am sure that they are destined to have more run ins especially since she is Ryan.'s ex. Thanks

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Date: July 26 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

James seems like a smooth operator. As for Danny and Ryan to bad Ryan couldn't punch hid rascist behind. Thanks

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Date: July 26 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Christi is a lunatic. She is going to be a huge problem for Charlene and Ryan. Thanks

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Date: July 26 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I can't wait to find out what the story is between her dad., the Sheriff and her mother. Thanks

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Date: July 26 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Ryan is playing with fire he needs to be more careful. Their town is already a powder keg waiting to blow. He doesn't know that their father's have some bad history. Thanks

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Date: July 26 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Teenager angst is right. I want what I want when I want. Rules don't apply to me. Seriously Ryan be smart for a change. Thanks

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Date: July 26 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I can understand why Ryan wants to follow his own path but he is really putting him and Charlene in danger in their backwoods town. Thanks

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Date: July 26 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Thanks for a great update. How sad her brother was killed by his friend. Thanks

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Date: July 26 2012
Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Wis so the Sheriff is Media's father. Wow didn't see that one coming at all. Thanks

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Date: July 26 2012

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