Penname: Divsionred [Contact]

Real name: Sharon

Member Since: July 10 2008

Membership status: Member

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I am not a writer but I love reading all the stories that have been posted on TST and FanFiction.



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Shenai always wanted to be with Jeremy but with so many obstacles in her way it was impossible. Now that Jeremy’s father has passed away he’s rushed the next girl that best fit his father description to the altar. Shenai sees her window of opportunity with Jeremy quickly boarding up and wants to take the nails off the boards that are going keep her away from Jeremy forever but she doesn’t have the will to do it. Shenai truly believes after Jeremy is married; her life will be over but little does she know it’s only the beginning of chaotic a life and just maybe she might get what she’s always wanted in the beginning.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 38343
Read Count: 37565
Published: April 21 2011
Updated: February 02 2014


Title: Chapter 11: After the Reception

Well, I didn't see her having sex with the other brother.  Thanks

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Date: July 07 2012

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Summary:

Teresa has to spend her weekend completing her assignments for her Major British Writer’s class. What happens when stress, wine, and sleep deprivation are mixed together? Nothing good…

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Movies, Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2464
Read Count: 1766
Published: April 27 2011
Updated: April 27 2011


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks for a good read. Great dream she was having.

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Date: July 29 2012

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[Reviews - 439]
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Ellie finds herself living the life that she could only imagine in her dreams. She has graduated from college with a degree in accounting, she is with the man she loves who is just as succesful, if not more than her, and he has just asked her to marry him. What more could a girl ask for? What could go wrong? Everything begins to change once she meets his family and realizes they dont like her. Can this break up their relationship? What is she to do? What about their "family" business? Will their marraige go on? After being on top the only place left to go is down, and Ellie is sure on her way there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: Mafioso Series
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 50333
Read Count: 89295
Published: May 20 2011
Updated: May 28 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Good start to the story.  Thanks

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Date: May 24 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Thanks for a great read.

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Date: May 24 2011

Title: Chapter 3: Character photos

Thanks for the pictures of the cast.

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Date: May 24 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I think that I started this story but didn't finish it. Good start. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I wonder if once Ellie finds out what the family business is will she run from Nicky? Why is she so insecure in her relationship with Nicky? Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Character photos

Thanks for the pics. Ellie and Nicky look like teenagers.

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2

Why doesn't he just tell her. Starting off married life with such a huge secret can't be good for their marriage. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 5: The lombardi family pics.

Thanks for the cast pics.

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 3

Well Nick needs to be slapped for dropping that bomb that his family was going to have problems with Ellie's race. His sister Bianca is rude and ignorant. My guess their isn't a woman that is good enough for her brother. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 4

Wow his mother speaks her mind. Damn and his sister was just beyond rude. If I was Elle I would be running to the nearest airport. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 5

Well st least Nick's dad is on his side. Nick really needs ti tell Elle about his family business. Isn't he putting her at risk by not telling her. Also why is Nick next in line and not Gio? At least the meeting between Elle and Bianca went well. Also why doesn't Nick have body guards?Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 6

Oh man Sammy was hit. I hope that he isn't dead. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 7

Why was Nick arrested? I am surprised that Ellie didn't leave him. I was also surprised that she is pregnant. I wonder what the stress is going ti do to her and her unborn child. Thanks Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 8

I think that it is sad that she is losing their baby although Nick suggested an abortion. I guess he will be pleased. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 9

Well I am not surprised that she is trying to leave. Either she will be stopped or she will be back. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10 pt 1

Wow I can't believe that Nick went back to his ex and has been cheating on her. Not sure why Ellie thought that she could have sex with a stranger. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 10 pt 2

I am shocked that Nick is doing drugs. I was waiting for his mother to appear. I am also surprised that they have been broken up fir 6 months. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 15: Ellie's friends photos

Thanks for the pics.

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 11

Well Marta got Ellie to the hospital. Now can she get them back together? As for Julliette she is the one that Bianca needs to be snapping at. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 12

Well I can understand why Ellie apologized for leaving the way that she did. I can't wait to read Nick's POV. I thought that Juliette was done until Nick knew what he wanted. But she said that before and came back greedy ho. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 13

I can't believe that had sex with Juliette while Ellie was in the other room. Then the next day he is trying to have sex with Ellie wow. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 14

I feel really sad for them. I always thought that they would get back together. I actually didn't think that she would have left him 6 months ago. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Well didn't see Ellie getting pregnant by Nick and that was another 6 months has passed. I surprised that Delia is telling Nick about the baby. Thanks

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Date: July 30 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.