Penname: Divsionred [Contact]

Real name: Sharon

Member Since: July 10 2008

Membership status: Member

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I am not a writer but I love reading all the stories that have been posted on TST and FanFiction.



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Having chosen modeling over ministry, Jeremy Ferguson had often felt his father's scorn and disapproval.  Now he was coming home to visit and bringing the love of his life, Aura Vanderleigh who happens to be black.  Growing up in South Carolina, Jeremy knows what his father's reaction will be even if he is a minister!

 

The Preacher's Son is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2009 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2681
Read Count: 128991
Published: July 31 2011
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: The Preacher's Son

Wow Jessica thinks that she is pregnant.  For her sake I hope that she isn't.  I am glad that Jeremy and his father are talking.  Thanks

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Date: August 01 2011

Title: The Preacher's Son

Jeremy needs to forgive Aaron.  Aaron did the right thing by apologizing for his actions. Grandma Vanderleigh is so mean...I love her though.  LOL Thanks for a great update.

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Date: August 01 2011

Title: The Preacher's Son

Can Jeremy and Aura catch a break?  My goodness, their family is driving me crazy.  Thanks for a great update.

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Date: August 01 2011

Title: The Preacher's Son

You tell them Aura...jealous heifers.  As for Eric becoming a daddy...oh yes his racist dad is going to freak.  Thanks for a great update.

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Date: August 01 2011

Title: The Preacher's Son

I like the fact that the good Reverened Ferguson is supporting his nephew.  As for grandma Vanderleigh, I just love her feistyness, she is a riot.  Go Jeremy getting grandma to like you.  Thanks for a great update.

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Date: August 01 2011

Title: The Preacher's Son

Her cousins were something else.  Thanks for a great update.



Author's Response:

We all have these type of people in our family.  LOL.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: August 01 2011

Title: The Preacher's Son

Great story.  I hope that Jeremy's father will at least meet his son halfway. Thanks  

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Date: August 01 2011

Title: The Preacher's Son

How sad for Aura and Jeremy that Jeremy's family would prefer that he be gay than marrying a black woman.  I guess they didn't realize that he could bring a black man home too.   Thanks



Author's Response:

Yes, so true! LOL  Thanks for the review!

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Date: August 01 2011

Title: The Preacher's Son

Great update.  I was surprised that Aura told the Reverened what she did with Jeremy.  I am glad that they are getting married soon.  As for Matthew, sr he needs to let go and let God guide his actions towards his son and new daughter in law. Thanks

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Date: August 01 2011

Title: The Preacher's Son

Grandma is a trip.  I am still LOL at this line " I know she's from South Carolina herself. This Jeremy's people were probably her folk's owners or something. They are probably trying to get all their slaves back."

LOL grandma was so wrong for saying that...LOL


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Date: August 01 2011

Title: The Preacher's Son

I felt bad for Aura when the security was so rude to her about her dating Jeremy.  As for Jeremy's manager what an idiot.  Although what he said is probably true.  Thanks

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Date: August 01 2011

Title: The Preacher's Son

Yeah Jessica isn't pregnant.  I am glad that Reverened Ferguson had a break through and could see his son as a man.  Thanks

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Date: August 01 2011

Title: The Preacher's Son

I hope that they will be able to have the Happy Ever After.  Thanks

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Date: August 01 2011

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Summary:

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Shy loner white nerd developes caring and complex relationship with popular black girl at school.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 40411
Read Count: 25023
Published: August 02 2011
Updated: April 02 2017


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great update.  Poor Rick at least he talked about his dad suicide to Marva.  I wa surprised that she kept asking questions about his dad.  As for the school bully Ronnie I can see that he is going to be a problem.  To bad know one has kicked his behind.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Lol, Ronnie definitely makes you want to choke him.

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Date: August 03 2011

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great update.  At least Rick and Marva are talking more. I am surprised that Marva doesn't want to go to college.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you <3.

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Date: August 03 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like Rick.  I hope that Marva doesn't break his heart and the jock doesn't beet him up at school.  Thanks



Author's Response:

No, thank you for reading <3.

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Date: August 03 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What happen to Rick's father? I am glad that Marva is still friendly woth Rick.  Thanks

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Date: August 03 2011

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Summary:

They had one rule. They keep it out of the office.

 

....Watch it get broken.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7092
Read Count: 7462
Published: August 09 2011
Updated: March 18 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Family Dinner

His mother is mean.  Thanks

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Date: March 22 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Birthday Boy

Thanks for a great update, 

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Date: March 22 2012

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Last Chapter

Thanks for a great read.  I guess they didn't invite their coworkers to their wedding. 

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Date: March 22 2012

Title: Chapter 1: The Office

Great start to the story.  I like these two as a couple.  They are funny.  Thanks

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Date: March 22 2012

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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 140138
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014


Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 30 Honesty and Understanding

Thanks for a great update.  Julian and Amaris are driving me crazy, the way that they argue all the time.  At least they made up.  As for Seleah and Joseph they are becoming my favorite couple.  I feel bad for Seleah I keep thinking of that old saying that if you lay down with dogs then you get up with fleas.  This seems to be the case of her son's father.  What a sis mofo he turned out to be.  My goodness, her son is going to be so sad and angry if his father attacks his mother especially since his curosity about his father brought the devil into their lives.  I can only imagine how Joseph will act if this guy attacks his woman.  I am looking forward to reading how this situation will work out. Seleah deserves to have some happiness.  Thanks

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Date: December 20 2011

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21 Road to Recovery

Thanks for a great update.  A lot of surprises in this chapter.  I was stunned that Joseph could sing.  I can understand why Seleah was so upset about what happened at Church.  Hopefully she will get into therapy to deal with the child molestation that left her pregnant at the age of 12.  I hope that Preacher is rotting in hell.  As for Damaris. yeah he talked with Tameka about what has been going on.  She gave him sage advice lets hope that he listened to her.  I was LOL when he said that she was supposed to wait for him to grow up so that they could get married.  That was so cute.

The other shocker was Amaris father, Amar coming to see her while he is in the states.  I can't wait to read about the first meeting between daughter and father.

 

Oh yeah, glad to read that Daniel is back on his feet and is at work.  I hope that this means that he has a full recovery.

Thanks for a great update.



Author's Response:

You know Dem has had a mad crush on Tam ever since he was a young boy and Tam and Amaris were in college.  LOL.  Seleah will get the help she needs.  Yes Daniel is back at work full time.   Thanks for the review.  More to come soon!

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Date: October 05 2011

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 27 More Ignorance, More Stress

Thanks for the great update.  Darrell is just messed up stilling from your own child.  The sad part is as he was going through her house he was talking about how she had nothing and then he takes the one thing that her children had which was the 360 xbox.  What a despicable ass wipe Darrell is.  How in the world did Selma get mixed up with such a low life. I am sure he hasn't changed at all. 

 

Patsy and Darrell belong together to crazy demented fools together wreaking havoc.

I hope that the wedding goes well for Amaria and Julian.

Thanks



Author's Response:

Seleah hooked up with Darrell when they were both in high school.  Seems like she's the only one that grew up. 

thanks for the review!

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Date: November 29 2011

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

I am shocked by what happened to Seleah.  This explains why she is so angry with her sisters.  Thanks for a great read.

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Date: September 19 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.