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I am not a writer but I love reading all the stories that have been posted on TST and FanFiction.



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Good Things in a Small Package by Brenda1257
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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 140138
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 28 Reconciliation and Altercation

Thanks for a great update.  I was so happy that Amaris and Julian got married.  Glad that Damaris came back to the family. It was so nice that Amar was able to give his daughter away.  To bad about Ms. Wilmington turning out to be such a racist crazy woman.  The way that she attacked Paula was shocking. I can't wiat to read what happens when Seleah returns home.  I hope that Joseph goes with her to protect her and her children from the crazy ex. 

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Date: December 03 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 26 Ignorance and Abstinance

Poor Jamal, what a way to find out that your daddy is an idiot. Poor Seleah for getting involved with such an idiot.  Amaris is right about the babies grandmother.  She is crazy and conniving.  I hope that Julian will keep that in mind when he is dealing with her. The joys of a bundle of joy, I was LOL as JUlian was watching the baby monitor and hoping that his daughter wasn't going to wake up while he and Amaris were finaaly becoming intimate again.Thanks for a great update.



Author's Response:

LOL  As I tell my kids, ' You can pick your nose, you can pick your friends, but you CANNOT pick your family!  Darrell is a piece of work for sure.  Yes, Julian was praying that Justine would behave for once, and she did.  More to come soon!

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Date: November 07 2011
Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Family in Full

Thanks for a great conclusion to this fantastic story.  The ending felt more of Selah's story than Amaris though.  I want to read about Danielle and Danny and how they survide the delivery of their bundle of joy,  Thanks again for a fantastic story.

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Date: August 30 2014
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 25 A Lesson in Intimacy

Brenda thanks for a great update.  I was LOL at Joseph and the way he dealt with Seleah's old boyfriend and her son, Jamal.  Tre is a little sneaky. I hope that Amaris and Julian will be able to survive adding an unexpected new additio to their relationship.  Not looking to well for them right now.  Thanks

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Date: October 28 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

Thanks for a great update.  My goodness so Seleah and Joseph very odd combination but I think that they could work. 

Seleah secret is getting ready to be blown out of the water.  I wonder how Demaris and the rest of the family will react to this new information....

I was LOL at Daniel taking the Viagara.

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Date: September 23 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16 The Truth Will Make You Free

Thanks for a great update.  Seleah and Joseph know how to draw blood from each other.  When they do get together it will be explosive.

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Date: September 23 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 17 The Truth Will Make You Free II

Seleah makes me want to cry for her.  My goodness to be that old and not really have dated.  How sad.  I was smiling when Joseph had his talk with God.  I hope that he will be able to become the man that Seleah needs.  I think that Joseph and Seleah will be able to help each other deal with their past.  Thanks for a great update.



Author's Response:

Believe me, women like Seleah exist.  I know it's sad to hear their stories.  Thanks for the review. More is coming soon.

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Date: September 24 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 18 Let Me Lead You To The Light

Great update.  It seems that the date went very well.  I wonder what Anton's wife is going to say when she realizes that Damaris is her husbands child and not her sons.  What a mess.  I can only imagine how Damris is going to react when he find out that he was conceived when his mother was raped. Thanks

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Date: September 25 2011
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

Wow, that was very emotional.  Poor Seleah and Damaris.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Now that it's all out, healing is coming.

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Date: September 26 2011
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 20 Rebuilding After The Storm

Thanks for a great update.  Congrats on the upcoming wedding.  That is so exciting.  Mother of the Groom, you must be so happy for your son and his fiance.  Take care and have a great time at the wedding.

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Date: September 29 2011
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 22 My Past, Your Past, Our Future

Thanks for a great update.  The meeting between Amaris and her dad Amar was so great and then to find out later that her fiancee has another woman pregnant was horrible.  I hope that Amaris remembers that if she loves Julian then she will stand beside her man because that heifer got pregnant before she even knew Julian.  I hope that Julian will find out what that crazy woman did but the baby is still his.

Tam's mother is a hawt ticket.  I was LOL at her antics and I was LOL at Daniel and how he dealt with his future mother in law.  wouldn't be nice if Daniel's dad and Tam's mother became an item..probably not, but it would be interesting.  Thanks again for a great update.



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Amaris is still in shock.  Don't worry she will come around.

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Date: October 10 2011
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

I am glad that Seleah and the boys will be moving to Frederickson soon and that she will stay with her mother until the boys finish school.  I really hope that she doesn't go back to that apartment by herself because her criminal ex will be waiting.  As for Amaris what bee got into her bonnet? I guess not having a honey moon really pissed her off.  Thanks for a great update.



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Nothing went the way Amaris had planned and then the fight and no honeymoon was just too much!  She'll be alright though.  More is coming soon.

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Date: December 17 2011
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

My goodness, no wonder Kayla was so crazy she got it honestly from her mama.  Damn, that woman is wicked.  I was stunned that Kayla's planned backfired on her and now she is dead.  Amaris is an amazing woman to stand by her man when all of these evil people keep insulting her.  I can't wait to read about their wedding.Thanks for a great update.

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Date: October 17 2011
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 31 Changes and Choices

Thanks for a great update.  I can't believe that stoopid ass Darrell.  I hope that they lock him up and throw away the key.  What an idiot.  Talking about his son. 

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Date: January 13 2012
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 32 Tell Me This Is A Dream

Thanks for a great update.  I think that Jo and Seleah need to just get married.  It makes no sense for them to wait.  They love each other.  Thanks

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Date: February 04 2012
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

Brenda, thanks for the update.  I haven't read this yet but just wanted to drop a line.  When I read on my Kindle I am not able to leave a message.  

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Date: May 28 2012
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

This is a great story. Please update soon. Thanks

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Date: August 09 2012
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 35 Conquering Evil with Good

Hi Brenda1257, I hope that you will complete this story soon. Thanks

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Date: June 10 2013
ME&U by Elizablu
Rated: 17 and older
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Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 127262
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014

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Title: ME&U

Thanks for a great update.  Those two are smoking hawt. Coco's tatoos sound intense.



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There's a story behind that tattoo and it will be revealed later on. THanks for reading!

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Date: May 01 2012
Title: ME&U

All I am going to say is THE SUSPENSE IS KLIILING ME OF WHAT WENT DOWN IN NY.  I can't wait to find out what happened.  It sounds really bad.  I hate Cayenne what a low down dirty dog she is.  To sleep with her sisters man. The level of deviousness this woman has subjected her family to is unbelievable.  Thanks for a great update.  Also, go Mal for following Coco.  That's right protect your woman because for some reason she thinks that she is invincible.



Author's Response:

So glad that you enjoyed it. I will be explaining NY soon. Cayenne is like a disease that just ravages everything her wake. Mal will follow CoCo from the bowels of Hell to the gates of Heaven...He doesn't know why, but he's not complaining. He loves her. Thanks for reading!

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Date: November 09 2011
Title: ME&U

Thanks for a great read.  No wonder everyone hates Cayenne.  I can't believe that she left Coco with those crazy people.  



Author's Response:

So glad that you loved it. Thanks for reading!

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Date: September 19 2011
Title: ME&U

Cayenne is a poor excuse for a parent.  The fact that she is planning to steal Mal away from her daughter because she is jealous is disgusting.   Thanks



Author's Response:

Cayenne is a very poor excuse for a mother. You are right on that one. Thanks for reading!

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Date: April 14 2012
Title: ME&U

Thanks for a great update.  I wonder what Cayenne has gotten her daughter involved in and does CoCo know that their is a bounty on her head.  I like the new characters as well.  Mal is such a badass, damn he is hawt. 



Author's Response:

Glad that you enjoyed the update! I will be discussing the NY fiasco further along the story, but HINTS! will be given, so pay attention. Ain't Mal HAWT...Thanks for reading!

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Date: October 24 2011
Title: ME&U

I like how close Tabby and CoCo are.  I really despise Mal's mother, what an evil *B*.  I hope that she gets lost in the forest of Luminesce.  As for Sasha coming to the states with Mal's evil mother I hope that her husband will be waiting for her, another crazy woman.  Thanks for a great update.



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They are very close, they are best friends as well as sisters. Katelyn is a evil bitch and her day is quickly coming. Thanks for reading.

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Date: April 23 2012
Title: ME&U

Thanks for a greta update.  I can't wait to read more about what Bas learns from Papa Leon.  Mal and Cocobean were doing some serious loving to leave her but prints in the hood of his car. 



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So glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!

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Date: April 05 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.