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ME&U by Elizablu
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Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 127262
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014

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Title: ME&U

Thanks for a great update.  I hope that Cayenne gets her ass handed to her soon.  Coco needs to give in and just get with Mal.  I think that Samuel is way over his head in trying to get revenge from Coco and Mal.  He  needs to concentrate on his no good wife.  Jethro is an interesting character...he left his wife and chuildren for Cayene and stated that he was Coco's father when in actuality his brother that was married to May is her father therefore she is really  Tabby and Cal's sister.  If Jethro was really her dad then aunty loose booty and the cop that hates Coc would be her siblings but they are related though because of the brothers.  Do they know that they are related? I can't wait to read Mal's reaction when he finds out someone is trying to get information about him.  Also why does Cayenne want to meet with Coco?  why doesn't she just go to where she lives?

 



Author's Response:

So glad that you loved the update. Cayenne will get hers.  CoCo is stubborn...it will be a minute before she gives in and really get with him. Samuel is running on pure stupidity and hurt pride and I agree wholeheartedly about checkin' his wife. It was really her fault anyway. Jethro is very interesting. You will learn more about him later on. I can't wait to see Mal reaction too. I will explained why Cayenne can't come to CoCo in the next couple of chapters. Thanks for reading!

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Date: October 03 2011
Title: ME&U

Thanks for a great update.  So much happened in this chapter my goodness.  I was shocked that Tabby saw her dad at her wedding (I don't remember reading that at the time of the wedding).  And the fact that she is dreaming of a little girl...I wonder if that is CocoBean).

The conversation between Mal and Sebastian was enlightening.  I can't wait for them to find out more about Cayenne (she has the right name because she a hawt mess....just  goes around fucking with people...the evil so and so....can't stand her).The fact that Samuel Maxwell is digging into his past and that Sasha tried to hook up again with Mal.  I was LOL when Mal found out that aunty loose booty is Jethro Bullocks daughter.  (So does this mean that Cocobean doesn't know that auntyloose booty is technically her sister? and the cop that is always busting her ass is her brother?)

Mal's mother is scary and vindictative.  I can see her being in the same category as Cayenne...CRAZY!!!!!!!! I  like her dad though.  Hopefully he will be able to let Mal know that his crazy mother is looking for him.  Will all of these crazy people end up in Luminesce at the same time?

I like the way that Mal deals with Cocobean.  I can't wait for them to really have sex...it is going to be explosive.

Thanks for a great update.



Author's Response:

So glad that you liked the update! Tabby tends to "see" things when she is with child. During her wedding in Full Bloom, we were veiwing it from Mama Lundy veiwpoint. I love the scenes with Mal and Bas...there will be more in the future. Cayenne's name does fit her. Dorian isn't going to leave Mal walking around blind. He will let his grandson know what Katelyn is planning. Luminensce will be seeing fireworks...definetly!!! Mal have found a way to deal with CoCo...fun times ahead. Thanks for reading!

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Date: October 15 2011
Title: ME&U

Thanks for a great update.  I really am enjoying the story.  I can't wait to read what happens next.  Thanks



Author's Response:

So glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!

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Date: November 26 2011
Title: ME&U

I need some clarification...was Malcolm molested by his stefather? Cayenne and Samuel Maxwell, I think that Samuel should have listened to his grandfather and not have gone to the states because now he is making a bargain with the devil. So Samuel's grandfather stole the recipet from Luminesce. As for Coco and Mal, what can be saud except for they are so explosive together.  Thanks for a great update.



Author's Response:

You need some clarification...trust what your 1st mind tell ya. Thanks for reading!

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Date: January 11 2012
Title: ME&U

Thanks for a great update.  I really enjoyed it.  



Author's Response:

So glad that your are enjoying it. Thanks for reading.

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Date: June 03 2012
Title: ME&U

Thanks for a great update.  I love Papa Elliott he and his wife are something else.  AS for Coco, she just needs to give into Mal already.  I can't wait to see what is on the phone that Linnette swiped.  So grandma Havana has come back to warn Coco to be ready and to rest for the big blow out.  I liked the fact that Mal could smell the perfume as well another sign that he and Coco are right for each other.  I also want to know what Woo revealed after being forced to take the truth serum.  I guess he is now food for the plant...YIKES.



Author's Response:

So glad that you are enjoying it. CoCo is stubborn and letting go of her hangup will be a major struggle. What Linny finds out on Princess's phone will be revealed in the next update. Grandma Havanna made a promise that she would always look after CoCo till she felt that her granddaughter was finally safe. Thanks for reading.

 

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Date: June 10 2012
Title: ME&U

My goodness Linette now know who pochantus was communicating with. Ti bad crazy Cayenne was able to get to Mary. I was surprised that Mindy let Woo go from her Venus fly trap plant. I knew that they were going ti be ambushed at this, event. Hopefully because Linette and Sabastian are aware that Cayenne is near they can warn. Coco and Mal. Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response:

Yep Princess is a traitor, but I wonder what Cayenne and her assiociates have over head to make her do their bidding. Thanks for reading!

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Date: August 05 2012
Title: ME&U

I can't wait to read more.  So the family members are having premonitions that theshit is getting ready to hit the fan,  The fact that even Mary feels something bad is to about to go down is chilling.  So who is threatening Princess?  I like the exchange between Coco and Mal.  She finally has a love that has her best interest at heart and will protect her the best that he can. Thanks for a great update.



Author's Response:

Next chapter will be a dozzy, so get ready! Thanks for reading.

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Date: July 14 2012
Title: ME&U

I just reread and I cant wait to read what happens next.I think that this where Cayenne., Mal.'s mom,Sasha and Samuel willtry to ambush them. I can't wait for the melee to begin. Team Luminesce is going to kick aime butt. Thanks and update soon please.

Author's Response:

Team Luminensce will be stomping some fools most definitely. thanks for reading.

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Date: July 28 2012
Title: ME&U

Oh no you didn't leave it there....NOoooooooooooooooooooooooo.  Damn Cayene's evil ass to cut Mary int he face, but Mary was whooping her ass and almost drowned that bitch before she was interrupted.  Damn to bad Junior pulled her off that crazy bitch.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  Damn!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yep, Cayenne tried but Mary SHUT IT DOWNNN! Thanks for reading!

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Date: August 20 2012
Title: ME&U

I forgot to say thanks for the great update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

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Date: August 20 2012
Title: ME&U

I didn't realize that Mary cheated on Calvin and he cheated with Cayenne to get back at her. I wonder who Mary cheated with.
I was LOL at the phrase referred to Mal HUCK SMASH. Thanks

Author's Response:

Yep there was alot of cheating going on. Thanks for reading.

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Date: August 20 2012
Title: ME&U

Welll....thanks for the update. I was so excited to see an update. Glad that so far the standoff is done. Now for the rest of the craziness. When will Mary get taken to the hospital to have her faced stitched up?

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Date: June 25 2013
Title: ME&U

Thanks for a great update. I was LOL at Junior and how he handled the reporter. As for Mal I could only imagine how the police were like WTF?

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Date: July 04 2013
Title: ME&U

I guess Jethro is getting out of prison. I hope that he can get to Coco before anything else happens. I was LOL at the inmates and prison guards checking out Mal's noticeable package. I am surprised that the friends are all in the same jail. AS for Coco, I don't blame her for not giving up her jewelry. Thanks

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Date: July 21 2013
Title: ME&U

Please, please update this fabulous story. 

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Date: November 29 2015
In The Eyes of the Beholder by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 302]
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Lorilei Riley is a large black girl who was uprooted at age five when her mother marries and relocates to the small mostly white mining town of Appalachia.  She is the object of ridicule and scorn.  She immediately bonds with Micah Hamilton a young classmate who is also an outsider because of a large growth on his face.

Micah gets a chance at a normal life by having a surgery to remove the growth and Lorilei wonders as they both reach adulthood if Micah has remained with her out of friendship and loyalty or if a guy like him, could really come to  love a plus size girl like her.

 

In The Eyes of the Beholder is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Ugly Girls Need Love Too
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 84367
Read Count: 80852
Published: September 29 2011
Updated: June 15 2012

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Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Thanks for a great update.  To bad that Ronald died before Lorelei could see the man that the other people were talking about at his funeral.  I love the way that Micah is so affectionate and supportive of Lei.  I think that Lei is making a mistake in saying that they should date other people.  Do I think that either will have sex with others probably not but she is setting herself and Micah up for some hurt.  I think that Beth is going to be a problem.  

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Date: December 09 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Yeah the blue novus was removed from Micah's face.  I really love the relationship between Micah and Lei.  To bad their celebration had to be ruined by Ronald Riley.  I don't think that Lei is taking how crazy her father is seriously enough.  At this point she probably needs to have a restraining oorder against her own father.  How sad is that.  At least Joe Bob and Candance are aware of the danger about Lei's father. Thanks for a great update. 



Author's Response:

 A part of Lei doesn't want to do that, because he is her father.  She thinks that she can handle him.  We'll have to see about that....

More to come soon!

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Date: November 05 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Poor Micah, I really hope that the novus isn't growing back.  That would be so terrible for him especially now that he makes money from his face.  I think that Lorilei will love him regardless of what he looks like.

I love Sara Lee and the girls they are very entertaining.

Yeah for Beany and her husband reconnecting.  Thanks goodness they talked about their concerns.

As for Ronald he is one sick dude.   I can't stand the stoopid sick preverted idiot.  what does he plan to do to his daughter.  He gives me the creeps.

Thanks for a great update.



Author's Response:

Micah's mother let it grow when he was a child because she didn't know any better.  Micah is going to be proactive.    Ronald Riley is a creep who wants to bully his daughter into accepting him in her life.  It's not going to work.  More to come soon.

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Date: October 29 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

My goodness, that sex scene was so hawt...wooh...I need a cigarette after that... I am so happy for Lei and Micah.  I love the dress.  It is beautiful.  I love her Papa, he is so good to her and the way he talked to Micah man to man.  Also, I was a little surprised that Micah and Lei both told her parents that they were going to spend the weekend together.  Also that the sex was so good between them for the first time.  Thanks for a great read.  Loved it.



Author's Response:

Well they both knew that being from a small town that if they didn't tell them and then didn't come home their families would think the worse and then they'd have the sheriff looking for them.  LOL.

MOre to come soon.

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Date: October 20 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Thanks for a great update.  Yeah for Micah and Lei being engaged.

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Date: October 23 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Cast Pictures

Good cast.  Thanks

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Date: October 03 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Looks Can Be Deceiving

I really like this story.  Joe Bob seems like a simple man with a lot of love in his heart for his wife and stepdaughter.  I am glad that Micah was able to have the surgery to remove the novus on his face.  How lucky for him that Lei has an aunt that could find people to help him.  As for Jessica, what a mean child she is.  I can't for someone to kick her uppity behind.  Thanks

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Date: October 03 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Thanks for a great update.  My goodness Lei's father is crazy.  I couldn't believe that he slapped her like that.  What an idiot.  I love Miriam she is to funny.  Thanks

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Date: October 03 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Miriam is a riot.  Couldn't believe that she thought that her son would like Annie.  She was to young and insipid.  But smart enough to know that Teddy wasn't interested.  I am glad that Candance and her family are their for Micah and his family.  Micah was so lucky when he became friends with Lei.  I was LOL at the conversation between Micah and Lei and then his brothers offering their two cents worth about them being a couple.

At first I thought that Teddy might get interested in Micah's mother but I am glad that he is attracted to aunt Beanie.

Thanks for a great update.

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Date: October 07 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.