Penname: Divsionred [Contact]

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Member Since: July 10 2008

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I am not a writer but I love reading all the stories that have been posted on TST and FanFiction.



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Lorilei Riley is a large black girl who was uprooted at age five when her mother marries and relocates to the small mostly white mining town of Appalachia.  She is the object of ridicule and scorn.  She immediately bonds with Micah Hamilton a young classmate who is also an outsider because of a large growth on his face.

Micah gets a chance at a normal life by having a surgery to remove the growth and Lorilei wonders as they both reach adulthood if Micah has remained with her out of friendship and loyalty or if a guy like him, could really come to  love a plus size girl like her.

 

In The Eyes of the Beholder is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Ugly Girls Need Love Too
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 84367
Read Count: 80855
Published: September 29 2011
Updated: June 15 2012


Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

To bad that aunty and niece both are so insecure with the men/boy in their lives.  I just hope that Michal doesn't break Lei's little heart.  Although she could end up leaving Micah.  What ever happened to her father? 

I like Beanie and Teddy.  I can't wait for them to get together (if you know what I mean...LOL) I hope she turns Teddy out.

Thanks for a great update.

 



Author's Response:

Ronald Riley is lying low right now,  LOL but he's not given up yet.  He's biding his time.  The alpha in Teddy is about to come out strong. 

 

More to come soon!

 

 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Wow, Micah is a model.  That is fantastic news.  Yeah for Teedy for going to Sabrina and getting her to almost agree to an engagement.  Their conversation in the car was hilarious about her having the hole that he wasn't going to be able to fill anymore.  Thanks for a great update.  Loved it.



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thanks for the review.  Teddy is determined to get her to the altar.  More to come soon!

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Date: October 07 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Thanks for a great update.  I was LOL at Teddy Lee.  He was determined to get his woman.  Good for him.  I hope that Loreli and Micah will continue to be close.  I was glad that Micah told Jessica off.  Go Micah!!!!!



Author's Response:

Micah knows what he wants and he's not ashamed of wanting it!  Thanks for the review.

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Date: October 11 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Brenda, thanks for a great update.  I was LOL at Beanie and Teddy.  I don't like Mrs. Greenly she is a spiteful woman.  Of course she wants her daughter connected with Micah.  The way that she looked down on Micah whenhe showed her a picture of Loreli was unforgivable.  I hope Micah doesn't trust that viper.  I thought that it was a good idea to add Emily to the MADD commercial.  That was very nice justure on Micah's part.

Poor Loreli and her crazy daddy.  Samuel Jackson is a good for this crazy character.

Thanks 



Author's Response:

LOL  Everybody seems to like Samuel L as the dad.  Lei has not heard the last of Ronald Ellis Riley!!  More to come soon!

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Date: October 13 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Oh, oh...trouble in paradise.  To bad Lei is so insecure.  I guess being called ugly all of your life has left her thinking that she is ugly.  If she doesn't like the way she looks why doesn't she do something about it?  Also, if she wants fancier underwear, she is working why can't she afford to buy some? I like Micah but I can see that he will move on without Lei soon because she doesn't trust them as a couple which is actually very sad.  Thanks



Author's Response:

There is a lot going on in Lei's head.  Lane Bryant has sales after all, but she comes up with all kinds of excuses because she hasn't been honest with Micah or herself.  Now that she's on the verge of losing him, she knows that she has to change.  More to come soon!

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Date: October 16 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

I really enjoyed this update.  It was so nice to read about Lei feeling more confident.  Her grandmother's friends were so funny.  See you can always learn something from older people.  I love the walk.  I am going to have to practice that move...LOL.  Poor Micah, he just doesn't realize that he has unleashed the woman.  Yeah!!!!Thanks for a great read. 



Author's Response:

LOL  I could write a book just on the stuff church ladies have said.  They really know their stuff!

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Date: October 17 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

The Graduation was great.  To bad Ronald got into a fight with Billy Bob. Now after he has agreed to go into counseling he's dead.  How sad for Lei.  I am sure that this is going to be a set back for her and that they all will blame themselves for his death. As for Jessica I am sure she is going after Micah's brother to get next to Micah but who knows maybe the brother maybe stronger and smarter than they are giving him credit. Thanks for a great but sad update.

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Date: November 26 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

I can't believe that we are at the end of the story.  I was so happy that Mika and Lei got married.  I was hoping for a bun in the oven.  It was nice to read how the rest of the family was . Thanks for a great read.

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Date: June 16 2012

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Tyler could count on one hand the number of attempted, but failed relationships that he had; had. It was getting to the point that he just was ready to give up on finding love or the right person he could give his entire self to. Most of the women he had a relationship with didn't last long not because they didn't want it, they just couldn't handle his faults or flaws. Tyler Hollis had a secret an extremely large secret that over the years, he had learned how to control to an extent, but at some point in the relationship, it would become the topic of conversation and downhill the relationships would go. He was looking for that one special woman that wouldn't mind them; he wasn't sure if she was the one, but the way he was feeling about her he wanted to make her the one. It wasn't very many women he had wanted in his thirty-eight years, but her he felt he couldn't live without.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Kayla had only had two real relationships in her life, okay let's be honest one and she wasn't even sure that was the real thing. It had been over seven years ago. She had always focused on her career, she was what they called a workaholic, her best friends India and Traci would tell her she was sexually deprived, that she needed to started living before she woke up one morning and life had passed her bye. However, never in her right mind did she think she would be in a predicament like this, it was totally out of her character to let something like this happen, and to let it happen like this. It was overwhelming more like surreal an impulsive act, or so she thought. Could it have been a calculating move on his part or was it just something that happened to happen. But if they both were completely honest with themselves it had been building ever since that faithful snowy morning.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Disclaimer: There is no Copyright Infringement intended. The names and characters in this story are of my own creation, so any similarities to any person or person's in this story dead or alive fictional or non-fictional is purely coincidental. Any and all recognizable characters involved in the images are solely owned and the property of their respective owners or by an unknown developer THAT IS NOT ME!! I do not own it/them and will not make money on them. The author of this story is in no way associated with the franchise/franchises of any creators, producer, owner or any media that may be used along with this story.

© Kaleah, 2011.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:Yes
Word count: 218680
Read Count: 114540
Published: October 03 2011
Updated: January 01 2013


Title: Chapter 7: He Will Never Love Me Like You Do

I would say that he has every right to be upset.  Thanks

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Date: October 24 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Meet The Cast

Good cast.  I like the fact that you give a brief blurb about each character.  Thanks

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Date: October 10 2011

Title: Chapter 2: A Chance Meeting with you

Thanks for a great read.

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Date: October 10 2011

Title: Chapter 3: If Loving you is Wrong

Great update.  I don't blame her for not wanting to date in the work place it can cause a lot of problems if things don't work out.  But what about the eye candy in the elevator? Thanks

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Date: October 12 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Pieces of my Heart

Great update.  Glad that Tyler doesn't work at her company.  As for Mike dude is a litlle pushy and obsessive.  Thanks

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Date: October 12 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Born To Give My Love To You

Thanks for a great update.  It seems that Tyler is determined to date Kayla.  

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Date: October 17 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Blame it on the Snow

Oh wow, Tyler went back and had sex with Kayla.  Aren't they dating other people. This can't be good.  Thanks

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Date: October 17 2011

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[Reviews - 359]
Summary:

  

 

Lila James knows that her friendship with seventeen year old Chase Almeida is extremely inappropriate, but she still isn't prepared when his older brother Jack decides to tell her just how inappropriate it actually is-- inadvertently igniting a fire that had been burning quietly inside of them for years.

*****Lila's Thunder has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 670
Read Count: 65036
Published: October 07 2011
Updated: September 09 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Thanks for a great update.

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Date: March 18 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Thanks for a great update.  I can't believe that Lila is going to go with Jack.  

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Date: March 18 2012

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I like Tracy she is funny.  Thanks

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Date: March 18 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start to the story.

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Date: March 18 2012

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow that was intense.   witI feel sad for them all.  I believe that AShley ad something to do with the picture that was  left at Lila's house. Thanks for a great update.

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Date: March 24 2012

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thanks for a great update.  I like Chase but he can't have Lila because she is to old for him.  Thanks

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Date: March 19 2012

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That was surprising that Jack admitted that he loves Lila. Them being together was explosive.  Thanks

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Date: March 19 2012

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I wonder if Chase is responsible for the job offer at Harvard.  In addition, who gave the money that she needed for the class trip.  I think that Lila is in love with both brothers.  Thanks

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Date: March 19 2012

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Thanks for the update.

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Date: August 07 2012

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Summary:

Dijnae Anderson is a full-figured high school junior. She's dealing with crazy best friends, a protective brother, her insecurities, and her attraction to the Co-Captain of the Football team. No one said high school was easy and she's definitely being put to the test.


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 15199
Read Count: 15499
Published: October 16 2011
Updated: February 02 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start to the story.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.