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Real name: Sharon

Member Since: July 10 2008

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I am not a writer but I love reading all the stories that have been posted on TST and FanFiction.



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My Lover, My Friend by Suprina Frazier
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Although Andre and Cindy grew up together as next door neighbors, they treated each other more like brother and sister. Years later when Cindy comes home fresh from a painful divorce, Andre suddenly discovers that his feelings for her have changed. Unfortunately, he has to hide his new feelings in order to help facilitate emotional healing in her life.

 

Just when Cindy begins to see Andre in a different light, a woman from his past returns and tries to sabotage their happiness. Will this ideal couple’s union ever materialize now?

 

 

My Lover, My Friend © 2002-2009 by Suprina Frazier

 

Latest revision completed: January 2009.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 44927
Read Count: 14385
Published: June 20 2009
Updated: June 20 2009

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Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Oh poor Andre and yet so close...his ex has a lot of nerve.  My goodness, to walk into his home and to pick up the phone and say what she did.  What nerve, the heifer.  Thanks and Cindy needs o understand that he is not her ex.

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Heifer is the right word. Grrr... Don't like his ex at all.

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Date: June 21 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Great update and they finally admitted that they love each other and consummated that love.  I hope that they will not be to hard on themselves because they consummated their love.  They are two healthy young people that have been fighting their love for each other for awhile now.  Thanks for a great read.  Poor Melvin hopefully he will meet a new woman that he is attracted to after Cindy tells him about being in love with her best friend and apologize to Melvin for stringing him along.  Thanks

Author's Response: Everything's gonna work out fine, Divsionred. No worries.

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Date: June 21 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Oh no who let the devil in?  Please make her go away before she can cause chaos.  Thanks

Author's Response: Chuckle. :)

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Date: June 21 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Cindy don't let the devil win girl...you are stronger than you think and he is not your ex.  Thanks

Author's Response: It's good to 'see' you routing for Cindy.

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Date: June 21 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

She let the devil in...that is to bad...come on now...think Cindy, think.  Thanks

Author's Response: How many times we have to tell ourselves that - think. If we did more of it, we might avoid quite a bit of unhappinessness in our own lives.

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Date: June 21 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Shakes head in shame for Cindy for allowing this skeezer to make her think that Andre is cheating on her with that heifer.  Maybe he should find a woman that will believe in him.  Granted Cindy had a terrible marriage were her husband did cheat on her a lot but why would she think that Andre would do the same thing?  Doesn't she know who her best friend is....didn't she and her sister joke with him about being only a one woman man and now she can believe that he changed so quickly no baby he needs to move on.  I am very disappointed in Cindy.  Thanks

Author's Response: Cindy was clueless at times or rather blinded by her own past hurts.

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Date: June 21 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Thanks for a great update.  Poor Andre.  Cindy grow up. Thanks

Author's Response: She's getting there. Trying our patience on the way, lol, but getting there nevertheless.

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Date: June 21 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Thanks for a great update...at least Cindy is starting to wake up out of her comatose existence.  Thanks

Author's Response: About time, huh? Yay, Cindy!

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Date: June 21 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

This storm will not destroy any but the storm it self because if she lets as her sister refer to him as fair-skinned, wavy-haired beast if she allows him the privilege of causing her grief than she deserves everything that she gets.  Oh yes she does.  She has already allowed one devil in to disrupt her true path with a very giving and loving man and then she will allow this feces in to continue down the same path of destruction..?  I think not.

Author's Response: You ain't never lied. Thanks again for faithfully commenting along the way. It's very much appreciated.

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Date: June 21 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

I am so glad that Cindy finally took out her anger on her ex.  Also that Julia got her comeuppance the skank heifer.  Thanks

Author's Response: Both exes got their comeuppance. You should see me grinning. :)

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Date: June 21 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Too bad the family had to step in...but in the same vain thank goodness for family stepping in because these two would have never gotten back together without them.  Thanks

Author's Response: Sometimes family got to step in. Interventions aren't just for addicts, you know. Sometimes lovers need that helping hand, too.

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Date: June 21 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Yeah, Cindy and Andre are married.  Thanks as for her ex...who cares about that devil in disguise, the idiot.  He got his comeuppance.  The idiot. I doubt very much if he (Charles)  learned from his mistakes.  The idiot.

Author's Response: *Big grin*

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Date: June 21 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

This was a great story.  I loved it and I am glad that the family intervened other wise there may have bot been a HEA.  Thanks again.

Author's Response: You're welcome and thanks for visiting with me and leaving all those wonderful comments.

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Date: June 21 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Letter To Readers

Hi Suprina Frazier   thanks for a great story.  I look forward to reading more stories by you on this site.  Take Care.

Author's Response: Feel free to stop by anytime, Divsionred.

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Date: June 21 2009
Four Walls, For Love, Forever by tpeezy22
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary: Mackenzie Armstrong moves from Arkansas to Chicago to start her job at an advertising agency. She meets new people while she deals with being far from home and the people she love. On her first day, she has an altercation with a fellow coworker, Scott Ross, a man of many quirks. It sparks tension and a war of words between the two, but what will happen when a business trip to New York forces them to stay in the same room?

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 35118
Read Count: 49398
Published: August 29 2009
Updated: January 24 2010

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Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

THANKS FOR A GREAT UPDATE.  GLAD THAT MACS FAMILY IS ACCEPTING SCOTT.

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Date: January 15 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Keesha was so wrong for getting Scott high...what a skank she turned out to be..

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Date: January 11 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Thanks for a great update,  I am glad that they are talking to each other.  Poor Scott being mugged. 

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Date: September 12 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I don't like Carol.  I am sure that she noticed more than Mackenzie and Scott wanted her to.  Thanks for a great update.

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Date: September 15 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Thanks for a great update...can't wait to see what happens at this Thanksgiving dinner. 

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Date: November 26 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great start to the story.  Thanks

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Date: August 29 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Thanks for a great update.  I kind of feel bad for Scott.  Doesn't seems like anyone that he works with likes him.  What is POV?  Why is he the way that he is?  He seems to have a germ phoia as well.  Thanks

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Date: August 30 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Thanks for the update but for Mackenzie to go off on a fellow worker like that was so unprofessional.  I understand that no one seems to like Scott but my goodness the way that they treat him is so wrong.  As for Mackenzie she needs to start acting like a professional instead of a baby.  If she is so home sick then she needs to go back to Arkanasas.

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Date: September 02 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thanks for a great udate.  But I am confused to why they are bad mouthing Scott so bad. Thanks

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Date: September 03 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I can't wait for the conference in the Big Apple.  It should be fun.  Thanks

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Date: September 05 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thanks for a great update.  At east Scoot and Mackenzie are being civil to each other.

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Date: September 06 2009

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