Love it.
Uhh uhh lust is a wicked drug.
Wondering how the rest of the trip will be.
I'M on to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/11/11 04:19 am
i'm liking this story. awesome tension. can't wait for more.
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/10 02:49 am
I'M REALLY ENJOING THIS STORY .
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/08/10 06:36 pm
Oh my god...that was the hotness. I love this story and Hugh Jackman as twins...yummy. Keep writing and I can't wait for the update.
Reviewer: mocasoul Signed [Report This]Date: 23/08/10 06:16 am
Loved it!! Hmm, Samara and Jude seem to be thinking about dangerous territory. Can't wait to see what happens there.... Hope Noah and Jude can make it work.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 23/08/10 02:23 am
HOT!! HAUTE!! HAWT!! Oh man...Jude and Samara? Is this the favor Noah wants? wow...they are both hot for each other..is that why Noah told Jude to meet his wife before he says no to his favor? More please..I need more sooner rather than later. Great Job!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/10 05:41 pm
Oh my...Samara and Jude are "feeling" each other and if that's Noah's plan then kudos to him but still...I got a knot in my tummy when I read she O:d to Jude on her mind and that's a good thing, lol! It shows I have developed an attachment with your characters and that's after 3 chs! I'm amazed!...Looking forward to the couple's stay at the ranch and with Samara and Jude having a hard to time keeping their minds off each other - who knows how it will go...Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/10 09:46 am
I can't wait for more of this story, It is gooood! After readung this chapter I feel the need for the next chapter real sooon!
Reviewer: none Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/10 06:35 am
I'M HOOKED!!! i love everything about this story - definitely looking forward to more!!!
Reviewer: medicateme :) Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/10 02:05 am
Great update, and well written! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/10 12:39 am
Hmm what is the favor? Can I guess that it has something to do with Jude giving Samara a baby or just plan old giving it to her?
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/08/10 12:10 am
Im glad Jude is going to work towards having a relationship with Noah. Its going to be interesting what happens with Samara and Jude. I think Noah is going to eventually push her towards Jude to know that she is well taken care of when he is gone.
Reviewer: anj1874 Signed [Report This]Date: 21/08/10 10:09 pm
Maybe Noah wants to ask him to be a husband to his wife after he dies? I think that is the other matter that he wants to talk about.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/08/10 09:59 pm
Awesome update. Is this what Noah wanted to accomplish on this trip to reconcile with is brother, for him to take care of his wife, interesting?
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 21/08/10 09:46 pm
I really like this sentence:
"He always wanted a big family and had enhanced the ranch over the years in anticipation of the day that his big family would show up and claim him."
I really like the image behind it. Very nice.
And Noah refusing chemo is a thinker....hmm.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. Yep Noah not wanting to lose his hair speaks to his vanity. I have two dear relatives who have bested cancer and the tales that I can tell about treatments and patients..well it would be a very lenghty one. To my surprise I learned that quite a bit of cancer patients refuse chemo treatments. Reviewer: Onimosity Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/08/10 09:01 pm