I'm looking forward to Jude and Samara's weekend getaway.

I'm happy that Jude has decided to grant Noah last wish. I think it will be good for them both, the ultimate bond.

So I was trying to think if there was anything that I wanted to add to my other review and the only thing I can think of is how much I love this story. I love the premise, I love the characters (maybe not Noah as much as the others), and I love the really long updates. So much to think about.

And whenever you are ready to post another update, you just go right ahead.

Like now. 

I know this may be wrong, but part of me wants Samara to be with Jude.  AFTER Noah passes away. They are already are developing feelings for one another.  Hopefully they will also have a child together.  It is wrong of me to want them to be a couple? You have written this story so brilliantly that I fine myself having emotions over the characters.  THANKYOU, for continuing the story again.

I just feel that Jude has suffered so much at a young age.  He feels as if he can not have intercourse the normal way, needs to be in a force environment.  I know that Samara will teach him how to be a gentle lover.

If you didn't have me before, you really got me now.

I like the way you make me feel the characters emotions, all of them are torn in different directions because of Noah's illness.

They all want to do what's right but they don't want to hurt anyone. Unfortunately in a situation like this it is inevitable and we can only hope that before Noah dies they all make their peace so that the survivors can move on.

Love the pics, I saw them and smiled they would have made a beautiful couple riding off into the sunset together in their Healey, a scarf around her hair so it wouldn't blow in the wind and his arm about her shoulder.

Sigh

You almost made me late for work today (shame on you) that’s just how good this story was. Every emotion you could think of played a part in this story. I really did enjoy it you did an excellent job. BTW you do know your cars lol

Author's Response: Thank you and I hope that you made it in on time. LOL I actually got hooked on the cars recently I've been attending classic car shows like crazy now; my husband finds it amusing.

That was absolutely fabulous!  Love this story.  I bow to your greatness.  I can't wait for the next chapter. 

Author's Response:

:-) I am glad that you liked this chapter. Next chap is up.

So I will write a real review tomorrow when I am not laying in bed reading on my phone but I had to tell you right now that I loved it. You have a way with a phrase and beautiful imagery. I love Samara and Jude, their mutual vulnerability and the way they are both kind of starving for love and physical affection. But i'll talk about them nope later. Right now I want to talk about Noah. I know he is dying but his thinking seems so simplistic and selfish. If if does this for his brother and his wife then the awful things he's done don't matter. And if's done some bad things. Letting his brother go to jail for him, refusing chemo...Noah seems to be blind to the consequences of his own actions on some levels. And he stood up his wife. It will be interesting to see how he delp when/if jude and samara do make love. I have more thoughts but am literally typing this on my phone so will comment again later but very well done.

Not trying to sound like a stalker. But I check the site several times a day looking to see if you have updated. If you have not consider it before, you really may want to publish the story as a complete book. I am not trying tell you how to run your life so please don’t be offended. Just stating that you are a good writer.

I know that there are several others who visit that site that feel the same. I look forward to an update whenever you have the time and patience to place one. Thank you in advance.

GREAT STORY I am not sure if I said that prior to asking for an update.

I am so liking the story.  Please update soon.  I am trying to figure out how the story will play out.  I know I would like to see the brothers make up. I hope Jude gives his brothers wife a baby the old fashion way.  Hell they can even comfort each other when Noah passes away and find love with each other.

Your rating is 100 in my book.  We are only able to go to 10 here on the site.

Please continue this story.  I just came across it today. You are a gifted and talented writer thank you for sharing your gift with us.  I would buy this if you wrote and sold as a book.

If you put pen to paper (or fingers to keyboard) and tell of a world that only exists in your head then you are a writer.

On to the story. 

Really enjoyed the flashback to the crime. Good to see both their perspectives because I was (and still am a little bit) finding it hard to feel for Noah. How could he let his brother serve his time, the plotting behind Jude and Samara's back...he is an interesting one.  

Samara would view it as Jude's baby...interesting and thought-provoking.

I love this story and can't wait for more.  

Well I think this was wonderful and have to disagree that you're not a real writer.  So much emotion here that I could feel.  I think this will only get better.

I love this story! great update. You have me hooked. I feel for Noah, wow it takes a very strong man to care about his wife's sexual satisfaction. I get what he is trying to do, he is brave. And Samara....wow lucky girl.

You a good writer! I feel everything that your characters do, so trust me..you have skills. Next chapter please :-)