Very good start! I like Ryan and Jackie already. They seem like they'd be fun to hang out with. Who is this mystery guy Ryan bumped into? I guess I should read to find out more. :)
On a side note, I minored in hospitality management, so it's neat that Ryan's character is pursuing a career in that field.
Author's Response:
yay thank you, im glad that people can take to their friendship. cause i was wondering if i was delivering it good. yes you must read more to find out more about him. he is a cutie.
on the side note, that so cool that you minored in it. its actually my major. im in and have been in love with the resturant business since i was a little girl. so in away some this story is apart of me. and what i love and do. the people who i know and what not. so i hope i give it justice. maybe you can give me some tips if i miss anything. so what did you major in?
thanks again for the review - dani
Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 16/04/09 07:02 am
Ooo classy come back...“maybe WE can do it again next time.”
Okay that was cute...now onto the next chapter....
Author's Response: I have to say, your reviews put a smile on my face. Im working on the next chapter now. it should be up by the this weekend. thank you again - Dani Reviewer: Cma Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 05/01/09 01:31 pm
Cute first chapter! This seems to be her day.
Author's Response:
it really does, i know i would be excited if i was her. thank you so much for stay with me and reviewing again. its mean alot to me. chapter two is out now and i hope you enjoy it.
thanks again - Dani
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 05/01/09 02:31 am
this was really interesting...i cant wait to see where this story is going
cant wait for the next update...
Author's Response:
thank you again for the reviews and the stars, it means the world to me. :o) i just updated with chapter two, i do hope you like it.
Dani
Reviewer: Cma Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/01/09 07:32 pm
Awww....its a shame he's only Mr. Right Now.
Author's Response:
it is, isnt? or is it? he may just win her heart but gotta keep coming back for more to find out! ;o) thank you so much for the review.
Dani
Reviewer: Flikchick Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/01/09 06:47 pm