Loved the re-arranging of the bedroom furniture. That is so something I do. I can't stand for everything to be in the same place all the time. I think I rearrange every two months or so. Still enjoying the friendship between Ryan and Jackie. Jacob seems like a cool dude. Can't wait for you to delve into that character more and to see him and Ryan interact. Also, I didn't mention this before but I like that everyone calls her by her last name. I think it's cool. Good job so far! :)
Author's Response: *squeals* its too cool how you noticed that a select group calls her by her last name. I did that purposely. yay about ryan and jackie. im glad about jacob too. im actully working on that chapter now. im not going to lie, it means alot that you review when you did. it gave me that extra boost i needed and ive been working on some of my chapters. so thank you again. and i hope you like what comes out next. i have big ideas for this story and cant wait to share - Dani
[Report This]Date: 16/04/09 07:25 am
anything that deals with restaurants & romance, definitely has my attention!! FOOD & SEX ~ what more do you need?
Author's Response:
I must say i loved this review, it put a smile on my face thank you so much for reading and reviewing. please stay tune, chapter 3 is up now. thanks - dani
Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed [Report This]Date: 11/01/09 09:24 am
Good update. I'm loving the friendship between Jackie and Amiee.
Author's Response: thanks a bunch. they are cute, its jacks is some what like my roomie at home. thank you for the review more coming this weekend. - dani
[Report This]Date: 06/01/09 05:34 am
Laying the ground work now I see. Good.
Author's Response: Lol yes ma'am i am, and i hope you like it and stick around for the next chapter this weekend. thanks for the review - Dani
Date: 06/01/09 05:30 am
More please!
Author's Response:
lol thank you and more is coming up soon. im working on the next chapter.
thanks - Dani
Reviewer: chio1895 Signed [Report This]Date: 05/01/09 06:30 pm
Dayum...umm excuse me while i pick my jaw up...jacob is hot....
I like the way things are flow and the dialogue is flowing nicely not rushed or forced....i like that...
i love the friendship between Jack and Ryan....cant wait to meet Dani something says she is a trip and half...
I loved the update, cant wait to read the next one...have blessed day....
j
Author's Response:
Lol I know he is a totally hottie in my book too! Thank you I need to hear that I was alil worried. so please keep telling me whats going through that head of yours.
Have a blessed day as well,
Dani
Reviewer: Cma Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 05/01/09 01:58 pm