It's cute, but I wonder if Justin - charismatic superstar that he is - is actually as shy as he is portrayed to be in this chapter. I've seen a few interviews with the singer but never one quite like this, yet I can imagine it. I could literally hear Sexy Back in my head and I absolutely hated it. I abhor that song, though, so it's nothing against your story. It was one hit of his that I will never be able to understand the popularity of. I did not know T.I.'s name was Clifford, which was an interesting choice on his mother's part.

I like this and I took note of your warning in the beginning, but I noticed it isn't actually your spelling that seems to be the issue but the old standard word-confusion. "Where" is used instead of "were" a few times, the "your" and "you're" mix-up pops up as well, but these can be easily fixed if you run the chapters through some sort of grammar program. I think it would help, or getting a BETA.

♥PEACE.

I'm already in love with this story. Beyonce and Justin...If you ask me I believe Justin should get with Ciara in real life or damnit it Rhianna...just saying Back to the story I think Beyonce being such a private person will be a bit ticked off with Justin spilling their business like that especially that whole marriage thing. A little fight and then the making up which I know will be HOTT!!! Definitely looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response:

I don't know about Ciara... maybe Rihanna.  Ciara isn't my kinda chick.  It might be because she can't sing for shit but that's just my opinion.  Thank you so much for reading and I'm glad you're lovin' it.

The way you open up the story was very interesting.  It really pulls the readers in and they really want to know what's the deal with this couple and you instantly love and care about the character already. More please!

Author's Response: I tried to make it exciting, so i'm glad I pulled it off!

Ellen was so funny and Justin was so cute! I really like this chapter. It gave alot of infor on Justin and Beyonce's relationship. I'm interested to see where this goes

Author's Response: I love the Ellen show.