So if I give you a feedback it won't be true...
Sex HOTTT! But I'm wondering who has a better side in this disagreement. I guess no one because they are both right. I see the battle of the exes here or maybe a collaboration between the two but that maybe too cliche. Trace is interesting to me because what is he really up to. Mr. Suspense? It's always good to have a few people in the mix to keep us readers guessing
Awaiting the next update!
Author's Response: lol glad you're still lovein it. Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/05/09 09:09 pm
Why is Justin rushing marriage? He afraid of something. Is something going to happen? It better not. Nice chapter
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/05/09 03:21 am
I REALLY hope Bey kicks his ass if he tries to make a move on her...SERIOUSLY!!
Reviewer: JoiousMaye Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/05/09 03:00 am
Can I be Beyonce for a day girl? You got me sweating! I think he gave me a work out!
Trace needs to back off Justin's woman
! I see drama up ahead. Add soon.
[Report This]Date: 03/05/09 08:29 pm
Pure hotness! This chapter was sizzling! On fire! Trace seems like a creepy bastard. Add soon.
Reviewer: tamieka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/05/09 06:04 pm
cool and hot
Author's Response: Shank you!
Date: 03/05/09 05:32 pm
okay...one question. even though Trace commented or thought about the balcony, was it really him out there or someone else. we know he heard the argument but he could have just been standing outside the door. hmmm.... love this chapter though. so good i read it twice!
Author's Response: Ha! You read it twicie? Really? Glad it was that good... as for Trace, it'll be clear if he was present 4 the entire event or not in the next chapter.
Date: 03/05/09 10:29 am