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Title: Chapter 04 – Friend or Foe

I still don't know what to say except that his chapter was smoking hot girl. 

Add soon please!Cool

Reviewer: kim Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/05/09 04:54 am

Title: Chapter 04 – Friend or Foe

two words! more please......

Author's Response: ok... i can do that.Smile

Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/09 04:39 am

Title: Chapter 04 – Friend or Foe

I can even think right now.  I'll be back with my true comment. I will say great chapter though.

Author's Response: Wink

Reviewer: kim Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/05/09 11:51 pm

Title: Chapter 04 – Friend or Foe

Those little nasties...LMAO

I'm glad both B and Justin handed Trace his ass...he deserved it.



Author's Response: Thanks 4 reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: JoiousMaye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/05/09 11:34 pm

Title: Chapter 04 – Friend or Foe

B. Scott his to much!  I think Justin should've hit Trace again for whatever he's going to try to pull in the future.  The next chapter should be interesting.  B's going to meet the family.  That's exciting!  I think.

Author's Response: I love B. Scott!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/05/09 10:47 pm

Title: Chapter 04 – Friend or Foe

Justin told Trace and I'm glad he did.  I have a feeling we will be seeing him the future.  I still love this.

Author's Response: Thanks 4 reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/05/09 10:45 pm

Title: Chapter 03 – The Boardroom

So if I give you a feedback it won't be true...Laughing

Sex HOTTT! But I'm wondering who has a better side in this disagreement. I guess no one because they are both right. I see the battle of the exes here or maybe a collaboration between the two but that maybe too cliche. Trace is interesting to me because what is he really up to. Mr. Suspense? It's always good to have a few people in the mix to keep us readers guessingSmile Awaiting the next update!



Author's Response: lol glad you're still lovein it.

Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/05/09 09:09 pm

Title: Chapter 03 – The Boardroom

Why is Justin rushing marriage?  He afraid of something.  Is something going to happen?  It better not.  Nice chapter

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/05/09 03:21 am

Title: Chapter 03 – The Boardroom

I REALLY hope Bey kicks his ass if he tries to make a move on her...SERIOUSLY!!

Reviewer: JoiousMaye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/05/09 03:00 am

Title: Chapter 03 – The Boardroom

Can I be Beyonce for a day girl? You got me sweating!  I think he gave me a work out! 

Trace needs to back off Justin's womanYell!  I see drama up ahead.  Add soon. 

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 08:29 pm

Title: Characters

EmbarassedTongue out Justin put it on her!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 06:08 pm

Title: Chapter 03 – The Boardroom

Pure hotness!  This chapter was sizzling!  On fire!  Trace seems like a creepy bastard.  Add soon.

Reviewer: tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 06:04 pm

Title: Chapter 03 – The Boardroom

cool and hot

Author's Response: Shank you!

Reviewer: amcangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 05:32 pm

Title: Chapter 03 – The Boardroom

okay...one question. even though Trace commented or thought about the balcony, was it really him out there or someone else. we know he heard the argument but he could have just been standing outside the door. hmmm.... love this chapter though. so good i read it twice!

Author's Response: Ha!  You read it twicie?  Really?  Glad it was that good... as for Trace, it'll be clear if he was present 4 the entire event or not in the next chapter.

Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 10:29 am

Title: Chapter 02 – Love Sex Magic

Meow...I see this cat fight is just about to get started. I do have to admit shiree that the video was HOTTT!! YES I HATE YOU...Laughing Ready to take that plunge into some B&J loving but I'll wait for the next update!!!

Author's Response: I promise it will be worth the wait.Wink

Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/04/09 12:41 am

Title: Chapter 02 – Love Sex Magic

Ciara needs to check her self!  I want to see what happens with Chris and Beyonce.  They are both some freaks! 

Reviewer: kim Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/04/09 09:48 pm

Title: Chapter 02 – Love Sex Magic

cool keep going

Reviewer: amcangel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/04/09 12:29 am

Title: Chapter 02 – Love Sex Magic

I love'd this chapter!  I love all you chapters!  I love all you stories and this one is no exception!  You are a great story teller.  You know just what to say.  It's never to much and it's never not enough.  Could you please add to when my backs agains the wall, I miss that.  I loved the chapter please add soon!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/04/09 02:17 am

Title: Chapter 02 – Love Sex Magic

Here's my comment I want that next chapter now! Just kidding.  Man Ciara on some stalker status.  Justin better watch out for that.  I love B. Scott. Glad he's in the story he's so funny in real life.  You can really tell Beyonce and Justin are completly in love it's so cute how over protective he is of her.  New love is the cutest. The Bitch Ciara needs to back off.

Author's Response: Ciara's not my favorite chick either.  Maybe I should have Beyonce give her a beat down like she did ol'girl in the move... just kidding. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment and tell me your favorite highlights.Smile

Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/04/09 02:08 am

Title: Characters

i completely love this story and this couple. update soon PLEASE!!



Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/04/09 02:03 am

Title: Characters

Me Likey

Reviewer: Amia Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/04/09 09:30 pm

Title: Chapter 01 – The Ellen DeGeneres Show

very cool

Author's Response: thank you.

Reviewer: amcangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/04/09 09:26 pm

Title: Chapter 01 – The Ellen DeGeneres Show

I'm already in love with this story. Beyonce and Justin...If you ask me I believe Justin should get with Ciara in real life or damnit it Rhianna...just sayingLaughing Back to the story I think Beyonce being such a private person will be a bit ticked off with Justin spilling their business like that especially that whole marriage thing. A little fight and then the making up which I know will be HOTT!!! Definitely looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response:

I don't know about Ciara... maybe Rihanna.  Ciara isn't my kinda chick.  It might be because she can't sing for shit but that's just my opinion.  Thank you so much for reading and I'm glad you're lovin' it.

Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/04/09 07:51 pm

Title: Chapter 01 – The Ellen DeGeneres Show

This is very interesting, cant wait to read more form you babe.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/04/09 06:58 pm

Title: Chapter 01 – The Ellen DeGeneres Show

The way you open up the story was very interesting.  It really pulls the readers in and they really want to know what's the deal with this couple and you instantly love and care about the character already. More please!

Author's Response: I tried to make it exciting, so i'm glad I pulled it off!

Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/04/09 06:36 pm

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