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Title: Chapter 18

The wait was well worth the effort...loved the update...seems Taylor and Matt are finally back on the right track...but I love how she never lets him forget he screwed up...it keeps him honest...glad the no fraternization clause was dealt without too much hassle...Matt's got a new career and his woman back...now I'm ready for a hot reunion between those two...

Taylor's mom seems skeptical of Matt...and with good reason...this is something that cannot be easily fixed...her trust in him was shattered once upon a time and Matt needs to show great patience to earn it back...he has her heart...but her trust is another animal...baby steps, Matt would be my advice...she's taking a big risk to trust him with her heart again...and he has no room to take anything for granted where her love and trust is concerned...hope everything works out for them...

Miguel gave me the creepiest feeling...hope Taylor doesn't find herself in a compromising position with him...he seems shady...maybe it would be better to delegate his case to someone else...wonder what kind of 'trouble' he got into with that girl...he's getting desperate...and that's when a person becomes their most dangerous...

Looking forward to more from this story...though I'm already getting sad that it will soon be over...glad you're making this a first in a series...I love your writing style and your characters...



Author's Response: I look forward to your reviews... I really do... thank you for all of your great advice and observations.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/09/09 06:24 am

Title: Characters

Oooo Let the seduction begin!!!! Great UPDATE!!!!

You know I was missing this story chica!!!

Miguel is up to all no kinds of good... Not sure what his deal is but I hope that Taylor doesn't suffer any backlash from it... He reads like T-R-O-U-B-L-E!!!

Let the sweaty sex monkey sex begin!!!!

Hope you update soon!!!



Author's Response: Sorry for making you miss it.  My brain was on lockdown.

Reviewer: spanishfly69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/09/09 05:25 am

Title: Chapter 18

I enjoyed it. Will tonight be the start of them having their first son? I'm happy they are going to try and work on the relationship, well she said she wasn't going to make it easy for him but as long as they get together I'll be happy!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/09/09 05:02 am

Title: Chapter 18

I love how they have come tomrealization that they really never stopped loving each other. They are coming along just fine and I am happy Matt has found another perfect job for him!! I love the choices they have made and that they will be happy together!!

Great job sweetie!!



Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/09/09 03:42 am

Title: Chapter 18

Love this update. Glad to see they're trying to resolve their issues and try to move on. Something's up with Miguel and I feel it isn't a good thing.

Author's Response: thanks...go girl for peeping that out....

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/09/09 03:13 am

Title: Chapter 18

Oh goody...a hot one is coming. I like the way she is mellowing...going with the flow and not hiding behind all of the press. Tay's sporting the big gurl drawls. Good for her.

And now Matt has supremely taken charge by fielding himself andother job offer. Good! He didn't wait for the shoe to fall at Kerrington.

Long overdue, well worth it. I know all about that block. I am better at juggling multiple balls. Writing multiple stories...weird, but keeps the brain churning.
Can't wait for the next! ;-)

Author's Response: Sorry for the delay and the crazy think is that, there is another churning away, but I wanted to do this one justice first. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/09/09 01:38 am

Title: Chapter 18

wow that sweet he cooked her dinner treating her like a queen but love how she giving him a hard time lol. I'm glad neither one of them got fried from their job. So else does matthew have up his sleeve for his lady. so glad to see the story updated realy like it alot great work. Thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks for continuing to read.  It's getting ready to turn the corner.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/09/09 01:13 am

Title: Chapter 18

he wants four and all boys? dang,matt. you got taylor pretty much on materity leave for a while. lol. now all u gotta do is get to making them.

Author's Response: LOL.. That'a the direction we're taking.

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/09/09 12:56 am

Title: Chapter 18

Thank for the update,I have missing this story.

Author's Response: Thanks, sorry I made ya'll wait so long.  The brain wasn't working like I wanted it to.

Reviewer: yummy954 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/09/09 12:13 am

Title: Chapter 18

Well, they seem to be moving right along there. The hot monkey sex is next up I think...hehe.

Author's Response: I think it's time...

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 11:23 pm

Title: Characters

I am going thru withdrawls!!!!

Author's Response:

Last week, work was on drama times 10.  I'm working on an update for tonight.  I hope...

Reviewer: spanishfly69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/09 05:02 am

Title: Chapter 17

I hope Matt doesn't take his second chance for granted this time...Taylor's taking a big leap of faith...hope Matt doesn't let her down this time around...

I'm hoping this time it will be better...they've both matured...they've had the chance to experience life...now their new relationship should be all the better for it...Matt still has to realize that Taylor will have her guard up...it is up to him to prove that she is the single most important thing in his life for now and always....he's been granted an extraordinary gift by an exceptional woman...not many of us get that chance of a 'do-over' in life...I've been pulling for him....let's hope he doesn't let me or Taylor down...

Update soon...loving this story still...



Author's Response: I have a bit of writers block.  But I'm working on it!

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/08/09 04:41 am

Title: Chapter 17

Love this story, I agree with the majority of the comments that Matt has a WHOLE lot of making up to do but I think that Taylor has made the best choice for her. Can WAIT for the next update ( hopefully very very soon :-).

Keep up the amazing work!!



Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: Sammy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/08/09 02:10 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Awww they are precious!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/08/09 05:44 am

Title: Chapter 17

"Haha Matt, she Tae-bo'ed ur whiny ass."

I'm a bit annoyed at him because he always seems to turn it around & make himself the vicitim. Well yeah I know he is too, but who gives a shit, right? Taylor needs a man who will tell her or better still, show her what he will be for her, not what he wasn't or couldn't be. Matt can stop with the apologising now & start giving her what she needs... faith

p.s Have I told you how much I looove this story? I've never left so much feedback for a story in my life :D HOLLA!!



Author's Response: I didn't realized that I've made him whiny.  Not good.  I'll work on that... Thanks for still reading.

Reviewer: Miele Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 12:01 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Well this is coming together nicely. Can't wait to see where you go from here.



Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me...

Reviewer: Ketaj1316 Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 06:26 am

Title: Chapter 17

I knew it!!!!!! And that's all I have to say.

Author's Response: I hope this is good...

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 05:05 am

Title: Chapter 17

Nice and made me smile and happy.

Now, when will the drama come....



Author's Response:

So you want some drama... LOL

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 04:56 am

Title: Chapter 17

Yes! Yes! Yes! I'm so happy that they have a reunited. Love them!

Author's Response: Thanks! 

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 04:48 am

Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter!!

O-kay... The peanut gallery has weighed in with both Matt and Taylor... and it wasn't as over-bearing, opinionated or heated as it could have been. The texts to Matt were funny as hell, though.

Taylor is giving him a second chance, but not a free pass. They have a ways to go still to re-build the trust and faith she had in him before.

Sorry Donovan. Being just a good buddy isn't that bad.

So, let's see what happens next...



Author's Response:

I decided to keep it light with them.  It's far from over though. 

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 04:30 am

Title: Chapter 17

I just have to keep saying that Matt does almost ok until he starts talking about how hard he had it after he left her. Who the hell cares? He did the leaving so stop all the damn whining. No one is gonna feel sorry for him for that. Good for Taylor, because they really do have to build something new now. Trust has to be regained here.

Donovan...my man! Dont even get caught up in all that drama! He's a good guy, so no harm no foul. The peace can be maintained and he and Taylor can remain good friends. And Matt better not say one damn word about! Its not his business. Donovan has been nothing but respectful and decent to Taylor, and was man enough to let Matt know he was going to bow out and let them handle their business. Cant ask for more.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading, and I appreciate your honest reviews.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 04:02 am

Title: Characters

Wow, she gave in awfully quick. Oh well. I don't like where this story is going and honestly Matt is still a chump to me and nothing can change that short of him stepping in front of a moving car. But you're still a good writer.

Author's Response: Thanks.  I'm sorry that you really didn't like MAtt.  I'm trying to give him some redeeming qualities...

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 03:50 am

Title: Chapter 17

I loved this comment:  I told your daddy  to go shoot that big fool.   After how he broke my baby’s heart.” Yeah go Mommy... deal with the big foll the right way shoot his behind oh yeah...LOL

 As for Taylor and Matt...this comment was to much..."“A bruise. I was trying to break it " damn Skippy, punch that fool again for good measure.

Wait, hold up wait a minute...he said what: I haven’t lived.  I stopped living the day I left you. I want to live again."  Wasn't dude known for all the woman that he was screwing around with?  Taylor was demoralized that she hasn't been with anyone except for dude?  Oh he needs to suffer some more.  OK, I am good now....going back to read the rest of the chapter... 

 He got a what? ...I have a  spiritual advisor who told me that nothing in my life is going to go right until I owned up and made amends with you."  Dude had to go to someone and pay money for advice?  dude really, PLEASE...SPARE....ME....

She should have made him suffer more but she loves him and when we are in love we forgive a lot of things all I can say is she is a better woman than me because I would have loved to act out like Lorena Bobbitt and chop it...

Thanks for a great read.  Take Care.  I apologize about the post and profanity.



Author's Response: You're good.  I love your reviews... And I thank you for still reading and sticking with me. 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 03:34 am

Title: Chapter 17

Very touching update!! Love the sock to the jaw that was classic.  Look forward to watching Matthew beg some more  :o)    Great update thank you

Author's Response: Yeah he's got a little more beg left in him

Reviewer: PAW Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 03:05 am

Title: Chapter 17

Ok I say forgive the big country bumkin..cause he is fine and he really does love her for her and vice versa..but apprehebsion is understandable!!

I realy enjoyed this story sweetie..you did an awesome job!! Hope to have more from you soon!!



Author's Response: Thank you.  I appreciate you reading it.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 02:24 am

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