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Title: Chapter 22

Thank you DSM for saving Matt and for this quick update.

Matt! Lovely!

Author's Response: I have such a crush on Matt

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 04:32 pm

Title: Chapter 22

I knew Matt loved his woman too much too let a bullet separate them!!!

I am glad he is ok..I hope this brings them een closer together and any doubts Taylor may have had about his loving her completely are erased!!

I love this sweet story ...I am so happy Matt is ok and they are ok!! Good job sweetie!!



Author's Response: Thanks Nene

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 02:27 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Thank God and I hope Miguel and his flunky get it

Author's Response: To jail they must go

Reviewer: kiki Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 01:28 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Yes, thank God he was spared... in addition to being astute enough to sense Taylor's fear and follow her. I hope no one blames her.

Thanks for the chapter!!!



Author's Response: Thanks ma'am for sticking with me...

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 09:47 am

Title: Chapter 22

I absolutely loved the update. Miguel sure is a sleazebag. He was going to rape her too. I hope he is ripped a new one painfully.

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking in there with me on this one.  Its almost over.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 07:38 am

Title: Chapter 22

Oh, thank you...Matt made it...now if this doesn't convince Taylor that this man loves her...nothing will...please tell me that Miguel and Eduardo are sharing a jail cell with Bubba as we speak...their lunatic arses need to be off the streets permanently...

Can I say I love Matt's dad...he sounds like my kind of dad...

Great update...looking forward to more...



Author's Response: I like their dad too!

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 07:37 am

Title: Chapter 22

Taylor is SOOO lucky.  This could have been far, far worse.

Nyeesha



Author's Response: yep, it could've gone either way, but i'm in a good mood.

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 06:58 am

Title: Chapter 22

Migule is is in jail I hope along with his sidekick. Thanks for the udates



Author's Response: next chapter!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 06:52 am

Title: Chapter 21

Matt saved her, he  has to survive.



Author's Response: keep reading!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 06:48 am

Title: Chapter 22

yayy! matt's alive

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 06:45 am

Title: Chapter 20

She should not go to his house alone. I'm getting a bad feeling about this one.

Author's Response: yep bad man alert

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 06:44 am

Title: Chapter 22

Thank you Thank you Thank you!!! My big cry baby ass is over here in tears. 

I am happy to see that he is alright.  He is a strong man...I knew that but I still was crying.  Taylor love herself some Matt.  I am glad he called the Commissioner and rescheduled.

Now I want Miquel's balls, ass, and whatever other body part I can get on a sling along with his boy.

Thanks for the update more chica. Have a marvelous weekend.



Author's Response: thanks girl....

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 06:42 am

Title: Chapter 22

Well, apparently I missed an update.  I'm glad he is out of the water. I hope all works out and he can walk and all that jazz.

His brother is funny for sure.



Author's Response: Thanks.  There are two short updates that preceeded this one.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 06:14 am

Title: Chapter 21

Oh no...oh no! Pleas let him be ok...please. Shiiiiiit!

I knew it...I never expected guns. Please DSM...let him be ok.

Author's Response: I'm going to update tomorrow.

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 03:52 am

Title: Chapter 21

OK like wow....that was short and power packed...I knew she should not go there alone..now Matt has been shot!!

I just hope he will be ok...

Now when you leave us with cliffie's you gotta updt sooner :)



Author's Response: LOL...   I got you Nene

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 02:53 am

Title: Chapter 20

Why is she going to his house to terminate his contract and he is a sexual molester..what was her thoughtless male boss thinking..what was she thinking??

That should have been done in a public place or in he office..LAWD have mercy!!

Ok they are sexying it up now baby...hawt little couple that they are...yeah baby!!

Good job sweetie!!



Author's Response: I think that because she had been alone with him in the past, it wasn't an issue. 

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 02:45 am

Title: Chapter 21

OMG...OH NO...NO...NO...this is a nightmare...Miguel and Eduardo trying to rape Taylor and Matt coming in to the rescue only to be gravely hurt...those bastids...I hope they put them both under the jail for this...oh, please, don't let Matt die...Taylor would not survive this...oh please, update soon...Dsmoothone...you've ramped this story into high gear...can't wait to see what happens next...

Author's Response: Thanks.. I'm writing now as we speak.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 02:31 am

Title: Characters

OH GOODY!!! I can't wait...Thank you

Author's Response: No problem.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 02:28 am

Title: Chapter 20

I've got a bad feeling about this meeting with Miguel...he's unpredictable and I've been getting bad vibes about him for awhile now...wished Taylor had taken someone with her...and Matt has a meeting of his own...I hope fate is kind to Taylor...but something smells rotten in the state of Denmark...hope Taylor doesn't have to pay the tuition for it...reading on...

Author's Response: Glad you're still reading.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 02:24 am

Title: Chapter 21

OMG!!! I hope that shady, rotten, trifling ass Miguel and his cronny pays on a silver platter their balls to Taylor and Matt and all of the victims cause I am sure there are many out there. 

That Mo-Fo tried to rape Taylor and that punk-ass body guard was going to help him on top of that he shoots Matt WTF!!!!

I can't wait for the next update please please please make it soon real soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you ma'am.  I'm feeling it right now, so I'm going to try and update tomorrow.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 02:10 am

Title: Chapter 21

Oh my God!!

Poor Matt... Being Taylor's knight. I hope he's okay. I'm also glad he followed her. What was about to happen was to horrid to imagine. It was a bad error in judgment for Taylor to go alone to Miguel's house, especially considering the allegations of preying on young girls. Alone wiht two men? The driveway would still be smoking from the burnt rubber.

Okay, okay... I have to admit to harboring agrudge and wanting Matt to suffer a little... maybe a lot... before reconsiling with Taylor. But he, and she, deserve a break now.



Author's Response: THanks for sticking with it.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 01:59 am

Title: Chapter 20

I was without internet for a whole week!! I am so behind it isn't funny.

I agree, its a horrible idea for her meeting Miguel at his home. What ever happened to the private room at a five star restuarant?



Author's Response: She became comfortable.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 01:49 am

Title: Chapter 21

Oh No Taylor can't lose Matt  just when she got him back... I knew Miguel was trouble when he was first introduced... he has a special friend waiting for him in prison.

Please let Matt be OK.



Author's Response: you gotta keep reading

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 01:33 am

Title: Chapter 21

What just happened here?! Shot!

Author's Response: yes ma'am

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 01:28 am

Title: Chapter 20

Glad to see this story is back, and this was a great update, Taylor and Matt are still Hot together.

Miguel is bad news, and Taylor better be careful.



Author's Response: Thanks Lady Liberty.  I appreciate it!  I missed this story too...

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 01:12 am

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