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Title: Chapter 15

Great update!!

I know that a committed relationship does not end your life of freedom, but going to a club late night with another man may not have been a good move for Laila... especially while there was a disagreement brewing between her and Jameson.

Of course, he reacted accordingly. Laila needs to open the discussion and start by apologizing for butting her nose way into Jameson's business regarding Jade.

I really do hope that the alcohol doesn't talk for her.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/09 03:01 am

Title: Chapter 15

Glad to see Laila stop being pig headed and admit to crossing the line with the situation. I wonder if she would be so gong ho if he made important decisions concerning her life without consulting her. She needs to apologize and stop trying to punish Jamison because he expressed his opinion about HIS child regardless of how much she loves Jade. Anyway, loved the update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/09/09 02:37 am

Title: Chapter 15

OH MY GOD I OOOOOOOVE RYAN KWANTEN!!!!! I remeber wayy back when he was on Summerland. He's soooo sexyyyyyyy. i'm such a sucker for accents! please let Laila date hiiiiim!!!!!!!

Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/09 01:30 am

Title: Chapter 1

I'm really loving this story

Author's Response:

Aww thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it! 

Reviewer: Erica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/08/09 09:00 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I really am enjoying this. Your casting is perfect.  Ugh to both Maria and Chase.  Maria is a horrible mother to use her baby as bait.  Not cool.  I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Thanks boo! Maria is a mess and a half...but you'll witness it for yourself.

 

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/08/09 07:06 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Interesting update. Maria working with Chase, not surprising. I knew it was too good to be true with her showing up to see Jade. I still say Laila needs to apologize to Jameson for not clearing it with him first before letting Maria meet with Jade. Her intentions were good but she overstepped her bounds. I'm sure Chase and Maria are up to something shady and I hope they don't hurt Jade.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/08/09 07:15 am

Title: Chapter 14

I knew it!

Misery likes company. Birds of a feather, and often desperate sore losers, flock together. Maria AND Chase!!! WTH?? What a pair. And what evil scheme are they plotting?? An accident for Laila... possibly Jamison and Jade ends up with mommy dearest?

I can't wait to see where this is going.

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/08/09 04:25 am

Title: Chapter 14

short, but good update.

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/08/09 04:21 am

Title: Chapter 13

Great update. I'm sorry but Laila didn't have the right to decide that it was ok for Maria to visit. She should have cleared it with Jamison first. After all it really isn't her child. She needs to apologize to him. Maria needs to earn their trust again and that takes time. Why is she just showing up now???

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/09 08:32 am

Title: Chapter 13

O-kay... Their first lover's spat and it was a doozy.

I believe there is more to Maria suddenly showing up. Again... Chase?

They are both wrong, though. Laila should have let Maria have a few minutes wih Jade on the playground before telling her to contact Jamison to schedule something. Laila did over-step letting her in the house, lack of info or not.

Jamison should not compare giving second chances to an absentee mother to doing so with an abusive ex-husband. They are no way the same. That was a bit of a low blow for him, upset or not. 

And what was with that attempted insult that Maria tossed at Laila. Not all actress-types are flakes or disfunctional just as all women are not mother material. She has nerves.

The heat is rising on this story!! Great twist. Great job!!!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/08/09 05:25 am

Title: Chapter 12

Damn! Maria? I didn't see that one coming.

Hmmm... Jade's mother, eh? Some people need to learn the difference between being a mother and being an incubator. I believe she split and left Jamison with the responsibilities of raising and caring for Jade, dealing with her illness alone. So what does she want and why is she doing a school stalking act instead of calling her ex and arranging something like a sensible, responsible adult?

Poor Laila... and Jamison... and Jade. I hink they were starting to mesh like a family. Say, does Laila's psycho ex have something to do with this by chance???

Great chapter. This is an intriguing new twist that you've added. I can't wait to see what sob story Maria has.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/08/09 04:00 am

Title: Chapter 11

i am loving the re read. i think there was some of the end oof chapter two missing when she wzas talk to jamison before they went to lunch..but im probably wrong. great update. can wait to read the new chapter ...past you what..jam, lai, and jade and other fam..hint hint...

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/08/09 03:47 am

Title: Chapter 11

How sweet.

After the horrors of being with abusive Chase, Liala really could use a healthy relationship. Jamison and Jade give her that. I hope they can hold onto it.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/08/09 10:40 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Hmm. Nice... until the psycho ex crashed the party.

Oh, so that sick f--- is threatening an innocent 5 yo child, huh? I can't even imagine the fresh hell he intends to bring to poor Laila's life.

Unless there is some confidentiality clause in the divorce settlement (I'm sure she has to pay him off), she should play the media with her story. Beat him to the punch and threaten to cut his money off if he doesn't stay away from her and Jamison and Jade. Also, with all the trifling sleezy crap that goes on in Hollywood, her life after an abusive ex isn't that shocking.

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/08/09 10:22 pm

Title: Chapter 11

So adorable!!!

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/08/09 09:28 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Thank you, thank you for the pics of Jade and Tootsie!!Great choices. Both are too cute. With her beautiful curly hair, the little girl is a perfect match for Justin's Jamison.

Okay, break's over. I can't wait to see what happen's when Laila returns home.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/08/09 04:03 am

Title: Chapter 9

I do think that living with him was not a good idea, but at least she's going home. They basically loved together before even starting a relationship. Now that can actually date and get to know each other.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 03:09 am

Title: Chapter 9

Nice update! Too short, but nice.

Wow. To be able to slip away and have two whole weeks alone, living a "normal" life with two great "normal" people. It was just what Laila needed. As well as Jamison and Jade.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/08/09 10:07 am

Title: Chapter 9

Loved her with Jamie and Jameson. She deserves to be happy. The ending was unexpected, and so very sweet.

Nice chapter.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18/08/09 06:39 am

Title: Chapter 9

Great update but I hope they aren't rushing things.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/08/09 01:50 am

Title: Chapter 9

Oh girl you can end the story right here. I'm good. Lol jk. I hope Cahse doesn't come in and ruin this.  I hope Lai doens't do anything stupid like we women tend to do. I hope I'm not hoping in vain.

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/08/09 12:57 am

Title: Chapter 8

Very nice. Maybe they can help each other.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/08/09 08:18 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Good job. What a wonderful chapter. Laila likes the good doctor and the doctor likes Laila. Thank goodness she divorced that abusive husband. I hopeing Laila gets over her slight depression and really starts living. Don't let that handsome doctor get away.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/08/09 06:22 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Mari,

I'm enjoying reading this story. Happy to see you posting here. I look forward to following it to the end.

Do you think that you can post pics of the other two main characters??? That would be Tootsie and Jade. Tootsie is Laila's "baby" as Jade is Jamison's. ;)



Author's Response:

For you my dear, I'll post pictures of the other 2 mains characters plus some pics of their houses!

 

xx. 

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/08/09 05:29 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Perfect!!!

The beach... the clear blue water, crisp salty air, and sandy ground is a perfect setting to relax and reflect and attempt to move on from the end ing of her marriage. And that's what Laila needed more than being out celebrating wiht the girls.

Laila's thoughts about her and Chase's beginnings as children explains a lot about Chase's history of neglect, and his pain, anger and abuse, but he chose violence instead of getting help. And unlike most, he had resources available to him to get the help he needed.

Laila, naturally, would claim some of he blame. However, Chase was a grown man in control of his own destiny.

It always amazes me the time, energy, and emotion people put into being jealous and envious of the success of others, instaed of simply redirecting and expending all that trying to get their own shit together, make their own success.

Anywho, Jamison and Jade... I like the potential of this relationship for her. They are sweet together and Mister Coltrane-playing Jamison is definitely interested. I should be nice, refreshing... real... for Laila... until the greedy manipulators of her career step in. 

P.S. Oh, Mari, welcome to The Chamber.



Author's Response:

So true. Sometimes when things happen in your life, the best thing to do is be alone with your thoughts, contrary to what most people think. Chase has some real mental issues. But, he is also far from being out of Laila's life. Jamison and Jade are my favorite. They are going to do really good things for Laila, show her that there is love and life after divorce.

 

Thanks for you warm thoughts! haha 

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/08/09 05:13 pm

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