Someone put that snake in there. Lorraine tried to seduce him and got kicked out on her rear. I'd be more than happy to sleep in the room with him, like he said this will be the only way he can protect her. NIce update!!
Author's Response: that part of the story with lorraine and Ulrich in the room wasn't originally written though i'm happy with the ending results, thanks for the review! Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 04/09/09 03:46 pm
Oooh la la! Sharing the same bed! awww i have a feeling the vampires are gonna get her an change herrrr. But then they can be like selene and michael corvin, Hottest Vamp/Lycan couple everrr! update soon :)
Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/09 03:17 pm
Glad to see you never disappoint! As usual I totally loved it. I feel like I'm watching a movie and can't wait for the commercial to be over. Can't wait for things to heat up between them. Good Job Keep it up!!!!!!
Reviewer: Klarybelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/09/09 03:10 pm
Thanks for a great update. Not surprised that Lorraine tried to have sex with the Prince but I expect that she was really surprised when she got tossed from the castle the idiot. As for Sabine getting bit by the snake...YIKES. She was right to be concerned for her safety. I am glad that you introduced the vampire he seems like a nasty vicious power hungry creep. Now he wants Sabine as a hostage...oh man. Thanks for a great read.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/09 01:51 pm
Thanks for another great update! This is a very entertaining story! Did one of the scorn women put the snake in her room? When will the vampires arrive to steal or kill her and will Isabelle and or Lorraine help them?
Reviewer: readalot Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/09/09 09:34 am
Ulrich is SEXY and very comanding. I know Sabine have attitude and spunk. I want her to show it more instead of being all shy and stuff. I love Ulrich, but i love when nice women like Sabine get feisty. It shows what real women should be like. Soft when ready but a lioness if u mess with her
Reviewer: Rapture Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/09/09 09:27 am
Ulrich is super sessy and I can wait to read more
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/09 08:14 am
Wow this was soo good, can't wait to read more!!!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/09 07:53 am
The Lycan females need to get their asses kicked. I'm gald that Ulrich doesn't take their crap. I'm concerned about what he said about attacking his brother. Sabestian seems like he may have a little crush on Sabine, and I'd hate to see his brother attack him again over a woman.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/09 05:45 am
Thjanks for writing. They make a good couple but Sabine better watch her back.
Author's Response: thank you
[Report This]Date: 04/09/09 12:00 am
Hell yeah my girl can burn! Booyah, Lorraine and Isabella, can’t touch her now. lol
Sabine and Ulrich have great chemistry (loved the kiss and Ulrich sharing a part of himself with her). She’d calm the beast in him though I’d say there’s more to Sabine as yet to be revealed. I like Ulrich’s manner; he has an imposing presence that doesn’t offend, a bit arrogant although that’s part of his charm but not a snob. It’s quite evident he’s a formidable Lycon. Sabine’s intelligent and very sweet, I like her. Those other witches couldn’t form half the ‘woman’ Sabine is.
Loved the mini lesson of how he changes and again, Sabine didn’t shy away from him, not even when Isabella ranted about Ulrich killing Sabine during his next heat. She will be a wonderful Queen and the perfect mate for her King.
Really cool story Variety. Update soon.Author's Response: thank you, i love your review and i'll udate as soon as i can Reviewer: JV4ME Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/09/09 11:46 pm
Ut oh…vampires! Troublemaking bloodsuckers! Lol So what exactly are Lycons then? (You may have explain it already and I missed it, I just assumed they were vampires too, they’re [Lycons] definitely immortal. I much prefer Lycons over a mere vampire anyway. lol) Now we have a little drama happening with a possible battle between the species. Whoohoo! I hope Ulrich marries Sabine (ha ha) quickly so he can prepare for….whatever jumps off.
Lorraine just played herself. Got dismissed with the quickness. Ha!
Sebastian seems chill, not the clichéd ‘evil’ brother; I like him. Sabine has mad spunk doesn’t she? Go girl! She’s not jaded nor intimidated when speaking her mind.
Awe, she cooked for him. Can she burn…?Author's Response: lol lycans are werewolves, i would have just put that but that term sometimes is a little annoying to use over and over. Sebastian is more of the joker and such, Ulrich is the eldest and more calm and reserved. Reviewer: JV4ME Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/09/09 11:44 pm
Oh Sabine is going straight to his heart from his stomach. LOL!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/09/09 11:17 pm
Sabine is cute, she better watch her back against the harpies.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/09/09 10:18 pm
I really like this story. Each chapter is better than the one before. Looking forward to the next chapter. Good job!!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 03/09/09 08:30 pm
Thanks for another great update! I'm really enjoying the progression of your story! Love it actually! Keep those wonderful updates coming I beg!
Author's Response: thanks!!
Date: 03/09/09 09:46 am
I LOVED IT!!! That was an awesome update. One bitch down and one to go. I love how Ulrich always put the women in check yes, even Sabine when he told her to watch herself cause he did not like being yelled @ like he was a child. :D
Please keep the story going and the updates coming.
Author's Response: yea i wanted Ulrich to be a nice going person but he also has that line you don't cross with him, glad you like the story and i'll update soon as possible Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/09/09 09:21 am
Good chapter but I think Ulrich is not thinking about what the other women will do. He himself said that the women were jealous, he can't be there to procted her all the time and even though he doesn't want her to be hurt, that doesn't mean they won't try something and make it seem like an accident. And what is he panning on doing? Marrying one woman but taking another as a mate? That would be interesting to see if he thinks he can get away with something like that. LOL!!
Author's Response: yea i guess he figures that the women won't do anything because they're in the castle and any attack on a fellow resident would be sudden death...wait. I don't think i posted that lol oops i'll try and fit that in somewhere if i can but it would be interesting to see Ulrich Marry Sabine and then take another as a mate, There would definitely be a fight! Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 06:04 am
That was intense with the ladies, but, cute at the end. Ulrich was correct about what her father was doing for her. She has won his heart already.
What are those ladies going to do? Are they the reason she was killed on their wedding night.
Author's Response: you will have to wait and see what happens! ^_^ Reviewer: Moni Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 03/09/09 04:54 am
I love this story, can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/09/09 03:30 am
He does select her to marry obviously but the ladies get to her and kill her or they get someone else to do it, since she dies on her wedding night. His dad even wants him to choose her.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/09/09 03:25 am
My that was very good.
Author's Response: thank you very much
[Report This]Date: 03/09/09 02:07 am
Ohh I am so worried about Sebine..I wish I didn't know somebody is going to kill her...I think either one of those jealous cows or the vampires are going to kill my sweet little Sebine..that just makes me sad!!
I love how innocently she ask these questions..she is sweet and unassuming..it seems Ulrich is takeen by her sincerity and he should be...they are perfect for each other!!
I cannot wait for more..great job sweetie...you re on a roll!!
Author's Response: i can't help but laugh at your review....your sweet little Sabine? i almost forgot about you running away with my story lol i'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for continuing to read it, you review is very appreciated! Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/09/09 01:58 am
We know that she is right about them trying to beat her up or kill her because she dies on their wedding night. MY guess is that they meaning Lorraine and Isabella make a deal with the vampires to kill Sabine. Thanks
Author's Response: you're very welcome ^_^
[Report This]Date: 03/09/09 01:49 am