OH MY GOD! they are so adorable together!!!! I wonder though what is she going to become a lycan or vampire? update soon love!
Author's Response: i will update soon as possible, i already have the next few chapters done but who knows? i might come up with something new and change some things around, glad you liked it.
Date: 03/09/09 01:24 am
Awsome update. In showing her skills and independence to Ulrich has made her stand out but the other two ladies are jealous as hell. Glad to see Sabine making her move and bonding with Ulrich. Now she needs to have eyes at her back because the other ladies aren't gonna take this lying down.
Author's Response:
thanks
Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/09/09 01:23 am
Variety,
As a 305 girl (born and raised), I certainly know how different Fla weather can be from Scotland.
Anyway, if you'd like any Scottish tips, tidbits, or questions answered to help your story along, please do give me a shout. There ain't too many black folks hanging out in the Shire but I did marry a local (nope, he's certainly not black) so I should be able to provide some assistance should you ask.
All the best and please keep the updates coming!
islandlass
Date: 02/09/09 10:48 pm
really enjoy this story, what time period is this taking place right now
Reviewer: Chelsea Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/09/09 10:43 pm
I like it!
Author's Response:
Thanks ^_^
Reviewer: brandy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/09/09 08:13 pm
She has one uped the ladies with a down home cooked meal. Gret update!!
Author's Response: thanks for the review ^_^ Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/09/09 08:08 pm
A way to a man's heart is through his stomach, but a way to his bed is to serve good food in tight clothes.
Author's Response: lol thanks for the review Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/09/09 07:23 pm
Sabine had better keep her eyes wide open,the other two will be playing dirty. Great start!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 02/09/09 06:56 pm
Thanks for a great update. To bad Lorraine wasn''t paying attention to Ulrich's body language before she opened her mouth and inserted her foot. As for Sabine, she is trying to by reading about Lycans. She seems to be the more suited one because she is a genuine caring person as for the other two Lycans they seem selfish. Thanks
Author's Response: thanks for the review and glad you like the story
[Report This]Date: 02/09/09 02:06 pm
Oh, this is turning into a very amusing story! Ulrich and Sabine are delightful. I hope you can update readily and quickly. By the way, I live Perthshire so it's doubly enjoyable to find a story set where I am. Have you ever been?
Author's Response: lol no! the only place i've been outside of florida is california, i google some things i need to know about Ulrich's homeland but from the pictures i've seen of Scotland it's a very beautiful place and i would love to visit there one day but i'm told the weather is waaay different from my usual hot and humid, sunny state. glad you like the story.
[Report This]Date: 02/09/09 11:58 am
I'm really enjoying this story! Thanks so much for the update!
Author's Response: you're very welcome, glad you enjoy it.
Author's Response: you're very welcome, glad you enjoy it. Reviewer: readalot Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/09/09 10:02 am
Who was it?!!!?? update soon!
Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]Date: 02/09/09 07:03 am
Ok I love that Sebine is taking things in her own hands and not waiting for Ulrich to come to her...the other women are understimating our American human..she is knows how to win a mans heart too!!
I am glad that Ulrich's dad and brother both seem to like our girl..she needs the support.
Th ething with the vamps worry me..I hope they don't cause their family any problems!!
I am enjoying this story sweetie....keep it coming!!
Author's Response: love the review and glad you like the story ^_^ Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/09/09 05:47 am
I like Sabestain...he's a trouble maker and a good one at that. He has an easy spirit and is quick to laugh. I hope Sabine doesn't get too ahead of herself it may make the other two come after her especially when she's not protected or unawares.
Good chapter. Hope to read more soon. Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: 02/09/09 05:38 am
I am loving this story. It is one of those stories that makes you become more addicted each time u read it. i have been checking this site all day for it.
Reviewer: Rapture Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/09/09 05:06 am
I'm liking this.Just keep updating.
Reviewer: yummy954 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/09/09 04:36 am
Frist of all I love the cast. Good beginning...I'll be watching to see where this goes especially since I have a soft spot for lycan stories.
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: 02/09/09 04:24 am
Please continue too short
Author's Response: you're just a fast reader! lol
Date: 02/09/09 04:24 am
Well it is clear that I don't Lorraine I am sure I am not going to like Isabelle either but let's concentrate on Lorraine for a moment here. This heifer is foul and facker then a 3 dollar bill. Ulrich may not smell the malice on her trifling heart but he can tell she is faking it with him in some mannerisms. I am glad he put her butt in check after that comment about Sabine. Haters damn!
I love Ulrich he appears to be a well rounded, patient, loving, handsome not too arrogant and cares about his people.
I like Sebastian actually I like the whole Braun family they all seem down to earth even though they are of royalty/nobility.
Sabine cooked you go girl and she no doubt cooked soul food cause it sounded like he may have picked up a peach cobbler but I could be wrong in any case what she cooked had Ulrich's nose wide open and he liked what he smelled and he also liked what she wore. She has already off the bat called him Ulrich without any titles without him having to ask her too.
I am so going fast forward in my head regarding this story I wonder if it is the vampires that killed Sabine and if she comes back as a vampire cause it did say that she did not come back as a human anymore and that was the least of their problems.
Girl I am so loving this story and want more but don't get me too spoiled cause I will run with it and update in two days I am giddy with excitement. :D
Can't wait til your next update will try to wait patiently.
Author's Response:
i wanted to make Lorraine a hater as you put it, lol i really didn't give isabella a role in the story, but she does do her part in it. as for the whole Braun family even though they are nobility, i think since they've been alive for so long that they should come off as being down to earth and patient but you know, they have other their moments too.
lol i'm not going to reply to the rest of the message, you'll just have to see when i update. ^_^ glad you like the story.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 02/09/09 03:30 am
Okay totally loved it. As a huge fan of the Unerdworld Trilogy u know I'll be checking everyday, sometimes twice for an update. You are doing a really great job so keep up d great work!!!!!!!
Author's Response: thank you for the review, and i'll try not to make you wait too long for an update! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/09/09 03:11 am
Really loved the update. Go get your man Sabine!!!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/09/09 03:03 am
I read this over at Fiction Press and I'm excited to see this story here. Hope you update with some regularity. I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Author's Response: i know! i need to update better but i should since i'm uploading on this website, i shouldn't keep off track since i'm writing the newest chapter now but thank you for the review. ^_^
Date: 02/09/09 02:41 am
Love the cast pics. Me likey. Please update soon.
Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/09/09 02:08 am
This is good! i love Sabine she's so adorable! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]Date: 01/09/09 09:01 pm
I like the start of this. There are so many directions you could go with t his. I can't wait to see how this goes. Good job.
Author's Response: thanks ^_^
[Report This]Date: 01/09/09 07:25 pm