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Michelle's First Marriage by PriscillaPal
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Jimmy Smits/Sanaa Lathan

Michelle Landau is a woman of many secrets. And when Quentin Costa a.k.a. The Carver returns to claim her as a victim, Michelle survives the near attack, but finds that Quentin's defesnse attorney wants to use her past with A.D.A. Miguel Prado against her as part of the defense. Michelle and Miguel are reunited in an effort to stop this from happening. But Miguel's ideas of warding off trouble and hers, are not quite the same...



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Michelle Landau
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Michelle/Christian (Nip/Tuck)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14849
Read Count: 12086
Published: 06/01/09
Updated: 17/01/09

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loving the direction that this story is going in. As soon as I read - "Miguel decided that Dexter was going to be the one that should take their secret to his grave." - I Knew Miguel days were numbered. Dexter is not to be played with.. LOL Can't wait until the next update.

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13/01/09
Undercover Lover by PriscillaPal
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Melinda and Said

Dr. Melinda Warner has always lived a quiet life. But when Captain Don Cragen and Det. Olivia Benson of the Manhatten Special Victims Unit, ask her to go back into her past and rekindle a relationship with Oz Penitentiary inmate, Kareem Said, Dr. Warner's life goes from quiet to dangerous...stormy and passionate...



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Melinda Warner
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 17293
Read Count: 15513
Published: 07/01/09
Updated: 04/04/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ok FIrst - Love OZ.. Thank You for this story...

Second - no the hell you didn't - "Prisoner 975444 Kareem Said, member of the Muslims. Convicted June 6, 1997. Arson in the second degree. Sentence 18 years. Eligible for parole in 5.” - thats was funny as hell..

Love that Vern showed up - great use of history.. Love all the mystery wthe story.. Update soon!



Author's Response: Here's the thing: not only do I love Oz as well, but Kareem Said, along with Tobias Beecher and few others, just got the most ridiculous sentences. I mean I know that Kareem burned down something, but he, to me, was a gentle soul. Now that Adibisi had problems!

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/01/09
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

First - Ryan O’Reily - Thank You.. I like Ryan..

Things are getting really interesting. Love the pace of the story. I have a feeling that something is up with FIn? I might be wrong..time will tell.. Can't wait until the next update.

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/01/09
Bowling for Kittens by BlackMamba
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

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Ugly Betty

Something about setting things on fire always seemed to put her in the mood.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Wilhelmina Slater
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Sexual Content
Series: Something Wicked
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 997
Read Count: 3020
Published: 07/01/09
Updated: 07/01/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Bowling for Kittens

Awesome! One again, you captured Wilhelmina & Daniel - this story ozzes sexy! - Power to the Kittens.. You Rock!

Author's Response: Thanks zeta :)

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/01/09
Through the Years by classicbeauty
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Growing up everyone has memorable moments that they will never forget; and with these two peas in a pod it's no different. Follow Justin and Lorraine to see if they really were just friends or could it been young love all along...

Because every relationship has a lil history...



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Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s), Other
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: The Perfect Blend
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 291
Read Count: 2785
Published: 08/01/09
Updated: 08/01/09

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Title: Chapter 1: 1986

That was cute. I really enjoyed it.. Nice start.

Author's Response: awe thank you so much, this mean alot to me getting feedback. more should be coming soon please stay tune, thanks again - dani

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/01/09
Take My Hand by classicbeauty
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

With this ring, I thee wed…wait a minute-What?!

Okay so sure, every since Lorraine has known Justin she’s always taken his hand without any hesitation. However, what they never had in mind was taking each other’s hand in marriage. Especially when their significant others are waiting at home.

Don't know what to do

What to say

Not sure what to tell you

Confused...

Unsure what to do after drunken “I Do’s” have been said, now sober they are only left to wonder…

Were they just empty meaningless vowels?

Or do intoxicated words hold more truth then their willing to face?

Which way do I 

Take your hand

Or let go…

take  

Lyrics: Take Your Hand by Usher



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s), Other
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: The Perfect Blend
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 20769
Read Count: 3229
Published: 08/01/09
Updated: 16/11/09

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Title: Chapter 1: The Proposal “I Do; Don’t I?”

That wa sweet - thanks for sharing!

Author's Response:

thank you for reviewing i hope you stick with me for some, next chapter is coming soon. thanks again stay tune - dani

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/01/09
The Heat by IWriteStuff
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Dara Jensen and Sonny Corinthos discover a creative way to beat the heat.



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Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital
Characters: Dara Jensen
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1860
Read Count: 1059
Published: 09/01/09
Updated: 09/01/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well that is def one way to beat the heat. LOL I love how she called him Michael instead of Sonny. And I agree with you. The Dara character has a lot of chemisty with many of the male characters on the show. Thanks for bringing that to life for us. Great story. Can't wait to read more from you!

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/01/09
Black Friday by PriscillaPal
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Jason Voorhies and his victims

It has been 10 years since serial killer Jason Voorhies was rescued from that New York sewer and given physical and mental care. But when his doctor decides to take him back to Crystal Lake one snowy weekend to help him deal with his demons, will he be helping his patient or unleashing hell on innocent people just trying to enjoy their weekend?



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Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11493
Read Count: 1083
Published: 11/01/09
Updated: 14/04/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was an awesome start to aa well writtern story and it had it moments of LOL. I am not a big fan of horror, but I love your stuff and decided to give it a try. I'm glad I did..

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13/01/09
The Second Temptation of Alexx by iheartng
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

It starts with a small favor and ends with a large regret. (Prompt 6 – Hate) Companion to To Be Desired.

 

A CSI: Miami fic.

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1041
Read Count: 2762
Published: 13/01/09
Updated: 13/01/09

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Title: Chapter 1: The Second Temptation of Alexx

I didn't see the show but I've read a lot of fiction and it makes me want to kick myself for missing out. Loved your story, Hope to see more from you.

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13/01/09
Little Goodbyes by Jamey_St_Peters
Rated: Most Ages
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Summary: Falling in love isn't supposed to be torture. Goodbyes aren't supposed to tear two people in half. But neither of these statements are true when it comes to Rayne and Adam.

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6715
Read Count: 23986
Published: 23/01/09
Updated: 10/03/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Little Goodbyes

That was interesting, I hope you continue the story. I wonder if she is really leaving. Not saying goodbye is major.. not even a see you later?

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23/01/09
Bed by Jamey_St_Peters
Rated: Most Ages
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Summary: With a million things going on in your world, it's easy to drift away from each other sometimes. Alex is about to find out it's just as easy to drift back to Matthew.

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2234
Read Count: 2627
Published: 23/01/09
Updated: 23/01/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Bed

Very interesting start. So what is up with Alex. Is Matthew really a jerk? or does Alex not know what she wants. Look forward to finding out as the story goes along.

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 23/01/09
Need by thebluestpurple
Rated: Mature Content
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Summary: A Whitney Russell one-shot. My take on how events should have unfolded following the big Chad/Vincent reveal on May 25-26, 2007. In a perfect Passions world (one not controlled by JER), this is how it would have gone.

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Categories: Daytime Television, Passions
Characters: Eve Russell, Simone Russell, Whitney Russell
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6250
Read Count: 2400
Published: 05/02/09
Updated: 05/02/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story was awesome .. thanks for much for sharing.. I think our girl will def make it though...

Loved this line - Skin on skin, his on hers, swimming in the warmth and aroma of lit candles.- Skin on skin, his on his, in the cluttered storage closet of that scandalous club.


Too Funny - "What are you saying? What do you mean, he's gay, honey...I mean, he's your husband. And you have a son together and a baby on the way."

Great Story.. and Welcome to the site.

 

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/02/09
All Falls Down by thebluestpurple
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary: What happens when 2 people from differing pasts discover each other and how much having someone you can truly trust means? A Foxney Fanfic.

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Categories: Daytime Television, Passions
Characters: Whitney Russell
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Foxney (Passions)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5477
Read Count: 8361
Published: 05/02/09
Updated: 05/02/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a good start.. I like the set up of the chapter.. also thanks for the lj tip.. so didn't know....

ps-im working on my spelling, Can you tell? - ha!

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstar
Date: 05/02/09
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is a really cute story so far. I like how you are writing the girls and I like to slow build of the couple.. update soon

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/02/09
I Do Love You by Reese
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

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Boy Meets World Story featuring Angela Moore and Shawn Hunter.  The story follows the events of 'The First Girlfriends' Club' episode. The night of Valentine's Day after being kidnapped by three of his exes, Shawn explains to Angela that he thinks they should change their relationship and be friends. Realizing that he was tricked, Shawn has a change of heart. But is it too late?  Will Angela give love another try, or does one of the ex-girlfriends succeed in her plans to keep them apart?



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Angela Moore
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: Made For Each Other
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 17816
Read Count: 9916
Published: 05/02/09
Updated: 05/02/09

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, I neer really watch this show religiously.. but I loved the hell out of your story.. Thanks for sharing.

I hope you add more to the site.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review.  I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story.  And I do plan on writing more stories.

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/02/09
Fastlane by Thespiandiva
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Sienna has always felt alone in life, but an unexpected message from beyond the grave will change everything she holds true.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1361
Read Count: 1089
Published: 08/02/09
Updated: 08/02/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Nice Cast.. Off to read!

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/02/09
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Your story is off to a good start. I thought it was interesting that everyone knew about her, yet she didn't know about them. So many questions? 

Did herr mother love her? She left her half.. was it love or guilt? Time will tell. Can't wait to read more.

Also Welcome to the site.  

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/02/09
Staying Together Is Harder To Do by Reese
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

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A Boy Meets World, Shawn and Angela sequel which takes place two months after “I Do Love You”.  Upon discovering that his daughter is in love with her new white boy friend, Angela’s father, Master Sergeant Alvin Moore, meets Shawn for the first time.  However, the good impression Shawn makes doesn't last long. Consequently, Angela and Shawn learn that while breaking up may be hard, staying together is even harder to do.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Angela Moore
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Made For Each Other
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 60536
Read Count: 105937
Published: 08/02/09
Updated: 17/02/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Angela father is going to have to realize that his daughter is growing up. Shawn & Jack are having simular problems. But this couple wants to be together..

I see a lot of drama in their path. It will be interesting to see how they overcome it all.

You are off to a good start. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response:

You said it.  Daddy's little girl isn't quite so little anymore.  And that realization along with other issues is going to keep Angela and Shawn on there toes. 

Jack's relationship with Shawn is going to change, hopefully for the better, but as you guessed, there are trying times ahead. 

Glad you liked the chapter, and thanks for the feedback.

 

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/02/09
CELIA by chocolate470
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 135]
Summary:

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Their love affair was never destined to go on for a lifetime - his father made sure of that outcome. Pregnant and alone Celia found comfort in the arms of Joseph who became a husband to her and a father to Joshua...the only man she could place her faith and trust.

Circumstances change and she had to seek out the one man that still had a part of her soul. How would things play out and how would it affect those around them?

Dedicated to: Megumi, Brown_Mocha, Sweet Pea and Robin



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 59634
Read Count: 76942
Published: 09/02/09
Updated: 04/06/09

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Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Very interesting cast... off to read

Author's Response:

Hey Z,

I had to search for pics that made me think a bit about that era so more corn rows/braids and then that head scarf and the manner of dress...also persons that would be a part of Celia's family..

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/02/09
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Choc.. I usually don't go for historical, but I like your writing and decided to give it a try and I'm glad I did. I really like this story. It has a good voice and a good pace. You have my attention.

Looking forward to the next update! Good Job!



Author's Response:

Thanks Z,

I'm glad you read my fic because I know I lot of people don't go for historical writings for a variety of reasons. Once I have your attention I will do my best to see this fic through! Thanks for the awesome review! 

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/02/09
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Choc, great update..Love what you are doing with this story. The pace of Jonathan and Celia is on point and makes me root for them even more.. Can't wait until the next update.. You Rock!

Author's Response:

Hey Z....

You think I could keep this pace...LOL!!! Maybe I should email you about why I run into trouble at this pace but for now I'm happy that you are rooting for this couple although we all know the complications that will come about. You Z...are totally awesome! Thanks for the encouragement and also the great review!

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25/02/09
Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Great Update. I really enjoyed this chapter..But my heart is breaking for Jonathan. I guess we have to see how this one plays out.

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/03/09
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Great Update.. Really like what you are doing with Celia and Jonathan.

Author's Response:

Z...glad you are enjoying the story but you better hold be back cause I'm about to burst...LOL!!!

Pace chocolate...pace...hahaha!!!

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/03/09
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Nice update.. Still loveing the pace and flow of the story, just one question.. WTF Amy... Nice Job!

Author's Response:

Hey Z...

Pace what a riot...LOL!!! As for Amy...HAhahahaha!!! Thanks for the great review!

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20/03/09
Title: Chapter 1: The Cast


The stuff with Johnathan and his son brought a major smile to my face.. awesome stuff.. awesome writing. Not sure what is going to happen with Celia and Jospeph. I don't think this is what Joseph signed up for. Time will tell.. Great Update!

Author's Response:

Hey Z,

I knew when I wrote Joseph this way that not many people would be in favor of Jonathan and Celia getting together but I said that sometimes a woman has these hard decisions in her life...reason for the title...its all in her hands!

I'm glad you loved the writing on the interaction. I thought hard about that one because I felt it was necessary to give it to the readers.

So glad you are still enjoying the fic thanks for the great review!

 Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15/04/09