Penname: BlackMamba [Contact]

Real name: Rejena

Member Since: 10/06/08

Membership status: Member

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"If you pay attention, then you can draw inspiration from anywhere. So much of that is paying attention, to details and to what’s going on in your life. People say, “Where do you writers get your ideas?” and I say, “We get them from the same place everybody else does. We just notice when we’re having them."


-Neil Gaiman


*My original stories are being dusted off, revamped and recycled for later use. 


 



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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 128]
Summary:

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I'm really not good at summaries. Basically Evangeline has been in Atlanta for a year and arrives back in Llanview with her new baby girl. Either Christian or Todd could be the father...or so she wants everyone to believe..



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 48776
Read Count: 12567
Published: 19/08/08
Updated: 12/11/08


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great update choc. Really like the Blair and Todd bitching.  Funny stuff.  Tangie was bliss as always. Great job.

Author's Response:

Hey Black,

I love writing Todd and his nemesis talking to one another. Thanks for the awesome review as always!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/10/08

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great job Choc. Loved the Blair smackdown, that was too funny.  And awwww to the mushy.  Love the Tangie family ending.

Congrats on a great fic!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/11/08

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

CSI: Miami fic.

They’re close. She staring into hazel eyes she knows so well, slightly scared of what she sees. His breath brushes her cheek as he gives her a chaste kiss and her hold loosens on the paper. “I promise, Alexx.”



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 914
Read Count: 2400
Published: 22/08/08
Updated: 22/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, once gain you've blown me away.  I think this might be my favorite of the fics you posted.  

It's want. It's desire.

But it isn't love.

And that's just not enough.

Best lines of the fic hands down.  Thanks so much for posting these here.  They're awesome.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/08/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary: Todd Lord Manning was born to rule, Evangeline Nahim Williamson was born to serve, it's a taboo for the two worlds to collide and become one.

Table of Contents
Categories: One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: Tangie Teases
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1072
Read Count: 847
Published: 24/08/08
Updated: 24/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: chapter 1

Okay dyhanna, this was really different and I give you many props for doing it.  I have to say my favorite part was this last line.

 I will tell him that you are Evangeline Nahim Williamson, the center of my affection, the apple of my eyes, the heart of the Lord

That was very well done.  I liked the significance of him washing her feet instead of the other way around.  It showed a level of respect on his part that was needed to show how he saw her as a woman and not a slave.  Good job dyhanna.  You get stars. :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, the main thing I was trying to get across is that Todd can be carefree, loving, respectful and powerful all at the same time.

I think she really liked him because he humbled himself and showed her it's okay to be different.

I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/08/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Sebastian Langley has everything he wants except Kaiya Walker, his ex-girlfriend.  A reformed player, Sebastian would do anything to get Kaiya back.  And what Sebastian wants, Sebastian gets. 

This was one of my first fics, so it may be a little rough.  Still, it was a favorite on the TST board, so I hope you guys enjoy it.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 70325
Read Count: 119368
Published: 24/08/08
Updated: 24/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very interesting start.  So I knew he was a player off the bat but damn---how big is this dude's head. Kayia was only 16 huh? I'm with Jordan, dude needs to back off till she's legal.  But I did see a hint of something in there. She was throwing him off his game.  That's good, he seriously needed it.  Really liking this so far.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/08/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 35]
Summary:

A group of college friends and a wedding...shouldn't be too much of a problem, right? Wrong. When the Best Man writes a book that resembles their college life, problems occur among the newlyweds and the Best Man, where past secrets come to the surface.

     



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 37498
Read Count: 44577
Published: 26/08/08
Updated: 29/10/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, so I'm spreading myself across your fics, taking them a chapter at a time.  I picked this one first because I remember liking this movie and was interested to see what you'd done with it.  Love the way you've put your own spin on the characters.  London and Kanji are obviously seriously into one another.  I'm kind of lost as to why they're not together (that like got in the way thing was weak to me) and London lapsed into a little bitchdom with the coments about his girlfriend.  Of course I havent' read her yet so she could deserve every bit of it. 

Great so far and I cant' wait to read more!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/08/08

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Okay, I really liked this chapter.  Gavin and Kanji were a couple of horny asses and I loved it.  They were funny as hell. London and Kanji had heat for days.  Still trying to figure out what happened there.  Nice chapter chica.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/08/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 88]
Summary:

Student Davia Vincent has sworn off men. Attorney and Professor Jackson Aldridge ego has been torn to shreds by his ex-girlfriend. Something draws the two together and in the end, they do learn that love is real, despite what they thought.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:Yes
Word count: 91423
Read Count: 168683
Published: 26/08/08
Updated: 26/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey Chayne. Still going through your stories and I love this first chapter.  I never EVER had any professors at hot as Jensen.  So this is a nice little fantasy fic for me LOL.

Jackson (love that name, ha!) is obviously feeling Davia.  And I was LMAO at her names for him.  I couldn't keep up.  This is great as always with your stuff.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/09/08

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good Lord, Jackson is hot as hell.  And determined.  I'm kind of scared for Davia.  But in a good way. :-)

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/09/08

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[Reviews - 204]
Summary:

KiFashions-2.jpg picture by Quania2004

Serena Davis is a shy young lady that has had a crush on her boss Mr. Ki, king of jerks, for 2 years. Mr. Ki, in order to stay the head of his family company must marry. What happens when he suddenly asks her to marry him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5022
Read Count: 49845
Published: 27/08/08
Updated: 28/07/16


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Quania, I love this! It reminds me of Ugly Betty/Devil Wears Prada only with the cool twist I'm guessing of marriage of convenience (got that from your summary).  Ki is a little bit of an ass but I'm digging his repressed demeanor. I think there's a little something under the surface that Serena's going to bring out of him.  I loved the parts with Serena and Amelia those were great and Amelia's a riot.  Thanks for posting and I'm looking forward to Chapter 2.



Author's Response: Someone else has said that it reminds them of Ugly Betty/Devil wears Prada too. I never connected Ki Fashions to the two before but I have to say you both are right. Thanks for taking the time to Review. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/08/08

Title: Ki Fashions

Very interesting chaper.  Took me a minute to understand why he dogged the girl in his office.  So Ki is still a baby when it come to his mamma huh? Hopefully that will be short lived.  Still loving Serena and Amelia and I really liked getting a peek into their history.

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Date: 30/08/08

Title: Ki Fashions

Okay, so both Serena and Ki are having family problems.  I felt bad for Serena.  Good lord she's only 26 and she's under pressure to settle down?  Ooookay.  Nice chapter quania.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/09/08

Title: Ki Fashions

Ha! This chapter was hilarious.  Ki is hard core unless he's dealing with his Mamma huh?  Suing for breach of contract? Nice.

Great job Quania.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/08

Title: Ki Fashions

Awesome! Okay, that date was hilarious.  When he wondered what else could be removed from Carla I died laughing.  So Serena's the "wife" now.  I'm sure she's going to be happy about that little eye opener.  Great chapter Quania.

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Date: 05/09/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

 


 


 


Looking back, I have this to regret. That too often when I loved, I did not say so.


 


 


 


A Bones Fan Fiction:  My response to the Chamber Character Challenge.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Camille Saroyan
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Cam/Booth (Bones)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2997
Read Count: 4024
Published: 27/08/08
Updated: 27/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: An Unnatural Death

Loved the story. The dialogue was absolutely perfect.  I can't pick a fav line because there were so many.  But this exchange shows the awesomeness of Cam.

 “But you can? Get dates I mean?” Booth said. Cam shook her head as she pulled the man’s brain out of his skull.

  “I got you didn’t I?”

 And this...

What? Did I say something? I can say fuck in here, no one else but dead bodies. We’re solid.

Loved it. Great, great job.  I love Cam and thank goodness she has a fic. I think you should add another *hint, hint*

 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review Black, I know you're...ahem...feelings about Booth, so I'm glad you enjoyed this one regardless. :) And I'm kinda in love with Cam too, I feel another fic for her coming on...

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/08/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Bonnie and RJ

Bonnie McKechnie has been back in Oakdale a few months when word that James Stenbeck is returning gets out, via his new head man, Llandview's RJ Gannon. With Bonnie's cousin, Dallas and Margo Hughes, determined to put James Stenbeck under the jail, they do not refuse Bonnie's offer to use RJ's attraction to the McKechnie heiress to get information. But one afternoon, Bonnie finds herself surprised by the spell of passion RJ casts upon her...



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television
Characters: Bonnie McKechnie, Jessica Griffin
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26347
Read Count: 1560
Published: 01/09/08
Updated: 19/04/09


Title: Chapter 1: Bonnie's Choice

Nice to see another fic from you Priscilla.  So happy you used RJ for this as he's woefully mistreated on that show of his (is he even still there).  Very exciting stuff and I have to say I was taken aback at the horse love scene.  Very creative that one.  Thanks so much for posting. It was a great read.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/09/08

Title: Chapter 1: Bonnie's Choice

*BlackMa does the MC Hammer*

 More Bonnie and RJ!  Yay!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/09/08

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ah, you just rock Priscilla.  I was LMAO when RJ threw Jessica out.  Oh and him throwing Isaac overboard and Bonnie "almost" saving him but stopping when she saw his head bob?  Where the hell do you come up with this stuff. 

She was so wrong for keeping that ring.  And the jelly? LOL. 

Love it. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/08

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter.  I'm so loving this story. Bonnie is a trip and I was LMAO after RJ pulled that stunt at the police station.  And Stenbeck is a bad as Stefano.  Amnesia perfume? Geesh.

Update soon please!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/09/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Summary: Ryan is the lead vocalist of a K-Pop band called Rising Dragons. He and the band has come to America to promote their new album -- and hopefully become true international icons. Although the band is so close to reaching Ryan’s dream of breaking into American mainstream he is contemplating whether or not to stay in the band because of his band mate and leader Sang-Mun. Along the way of discovering what he really wants Ryan meets Devon, a young waitress at a local diner.

Warning: The Music Video/Trailer contains some spoilers for Rising Dragon 1&2

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 10133
Read Count: 1620
Published: 04/09/08
Updated: 16/12/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice start Quania! I really like Devon and Ryan is obviously gone after that first meeting.  Liking her friendship with Stacy too. They're a riot.  Look forward to more.



Author's Response: Thanks so much Black Mamba.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/08

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

 AJ

All My Children: Angie/Jessie

Twenty years ago Pine Valley was led to believe that Jesse Hubbard died in the line of duty. Until that faithful day he returned to Pine Valley and the love of his life Angela Hubbard. Where was Jessie all this time? And why didn’t he return to his family sooner?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, All My Children
Characters: Angie Hubbard
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Jessie/Angie (All My Children)
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 1542
Read Count: 8377
Published: 07/09/08
Updated: 13/10/08


Title: Chapter 3: Summer Nights

Glad you updated this story. Love the exchange between them.  Thanks for the update AshAli.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!

I tried to capture them as they really are, loving with a twist of sarcasm:)

Thank again! 

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/10/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Todd was never married to Blair, he was just an arrogant rich bad boy who always had his way until he met Evangeline who was a financial advisor at Bank of America where she worked.

She was pretty hard to get but they became friends and then the coma happened, when she woke up, they took things from there.

She left him three years ago, and now that he’s moved on and about to get married, she went to convince him to take her back on the eve of his wedding.

She wants him back but Todd is hell bent on giving her a dose of her own medicine.



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: Tangie Teases
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3534
Read Count: 1130
Published: 07/09/08
Updated: 07/09/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great job Dyhanna.  Loved the banter between Todd and Evangeline.  I like fiesty Van, would have loved her like that on the show.  My fav part was when she asked him about his fiance's favorite things and contrasted it to how much he knew about her.  Great moment.

Nice job as usual Dyhanna.



Author's Response:

Hi BlackMamba, Glad you liked it, I loved how she took charge of the situation. I'm still trying to imagine anything that could possibly make Todd stop loving Eva but I haven't found one yet.

Thanks for reading and the review.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/09/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 38]
Summary:

[chief of police] John Mc Bain is [movie and music producer] Todd’s step brother and John just got married to [lawyer] Evangeline who happens to be [unemployed] Blair’s best friend, Blair is married to Todd.

Todd returned to Llandview some years ago to discover that things never stay the same, the newly wedded Mc Bains are coming to Llandview settle down. The connection was already there before the reunion started and as we all know, John + Todd + Blair + Evangeline = Double Drama

Sometimes, second chances are like broken records, a melody is always missing.



Table of Contents
Categories: One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14370
Read Count: 1888
Published: 18/09/08
Updated: 30/11/08


Title: Chapter 5: "Complicated"

Great update dyhanna. Lot's of drama in this one. Looking forward to the conclusion.

Author's Response:

Oh stop it Mamba, you are the mother of all dramas, but I'll take it all the same.

Thanks for reading and for the reviews.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/11/08

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

paul bons

 

As The World Turns FanFic:  Bonnie has been through a traumatic experience and Paul Ryan is there to help her every step of the way.



Table of Contents
Categories: As the World Turns, Daytime Television
Characters: Bonnie McKechnie
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 849
Read Count: 2603
Published: 20/09/08
Updated: 20/09/08


Title: Chapter 1: Rain Dance

Very nice one shot AshAli.  Loved the best friend dynamic between Paul and Bonnie. Great job.

Author's Response:

Hey BlackMamba, Thanks so much for the review. 

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! 

They have always been one of my favorite non-couples and I totally enjoyed writing for them.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/09/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 49]
Summary:

I’ve been watching him for two weeks now. He’s beautiful, absolutely, undeniably, beautiful. He’s about 6’1, with a hard, but lean and athletic body. His short haircut fits his soft but chiseled features and that smile. Don’t get me started on that smile. Every time I see it, it sends a shiver right down my spine and I almost have to sit down to regain my composure. Then, there are the lips. Those pretty pink lips. They are so alluring that it would make God himself take off a Sunday afternoon just to admire them. I think that’s what I like about him most, his lips.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9850
Read Count: 3670
Published: 14/10/08
Updated: 30/10/08


Title: Chapter 1: one

Great start. Really liking this so far. Olivia is a trip.  Update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for the read, i'm glad you enjoyed it. Olivia's a fun girl, you'll get to know her in the coming chapters.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/10/08