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[Reviews - 97]
Summary:

After years of pain and betrayal, Kenya Nomenyo has decided to be on her own. She would work hard and prepare for her future. To avoid future pain, she has vowed to stay away from friends, family, or close relationships of any kind. Too bad a certain outcast, football palyer, and the universe have different plans for her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 12829
Read Count: 26287
Published: 20/01/11
Updated: 16/03/11


Title: Chapter 7: Fragile

i need a tristan in my life pronto. 

Author's Response:

haha. Girl, don't we all. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

~Liz

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/03/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 130]
Summary:

After a whirlwind romance Kara Watson thought Jonas Darley was the man of her dreams, that is until she learns his secret. Will their relationship stand against the odds?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:Yes
Word count: 37826
Read Count: 33496
Published: 07/03/11
Updated: 14/09/11


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lol at kara's reactions to her mom and jonas.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/03/11

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

umm does Al resent Kara just for being born...cuz it seems that way. As for respecting maylin. kinda hard to respect someone who is semi responsible for your family being torn apart. but if she's going to be in maylin's house she should at least act civil. 

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Date: 09/03/11

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

WTH is wrong with Deloris. she set her child up for marriage to a polygamist on purpose? these folks are nuts.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/03/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 93]
Summary:

Thank you for the banner Azl! 

 Quinn is ambitious, witty, and currently homeless. After a sudden breakup with her high school sweetheart she finds herself in need of an apartment ASAP. With classes starting soon she jumps at a great opportunity suggested by one of her best friends. The place is great but unfortunately she failed to read the fine print... 

Arrogant playboy roommate not sold separately.  

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 16925
Read Count: 16406
Published: 09/03/11
Updated: 13/08/11


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

ava is for sure psycho. if he thinks she didn't mean what she said about he'll regret he's out of his mind. females like that don't just disappear without some over the top drama.

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Date: 23/03/11

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

aww bonding while getting your butt kicked. girl power! LOL

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Date: 13/08/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

Armed with binoculars and a view from his bay window, Hollywood bad boy Knox Beau Bloom stakes out his new MILF neighbor as she spends hot afternoons and warm evenings bent over in Daisy Dukes weeding wayward flowerbeds with little success.  Watching her is about the most exciting thing Knox has experienced while on community service lock down in Waterfall, Arizona on trumped up drug charges.  Lucinda “Lucy” Esperanza has moved to Waterfall with Ally Grace, her too wise nine-year-old daughter, to start over after a past that she is not proud of and a bad marriage and divorce from one of the NBA’s most revered players.  She had heard good things about Waterfall and that is what she needed, good things to happen.


Friendship, love and lust blooms, not necessarily in that order, when Knox decides to act as the neighborhood Welcome Wagon by greeting her with a confident swagger, sexy smile, mesmerizing eyes ocean blue eyes, and cold bottled water.


 


All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 4513
Read Count: 4387
Published: 30/03/11
Updated: 05/04/11


Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

looks great

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/03/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 96]
Summary: Lorca Lark has just lost her husband and is with Child. She fears that she will lose herself because of the grief of his passing and the uncertainty of the future. She returns to Pittsburgh and finds herself wrapped up in a Brian kinney, who's gay, but has always carried a torch for Lorca. When he decides that marrying her is for the best will it be a marriage of convenience, or does brian have something else up his sleeve?

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 30938
Read Count: 12756
Published: 02/04/11
Updated: 23/10/11


Title: Chapter 12: I'm Your Man

this story is awesome! i can't believe it didn't read it sooner!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/10/11

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Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 130]
Summary:

Emery Harris has her hands full running the Beckenbach family for the past 7 years and she's loved every minute of it. So throwing the surprise 35th anniversary party for her employers is hardly a chore. But rather than worrying about the guests and the band, Emery finds herself fretting about the arrival of the prodical son. For the first time in 3 years Nick Beckenbach will be stateside. As much as Em has tried to convince herself that she's moved past her feelings for him, she can't be sure until this weekend is over. But there is more than just her feelings for Nick to contend with. One thing is for sure, the party won't be the only surprise this weekend.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 10325
Read Count: 41434
Published: 26/04/11
Updated: 29/05/11


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

em is so clueless. that's the operation she needs to work on, operation get a clue and get with bas herself!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/05/11

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

already i've come to the decision, that nick and this cady can go kick rocks. i'm all for sebastian getting the girl.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/11

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i feel so bad bad for both bas and em, longing for people who only leave you disappointed. i hope this gets em to where she needs to be...with bas!

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Date: 24/05/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 385]
Summary:

FullBloom2--Banner

 

Tabby and Jace met for the first time at a family member's wedding and decided to take advantage of the company and island scenery. What they didn't expect is that their paths have crossed before. It's funny how the past can come full circle.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Full Bloom is an original work of fiction, please do not post or copy this story to any other websites.   

Full Bloom © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11685
Read Count: 102564
Published: 02/07/11
Updated: 10/07/17


Title: Full Bloom

WTH just went down?! omg and all of this, well most of this could have been avoided if the parents had just told the truth. smh



Author's Response:

It was straight foolishness, right!! But like you said it could have been mostly avoided if the parents had just told the truth.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/08/11

Title: Full Bloom

i'm surprised benny is actually trying to make up for it (well at least for right now) but ginger and francis are going to be in for a world of hurt when everything goes down.



Author's Response:

Well, Benny in his own way is trying to make amends...Ginger and Francis are in for a rude awakening!! 

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/07/11

Title: Full Bloom

why'd they keep it a secret anyway. it just seems stupid. and now that benny and ginger are on their way this is just going to make the lying worse.



Author's Response:

I guess in some people's mind they think that keeping a secret can protective that person, but in most cases. That secret can take a life of it's own and it can get out of control. I think this is going to happen with Jace and Tabby...only if they let it. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/08/11

Title: Full Bloom

coco is a trip. lol @ jace, tony, mary and junior. that was hilarious.



Author's Response:

CoCo is always hilarious. Glad that you enjoyed that lil' morning after flashback.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/07/11

Title: Full Bloom

i think writing a story about olea and her sister's is an awesome idea.



Author's Response:

You think so?! I think so too! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/08/11

Title: Full Bloom

well dang a fist to the face for trying to help this time. i would say i have sympathy but that was long overdue. darren needs to get some balls. francis is so not worth it.



Author's Response:

That punch was very much long overdue. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/08/11

Title: Full Bloom

lol bedroom boom, can't wait. and i swear coco is a trip. mal will be time enough for her that's for sure. tony...tony needs some work, that or calico's fist upside his head. and what is mary and junior hiding?



Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad that u like it. CoCo and Mal got their work cut out for them that's for sure. The truth is coming soon

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/07/11

Title: Full Bloom

coco got a big a$$ mouth, don't she? lol Ginger is finally going to get what's coming to her. yes! i'm hoping the apple fell FAR from the tree concerning Benny and Ginger's daughter. and it's wonderful that Tabby and Jace are expecting,



Author's Response:

CoCo doesn't do sudtle,lol. Hey Ginger...kick rocks!(bop!) I pray that Eve will be nothing like her parents (let's all bow our heads...) Jace and Tabby, love them! Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/08/11

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

Vincent Leonardo Battaglia the Fifth is a misunderstood person in just about every facet of his life. His family's name precedes him, gaining him automatic respect everywhere he goes. But with that respect comes a fear and assumed lifestyle he does not back up. Not fully anyway. When he meets Eden Jackson, he wants nothing more than to make her apart of his world, but disaster seems to loom at every corner he tries to take her around. But if there's one trait Vinny definitely has from his family, it's their determination. Even if Eden is fronting like she hates him from the day he was born.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: The Battaglia Influence
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 56562
Read Count: 16807
Published: 30/07/11
Updated: 07/08/11


Title: Chapter 6: Actin' Up

hmm vinny bringing the A-game and so is eden. thanks for the dinner with david and kersia. I'm intrigued by their story as well.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/08/11

Title: Chapter 10: Gotta Be Startin' Somethin'

david and vinny = love  but eden and vinny need to have a conversation and get back to rights. is marcus involved with sal, perhaps?

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/08/11

Title: Chapter 9: Blast from the Past

hmm marcus is giving me the creeps. what is the boy up to i wonder?

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Date: 07/08/11

Title: Chapter 13: La Famiglia

hmm teo senior and raphael are using their family it seems. vinny and david aren't gonna take too kindly to this. and is sal's boss teo junior by any chance?

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Date: 07/08/11

Title: Chapter 14: Eff that Valentine's Day

WTH?! why isn't anyone telling vinny and david what's up?

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Date: 07/08/11

Title: Chapter 4: Family Business

aww poor david. and whoo to vinny being badass.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/07/11