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Summary:

After a whirlwind romance Kara Watson thought Jonas Darley was the man of her dreams, that is until she learns his secret. Will their relationship stand against the odds?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:Yes
Word count: 37826
Read Count: 33497
Published: 07/03/11
Updated: 14/09/11

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Title: Chapter 24: Author's Note

Look forward to the update whenever you are able.

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Date: 15/09/11
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Poor Kara!! She really needs to stop being in denial and realise that her mom is evil. Deloris admitted to the crimes and she nor Gage should escape punishment. Hope Leslie doesn't get hurt by Gabe as he obviously doesn't care for her. She needs to move on and try to be happy. Glad Jonas is there for her.

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Date: 31/07/11
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh oh, there's gonna be a showdown and Deloris and Gage wont know what hit them. Glad the ladies had Shannon's back.

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Date: 14/07/11
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Interesting update with the men fighting. Kara got what she wanted but the other ladies now feel neglected. I feel there's gonna be some tension in Jonas' home.  Hmmm, is Deloris planning on killing someone, namely Maylin???? Deloris is CRAZY!!!! Its gonna be interesting to see how this story turns out.

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Date: 19/03/11
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh sh*t!!! That's messed up!! Deloris needs to be exposed and Gabe is a sicko of the highest magnitude!!

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Date: 13/07/11
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wow, Cortez is a good actor. Wonder who is paying him off to take the fall? Deloris is a mess!!!

Wonder if she really preggers??? And if she is could the baby be Gage's? Why is Abe not questioning why she thinks he made her preggers?? Does he recall sleeping with her? I feel the drama is about to begin. Poor Maylin.

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Date: 19/07/11
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Glad to see the return of this story. Loved the update.

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Date: 17/06/11
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Loved the update. Jonas needs to do something with Maryanne as she's desperate and she may try to hurt Kara. As for Deloris....there's just no words for her. Hmmm, as her punishment she should become preggers but that would only put another child in her evil paws. She too much!!

I can see the drama surrounding Mona.....she needs to come clean to Al. I can see that info messing with his head. He's definitely gonna be stunned and hurt. I don't know if Mona is gonna be good for him except for the sex. They already starting off on the wrong foot.

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Date: 22/03/11
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Me likey but what's going on?? Is someone spying on him and Kara??? If so, why????

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Date: 08/03/11
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, what an update!!! Mama Stacey seems to be a closet racist even to the point of denying her own grandchild!!!! Now Kara and Jonas are being impulsive and I hope they don't live to regret it.

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Date: 09/03/11
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

WTH???!! Hmm, I guess the saying ...marry in haste repent at leisure has some truth in this case!!! Her mom has lost her damn mind!!! She set up her daughter to be hurt , not even telling her the truth to make her own decision. Jonas is a darn liar too. He really has some nerve!! He  married her under false pretenses and just expects her to accept the situation without protest. I hope when she finds out what her mom has done, she gives her a reality check. What mom does that to her own child?? Deloris is a hateful b*tch and I think she killed her brother!!! 

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Date: 11/03/11
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, this is definitely a different scope of story....polygamist romance. It would be very interesting to see how this story turns out. Kara falling in step with Sam and Maryann.....hmmm. Too many cooks in the kitchen but Jonas gets all the convenience he wants with these women.

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Date: 11/03/11
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Not liking Sam and Maryanne and their sneaky ways. From the get go they've been causing trouble for Kara. They're trouble makers!! Can't wait to see what Jonas does next!! I don't think she'll ever get rid of him now. Glad Kara and Maylin decided to give each other a chance. Oh nooo, Deloris has that evil look again. I would be scared, very scared!!!

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Date: 16/03/11
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Hmmm, I don't know if I'm feeling Jonas. He's just not a nice man. He's turning out just as bad as his mom being underhanded and manipulative and using his money to do the most ridiculous things! WTH is wrong with him??? At times he seems like an airhead!!!

Well, I hope she gets what she wants from him but sharing her supposed man with not one but two other women is abit unusual not to mention NOT LEGAL. I guess I'm not feeling all the polygamist relationship as someone always seems to get the sh*tty end of the stick.

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Date: 18/03/11
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Loved it!! Go get em Stacey!! Can't wait for the showdown to get started.

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Date: 23/07/11
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow, Maryanne is having a breakdown and Sam has found a man. Good for her!! Now Maryanne looks like she's gonna be a problem. Hmm, I think Deloris is behind that attack on Maylinn and I hope she is exposed!! She's pure evil! Mona, Mona, Mona..... I can see the sh*t hitting the fan when Alastair finds out the truth. She should have been honest and allowed him to make the choice.

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Date: 21/03/11
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow, feel sort of sad for Mona but she sort of had that coming. I feel worse for Al as he seemed abit confused but hopefully he can work it out. Deloris is such a schemer but her reign of terror needs to be put to a STOP!! Poor Maylin, wonder if Abe will tell her about Deloris. He shouldn't have trusted her. Glad Shannon did the right thing and hope she and Marcus can make it work.

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Date: 25/03/11
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow, wonder who killed Maryanne??? Deloris is my top contender. Don't trust her as far as she can be thrown. Can't wait until this mystery is solved!

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Date: 26/03/11
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh hell noooo!!!! Deloris set up Darwood!!! He walked right into her trap. Hope the truth comes out and they put her away for good. Hmm, wonder what Stacey is gonna do??? Hope she doesn't get herself killed in the process. Wonder what's up with the cop who is hassling Jonas??? Feel sorry that Jonas though. Hope Darwood can get him free.

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Date: 04/04/11
Title: Chapter 17: Author Note

Do what you have to do, we'll be waiting.

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Date: 13/04/11
Q&A by EvaJaye
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Thank you for the banner Azl! 

 Quinn is ambitious, witty, and currently homeless. After a sudden breakup with her high school sweetheart she finds herself in need of an apartment ASAP. With classes starting soon she jumps at a great opportunity suggested by one of her best friends. The place is great but unfortunately she failed to read the fine print... 

Arrogant playboy roommate not sold separately.  

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 16925
Read Count: 16411
Published: 09/03/11
Updated: 13/08/11

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Glad they're all getting along. Loved the update.

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Date: 14/08/11
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Glad that they started to bond. Now I guess she may have some explaining to do but she really doesn't need to. Can't wait to see how she handles this situation.

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Date: 24/03/11
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Me likey!!! More please.

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Date: 09/03/11
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved the update. Hope Aiden warms up to her seeing that they'll be living together. More please!!

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Date: 10/03/11
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Interesting update. Hope Quinn gets it together soon. Aiden needs to get his act together too or theyll be bucking head throughout her stay.

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Date: 11/03/11