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The Diva Chronicles: Seasons of Change by rogueprinzess
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

The story of four long time friends and their journeys with challenges, change and love while keeping their friendship together. This is the first of a series; Spring

*This story was posted before, but was deleted for some reason. So if it seems familiar, it is lol.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 28581
Read Count: 1661
Published: 12/02/10
Updated: 12/02/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Characters and Prologue

Interesting start.

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Date: 12/02/10
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Deconstructing Carlotta

Wow, what a snob Carlotta is and what a turn off she was !!!! She should have had more class than that and treated Steve with the manners I'm sure her parents taught her. Really disappointed in her. Loved the update as Steve gave her a few life lessons.

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Date: 13/02/10
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Double No Sexin'

Wow, Jeanine is another disappointment. Why was she continually hitting on Roger when she saw he wasn't comfortable with it??? Does she always jump in bed on the first date?? What a turn off!!! She needs to use her brain more than her body to get what she wants. What's wrong with these women???!!! They sure screwed up in the head. Interesting update.

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Date: 13/02/10
Night Blossom by Candace
Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

A challenge ficlet. Uhura is seriously injured on an away mission.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: None
Series: Constellations
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 484
Read Count: 3102
Published: 18/02/10
Updated: 18/02/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Night Blossom

Ooooh how sweet!!! Loved it!!!

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Date: 19/02/10
A new.... by kellyklue
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 158]
Summary:

Ethan “Dax” Daxton and his wife Dr. Zaire “Zhay” Daniels have drifted apart due to tragic circumstances. Dax awakes from a coma and has a case of amnesia not remembering his wife or current life. But, the minute he looks into Zhay’s eyes he falls in love all over again. The love that Dax and Zhay once shared was honest and sweet, but of late, it proved not enough to cure the hurts of the past, that they need in an effort to move forward.  Both must learn to forgive and love each other again, and that life is to short and precious not to include those whom you hold dear.


They are given a second chance to rediscover their love and what they do with it is completely up to them.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 47806
Read Count: 56655
Published: 19/02/10
Updated: 13/01/11

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Thanks for coming out, man....

Loved the update.

Author's Response: Thank you chap 7 on the way.

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Date: 21/04/10
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Not today

This was an interesting update. He seemed as if he was really nasty to Zhay which wasn't good but it made me wonder, did she cross the line with something??? or have an affair??? Is that why his family is treating her so badly??? What did he do that he didn't want Rosie to talk about??? Need some more back history.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. The Daxton's are a unique bunch, but as is the case with some families have difficuly in relating to each other. Keep reading, I'm working on the next chapter.

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Date: 23/02/10
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-The players

Love the cast pics.

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Thanks!

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Date: 23/02/10
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - I'll marry you, on one condition...

Loved the update. Glad Dax finally realised Zhay was his wife.

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Date: 15/01/11
Title: Chapter 1: 1-The Intro

Me likey......Very interesting.

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read it.

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Date: 20/02/10
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-Does it say, I miss you lover...

Loved the update but why did they split up??? Why was his family so hostile toward her in the start of this story???? What was Mason's take on the situation as he regarded her as a sister??

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. The reason for the split will be told in the next two chapters. Mason appreciates Zhay's honest and caring nature and he got on Dax's ass for his treatment of Zhay. We'll see that in later chapters.

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Date: 27/04/10
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - How do you know when you’re in love?

Wow, how sad this story has been. Hope a ray of sunshine appears soon. Glad that you're back!!!!

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Date: 28/10/10
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - I have nothing left to give

Hmm, I sort of agreed with Dax that she should have stayed put. How tragic to lose all the children because of her decision. I guess she realised that at the end of the day, family comes first always. I'm sure someone else went to she the child with meningitis given her situation. She should have known to slow down given her previous troubles. So sad!!! No wonder they have both been depressed. Great background info!!! Can't wait to see what happens from here. Will he remember her or the tragedies of his life??? Can they really make it the second time around????

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I am working to bring you more of their story.

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Date: 25/06/10
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - I get it, you love her

Loved the update. Did Ethan have a nervous breakdown or something???? Shocker to read about the possible suicide. Is he mentally unstable ???? Glad Zhay was willing to meet with him but he needs to work hard to get back into her good graces. 

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Date: 27/02/10
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

Glad he has regained conscoiusness but feel bad for Zhay. Hmmm, wonder what will happened from here on out.....Will they reconnect or drift apart???

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Date: 25/11/10
Blurring Lines by mocasoul
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

Regina Morris is black, recently moved from New York, and has a huge crush on Alan Bosley. Will she pursue a relationship with him during Alexandria, Virginia’s most trying time?

A Remember the Titans story...



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Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 14298
Read Count: 70357
Published: 20/02/10
Updated: 23/08/10

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Interesting update.

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Date: 22/02/10
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved the update.

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Date: 25/02/10
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh hell no!!! All hell is definitely gonna break loose now!!! I can see the drama now!!! Loved the update.

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Date: 18/04/10
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Glad Alan is doing ok.

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Date: 01/06/10
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting start.

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Date: 21/02/10
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loved the update. They really tempting fate with those kisses.

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Date: 24/08/10
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved the update but I'm afraid for Alan. His dad is a dangerous man.

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Date: 12/05/10
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great update. Wow, Alan sure got the crap beat out of him. I still think both of them need to watch out for Alan's dad. He's a dangerous man.

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Date: 15/05/10
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hmmm, interesting. They have finally decided to give it a go. Hope all goes well but they know what they are up against.

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Date: 03/03/10
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loved the update. Alan's dad seems to be a jerk/bully. So sad that he's beating up on Alan for things beyond their control. He needs a life lesson.

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Date: 10/03/10
Still Waters by Candace
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Following a particularly tragic away mission, Spock finds that fulfulling his duty as First Officer and being in a romantic relationship with a certain lieutenant is not as easy as he once thought.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: None
Series: Constellations
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2006
Read Count: 1124
Published: 22/02/10
Updated: 22/02/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Still Waters

I loved this short. It was great to see the over protective side of Spock. Yeah!!!

Author's Response: Thanks. It was hard coming up for a reason for them to have a fight according to the prompt, but then I figured that Spock's possessive/protectiveness would be a realistic cause of some strife.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/02/10