Penname: baha_malo [Contact]

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Member Since: 23/04/09

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Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

                 Finding Confidence

A journey for something you can only find yourself.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: The Winding Road
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2157
Read Count: 3054
Published: 23/02/10
Updated: 23/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Finding Confidence

Story's start is abit confusing for me but I'd like to see where this goes.

Author's Response: Thank you for ready and yes the stories a bit confusing because the whole thing is basically a metaphor.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23/02/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

2ndS&H

A story about a woman and the man who possesses her.

The second installment of the She & Him Series.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: She & Him
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4132
Read Count: 7847
Published: 28/02/10
Updated: 28/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Vermillion

Wow, that demon lover was intense.....but was it love or lust??? Would she really be able to have a family with him??? Hope Layla can be happy. Interesting short.

Author's Response:

Love or Lust??? that and all of your other question are things that i will leave you to decide until the third installment is posted where all the lose ends shall be tied up. Thank you Baha_malo for your review

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/02/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

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 Merlin

Gwen wakes to the sound of Arthur's deep and steady breathing and feels very much the same.

Not like a Queen at all.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Guinevere
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Gwen/Arthur (Merlin)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2191
Read Count: 10995
Published: 28/02/10
Updated: 28/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh how sweet, young love. Great story.

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/03/10

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 1]
Summary:

A Feb Song challenge fic. A day in recovery for Christian and Gabi.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kD9CrZODlNA 



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: They're Playing Our Song Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 461
Read Count: 2501
Published: 01/03/10
Updated: 01/03/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Me likey.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/03/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

The problem was she loved him too much and he didn't love her enough, till it was too late.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q8yZedKTXJ0 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Music
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence
Challenges: They're Playing Our Song Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1642
Read Count: 2123
Published: 01/03/10
Updated: 01/03/10


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Loved the story but sad that she killed the cheaters and seemed to lose her mind in the process. Her love bordered on obsession. Wished she'd just left the sucker and thought of her kids though. I'm really sad for the kids as they now have no father or mother.

Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted to continue to show what happens with the kids but I felt that it would be better as a one-shot. It's a sad situation for them. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/03/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

She was a normal sixteen girl, with an excessive amount of problems. She practically supported her mother and herself, while her mother was either passed out on the floor or out working on getting her fix. Her life was changed, when her mother's debt caught up to her. Instead of being beaten to death, her mother offered up her most precious item, her virgin daughter. She was sold into human trafficking. While her journey is better than most, it's still a tough one.  Sometimes, things happen for a reason. You must endure the darkest of hours before you can see the sunshine.

 

A/N : I will work on getting a beta and finishing this story in a way where I can be proud of it. Be patient! :D



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: The "Something New" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 3142
Read Count: 6810
Published: 02/03/10
Updated: 15/06/10


Title: Chapter 2: Desolate

This story is so sad so far. Is there any hope for her???

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Date: 16/06/10

Title: Chapter 1: Downfall

Me likey. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/03/10

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 3]
Summary: He needs to be on the road. No sense in delaying the inevitable. But he doesn’t move until she lets go.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Cassie Robinson
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Cassie/Dean (Supernatural)
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1338
Read Count: 3195
Published: 06/03/10
Updated: 06/03/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/03/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

 

 

       She's always thought it strange, that she could never know the entirety of a person that was standing right in front of her. There's always a past: so many memories and decisions and forgotten happenings that she can't help but wonder if anyone can ever really know another person.

 

*The continuation of this story is highly doubtful, but the banner is so pretty, I don't want to take it down.* 

 

Awesome banner by TokenBlackGirl. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 3771
Read Count: 1678
Published: 07/03/10
Updated: 07/03/10


Title: Chapter 1: "I'm so much older than I can take..."

Interesting start.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/03/10

Title: Chapter 2: "I'm not like them, but I can pretend..."

Hmmm, can't wait to see how this story develops.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/03/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Christie Monteiro thinks about some things over her morning water. Yes morning water.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 439
Read Count: 851
Published: 09/03/10
Updated: 09/03/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting short.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/03/10

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Christie finally works of the nerve to encounter Jin. But can she go through with it?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1347
Read Count: 5019
Published: 09/03/10
Updated: 09/03/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/03/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Christie deals with the rumors circulating about her.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 629
Read Count: 795
Published: 11/03/10
Updated: 11/03/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this story . Rumors can be destructive. It was good that someone gave her a light at the end of the tunnel.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/03/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

The Court Has Ordered Franco To Therapy Sessions With Dr. Lainey Winters. As She Tries To Understand Him, She Allows Him To Consume Her Mind And Connects With Him Both Mentally And Physically.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital
Characters: Lainey Winters
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: The "Something New" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2218
Read Count: 1168
Published: 11/03/10
Updated: 11/03/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting story. That was some dream!! Wow!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/03/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Kat Miller Gets More Than Expected From A Friend And Colleague.

Don't Have A Banner For This Pairing.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: The "Something New" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4109
Read Count: 1946
Published: 15/03/10
Updated: 01/04/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Talk about hawt, hawt, hawt!!!! Loved it.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/03/10

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Star Trek TOS Charlene Masters/ Scotty

Story inspired by the TOS episode The Alternative Factor. Charlene deals with the aftermath of Lazarus actions and is comforted by Mr. Scott.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: Constellations
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2577
Read Count: 2503
Published: 16/03/10
Updated: 16/03/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awh, I loved it!!! Pretty sweet story.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/03/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Scotty and Kat Valens are a normal married couple, living a normal life in a normal suburb and working normal jobs. However, in reality, Scotty and Kat are both skilled assassins working for different firms, both the best in their field, each concealing their true profession from the other. When both are assigned to kill a man named George Marks, nicknamed "The Watcher", they encounter each other on the job and discover the truth. Both employers task one Valens to eliminate the other, and each must choose between their personal and professional lives. Based off the movie Mr. & Mrs. Smith



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2393
Read Count: 1274
Published: 18/03/10
Updated: 19/03/10


Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Understand

Interesting start.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/03/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

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Who says there's nothing wrong with being nice?

Banner by the Awesome Black Mamba

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4545
Read Count: 3071
Published: 19/03/10
Updated: 05/07/11


Title: Chapter 2: Accentuate the Positive

Interesting start.

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/03/10

Title: Chapter 3: Dedication

Loved the update. Hope Eric is genuine with his interest in her.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/07/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary: A Charming Young Woman Connected To A Dead Mobster Comes To Town Looking For Answer, To Meet Her Family, But Falls For A Recently Dumped Computer Geek, Creating Enemies, And Making A Supposedly "Dead" Resurface.

Table of Contents
Categories: General Hospital, Daytime Television
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 15499
Read Count: 3904
Published: 22/03/10
Updated: 02/07/10


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Interesting update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/04/10

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved it! Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/03/10

Title: Chapter 5: The Cast

Great casts pics. Can't wait to see who you chose for Destiny.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/03/10

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm actually liking Destiny but wished she wasn't in the mob. Glad she stood up for her family even if a little violent.  She really needs to be careful around Sonny and the gang though. Can't wait to see what happens next. Loved the update.

Author's Response: I'm actually not really into the MOB on GH, but I decided to give this more a little character, making her something that's more than just the typical GH mobster. Hopefully I can do that in the next few chapters.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/03/10

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Loved the update. Hmmm, Is Ethan gonna stir thing up a bit???

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/04/10

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved the update but who the heck knocked her bottle out of her hand??? Someone's mighty bold.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/04/10