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Against The Grain by mocasoul
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Sarah, a spunky Southern Belle, always knew she was a lesbian way before she left her small Texas town to go to school in L.A. She meets, Chantal, the love of her life. After dating for a while and coming out to her parents, Sarah invites Chantal to come with her to Texas to meet her parents. Things start out rough, but gets worse as tragedy strikes as a result of the town finding out about Sarah and Chantal’s relationship. Will Sarah be strong enough to face her backwards town?

My first Femslash...be easy on me...



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Slash
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Femslash, Graphic Violence, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11750
Read Count: 6686
Published: 08/08/10
Updated: 09/07/11

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Please let the truth come out. Billy needs to get his, the liar!!! Urgh!!!!! Poor Chantal.

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Date: 12/10/10
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh oh, is Billy gonna be trouble??? Chantel should have kept her mouth shut instead of inciting those knuckle heads.

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Date: 03/09/10
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great update but Sarah could be more gentle with her parents. Her parents will accept what she is in their own time not hers.

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Date: 18/08/10
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Me likey. Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Date: 09/08/10
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hmm, interesting but I don't think all will be as smooth as Sarah would like to think.

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Date: 12/08/10
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

WTH???!!! Please, oh please let someone hear and catch the rat bastard!!! PLEASE!!! He needs to be exposed for what he is... A SICKO RAPIST!!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/11
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Glad to see this story's back. Hope Chantel recovers. I hope they beat the sh*t out of Billy after they get the truth out of him. That bastard even lied on Tim. Hope Tim gets him too!!

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Date: 03/06/11
Soul Food by Thespiandiva
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

 

A Yeardly Girls Story 

On the outside, Claudia Smith has the perfect life. A handsome husband, a thriving business, and an amazing home. But behind closed doors claudia feels she is losing her marriage, and has a foolproof plan to get it back.



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Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: With This Ring
Series: The Music of the Yeardly's
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1918
Read Count: 1923
Published: 10/08/10
Updated: 10/08/10

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Title: Chapter 2: Soul Food

Nice story. He really had some nerve. He had a piece on the side and wants to have cake TOO????!!! He sure got a reality check!!! Hope she divorces his a** and don't take him back. Definitely a life story!

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Date: 11/08/10
False Advertising by Candace
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Facing his first Pon Farr, Commander Spock of the ISS Enterprise reaches out to a colleague for help. Lt. Uhura is only too happy to be of assistance. However, she doesn't get what she bargained for. Crackfic. Mirror Verse. S/U



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Crackfic
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1870
Read Count: 5088
Published: 12/08/10
Updated: 12/08/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the short. Glad she didn't kill him.

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Date: 12/08/10
The lost by destinysdiva
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary: I woke up from a dead sleep to write this. I dreamt it. This starts nearly a year after Dean went to Lisa. Involves Cassie and her younger sister. I love the character Dean.  

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6630
Read Count: 735
Published: 12/08/10
Updated: 12/08/10

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved it!! Glad Lisa was exposed for the b*tch she was. Its a shame she tried to hurt Charles all because of jealousy. Glad Dean saw the light and got his HEA.

Author's Response: Yes, my dreams came true. Literally. Hate Lisa, love my fictional family.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/08/10
What's Done In the Dark... by MorrisonJD
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary: Evangeline Williamson is in a coma.  She begins saying a name that Todd Manning has never heard before.  When he tracks down the person he is surprised, but will it be enough to wake Evangeline

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Categories: Original Fiction, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson, Original Character(s)
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1170
Read Count: 2704
Published: 13/08/10
Updated: 13/08/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Me likey. Interesting start.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/08/10
Where Did he Go? by Thespiandiva
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

 

 A Yeardly Girls Story  

Cheyna is trying hard to get over Charles, and when he disappears without a trace things only get worse. But Cheyna will find help in the most unlikely place.  



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Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters
Series: The Music of the Yeardly's
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2982
Read Count: 1502
Published: 15/08/10
Updated: 15/08/10

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Title: Chapter 2: Where Did He Go?

Hmmm, interesting. At least this sister may have found some happiness.

Author's Response: it seems that way now but i have a lot more planned for cheyna. bwahahaha!! lol

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/08/10
Second Time Around - Cassie/Dean Anniversary by EdenWrites
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 2]
Summary:

This story was written to celebrate the one year anniversary of Route 666. Thanks for reading.

 No copyright infringement is intended.  All recognizable characters remain the property of their owners. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Cassie Robinson
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Cassie/Dean (Supernatural)
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5878
Read Count: 878
Published: 18/08/10
Updated: 18/08/10

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved it.

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Date: 18/08/10
Genesis by Femme
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Just a short one for my Abyss series. 



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Categories: Movies, Books
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Mystery
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: The Abyss
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1475
Read Count: 9028
Published: 18/08/10
Updated: 19/08/10

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Title: Chapter 3: Part Two

Interesting update but I don't think I like Evie that much. She's so shady. Aidan needs to wake up and smell the roses. Lillian used her and she's using Aidan. In this love triangle however, its hard to figure who the bad guy is or was.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review baha! It's sort of a new twist on the adam-eve-lillith story. I didn't use those names out of fear of offending so I sort of modernized it with some more darker tones. I think all of them are good and bad, I'm glad that came through. 

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Date: 20/08/10
Title: Chapter 2: Part One

What the heck??? What's Aidan doing??? Evelyn should realize that she crossed the line especially if she's cying over Lillian and that she hurt him. If she doesn't love him, she needs to move on out of there. Hmm, if this is a love triangle, its sure messy.

Author's Response: I'd say it's everyone using everyone for their own selfish purposes. These characters will appear in stories soon which will reveal more with time. Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: I'd say it's everyone using everyone for their own selfish purposes. These characters will appear in stories soon which will reveal more with time. Thanks for the review!

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Date: 18/08/10
My Brother's Keeper by kellyklue
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 132]
Summary:

 

 MY BROTHER’S KEEPER

Twin - One of two offspring born at the same birth; or one of two identical or similar people

Brother - a male who has the same parents as another

Family - Two or more people who share goals and values, have long-term commitments to one another, and reside usually in the same dwelling place

 

Love - A deep, tender, ineffable feeling of affection and solicitude toward a person, such as that arising from kinship, recognition of attractive qualities, or a sense of underlying oneness. A feeling of intense desire and attraction toward a person with whom one is disposed to make a pair 

AM I MY BROTHER’S KEEPER?  



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 43918
Read Count: 28034
Published: 19/08/10
Updated: 19/02/11

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow, Jude and Samara are getting closer to doing the deed. Noah's not  looking too good.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading :-). Jude and Samara are so hot for each other. And Noah? Well he maybe sicker than he is letting on. We'll just have to wait and see.

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Date: 17/12/10
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved it!! Hmm, Samara and Jude seem to be thinking about dangerous territory. Can't wait to see what happens there.... Hope Noah and Jude can make it work.

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Date: 23/08/10
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Me likey. This story started with a bang!

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Date: 20/08/10
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great update. Hope Jude gives Noah a chance. After 10yrs, he really needs to try to move on and stop dwelling on the past. Hmm, a spark between him and Samara huh. Wonder what the favor is????

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I know after 10 years and therapy Jude should be happier, maybe be he will be now that his brother is back in his life. The favor.heehehe..we'll just have to wait and see.

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Date: 20/08/10
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, what an intense update. I loved it!!! But my heart goes out to Jude. Sad what he suffered but hope they can all make it work.

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Date: 05/09/10
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hmmm, Mari and Jude seem to be growing on each other now. Interesting update.

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Date: 02/11/10
Title: Chapter 9: A/N - Not a Chapter

Sorry to hear whats happened to you!! Hope you are ok otherwise and safe. I know that situation is frustrating and I hope you can eventually settle down to write again. When you do, your fans will be waiting.

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Date: 19/02/11
AFTER MERLOTTE'S by Raven White
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

I started writing this after the events of season three's episode nine, so you have to pretend some things after that episode happen this way.

Also, there are spoilers.

tara and jason 



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon, Supernatural
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2650
Read Count: 851
Published: 28/08/10
Updated: 28/08/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting.

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Date: 29/08/10
Chasing Shadows by destinysdiva
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary: I don't even know how to describe this except to say I am a huge fan of telenovelas. I love that you never know if the good person is going to come out on top so here is my Winchester telenovela. Whoop!!! edited it after I got some sleep.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 12682
Read Count: 758
Published: 28/08/10
Updated: 28/08/10

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, what a twist!!! Dean's a mess and doesn't even know he got played.

Author's Response: Thanks. I love telanovelas

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Date: 29/08/10
Hope she cheats on you. (with a Basketball player) by Thespiandiva
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

  

A Yeardly Girls Story  

Jamie is not your average girl, and when she decides to give up her old ways and start fresh, hilarity ensues. 



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Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: The Music of the Yeardly's
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1040
Read Count: 2026
Published: 30/08/10
Updated: 30/08/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Look at how it all turned out now.....

Interesting.

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Date: 30/08/10