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Finding a Good Thing by Dsmoothone
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 315]
Summary:

 

 

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A part of the Kerrington & Associates series. Donovan Williams is a rookie in the Miami Dolphins Football Organization. He's lonely and praying for love to find him. Kendra Davis is a rookie in some sorts as well to the Dolphins organization as an athletic trainer.  Will she and Donovan become fast friends and later lovers?

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Kerrington & Associates
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 36599
Read Count: 47429
Published: 04/10/09
Updated: 14/03/10

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Title: Chapter 18: Planning it Out

Poor Kendra, things are just not going well. I think Donovan could have been more suppotive of her as she didn't intentionally set out to hurt him. Maybe they need some space until things settle. Unfortunately what Kendra had feared has come to pass. David really is a shithead trying to get Kendra to sleep with him, the old bastard!!!! Oooooo, I hope those pictures are tracked back to Garrett. Pay back is a bitch and I hope he feels it full blast to cure him of his nasty ways. He was sooo wrong doing that to D and Kendra because of his jealousy. Loved the update!!!!!

Author's Response: Space is going to work out good for them.  David is a jerk, but they are gonna get him.

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Date: 21/01/10
Title: Chapter 19: A plan put in motion

Loved the update. Wow, the crap is gonna hit the fan now. Glad Donovan gave Garrett a whipping. He's such a punk!!! Now his team mates really see what a bitch he really is.

Author's Response: Yep.  We gotta get rid of Garrettt

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Date: 09/02/10
Title: Chapter 20: If it can happen it will

Awesome!!! Glad the scumbag got beat at his own game.

Author's Response: Yep, now its time to shut the door on Garrett

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Date: 09/03/10
Into The West by brookmeade
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 127]
Summary:

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"This time and place, as I look upon your face..remember as long as you live,

                                                       it was my love  to give"   

                     -except from It Was My Love to Give by Barbara LaBarbera

       ~//~

Sally Parker had heard talk of Indian or "Injun" attacks out West, but that was just talk from around town. Right? Wrong.

Sally embarks on an enthralling, and often dangerous journey when she is kidnaped and taken into the Comanche Tribe. However, the journey isn’t easy, between battles with the increasingly, dedicated, hard-nosed, "war chief," Nakotah Quanah, and trying to fit into a strange society which she feels she doesn’t belong.

Just when things begin to look up, what happens when an enraged mistress wants her servant back and will go through all costs to get her back? Will this kick-off the beginning of many battles for the Comanche with the Texan government or can Sally defuse the situation in time?

Either way Sally is going to have make a life-altering decision that will not only affect her, but maybe for the ‘ayashe’ as well.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 8442
Read Count: 6588
Published: 23/10/09
Updated: 29/05/10

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Title: Chapter 5: July 2, 1847

Appreciate the update, loved it. Wow, Sally seemed to have jumped from the pot into the fire. Hope chief didn't go to far and can help her.

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Date: 30/05/10
Title: Chapter 4: June 25, 1847; 12:01 p.m.

Welcome back and thank you for the update. Loved it!! Hmm, wonder why he took her??? Is she gonna be a slave for them now??? Unfortunately I don't have adobe photoshop but I do hope you find someone who can help you out. Even if you don't get a new banner still love the old one.

Looking forward to the updates.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review 'baha_malo" :D I can always count on you for a review! I pray I find someone too..my shabby banner needs a makeover lol And you'll see what's in store for little miss Sally ;]

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Date: 28/05/10
Title: Chapter 2: June 25, 1847

Please, please update. Missing this story.

Author's Response: I promise I'm going to update soon.. I just have to get over this horrible 'writer's block' syndrome its torture!

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Date: 13/12/09
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I was so excited to see this update. I was really missing this story. It was short but sweet and I hope you update soon. Who is Sally's abductor and why did he take her??? Hope your muse is getting into full gear to stir your creative juices. Loved it.

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Date: 22/12/09
The New Mrs. Cole Turner by SilentPleasure
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 41]
Summary: Saretta saved him from a hellish existence, literally, and gave him a reason to live on. Married and expecting, they move back to his former home, San Fransico, in hopes of a new beginning. Now to see if the Charmed will accept her extended olive branch?

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 3956
Read Count: 3340
Published: 25/10/09
Updated: 03/01/10

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 3

Loved the update. Wow, Saretta was brave to go to Phoebe. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: 03/01/10
Until The End Of Time: Book 2 by Butterfly
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

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This 5 part series covers the life and times of the Brewster/Squires family through 5 generations.Starting with Salomi Jane's miraculous birth in 1900 and ending with how the famous family survived one hundred years later.This family is mainly full of performers taking over music,stage and Tinseltown.But this family isnt perfect.Many believe that the family is cursed.Experience their trials and tribulations,births and deaths,love and hate,the scandalous and the innocence,the luck and the tragedies that make this family so great.

Book 2: Picks up from where Book 1 left off at the end of the thriving and Roaring 1920's and we are introduced to Salomi and Gabriel's three children, Rita, Michael and Dahlia. The family go through the best and worst of times during the Great Depression, the election of FDR, the Hollywood Glam era, Pearl Harbor and WWII.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Until The End Of Time
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 65578
Read Count: 75498
Published: 30/10/09
Updated: 15/10/10

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Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow, said that Robin died but glad he was honest with Ruth. Glad Gabe stood strong against Beth and her seductive ways. Glad she settled down with Bobby. Wow, all the kids are growing up, hope they don't become too wild or get into any major problems. Loving this story so far.

Author's Response: Yes, Im going to miss Robin as well! Thanks for keeping up with the story! More updates soon!

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Date: 25/04/10
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Beth is a mess and a fool for listening to Maryanne.

Author's Response: Girl, who you telling! :) Thanks for reading!

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Date: 25/04/10
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Sad that they had to leave their families but loved the update.

Author's Response: Yes it is very sad, lots of men had to do that back then! Thanks for reviewing and the 5 stars!!!

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Date: 07/04/10
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh oh, wonder if the money is reaching the ladies? Hope so. Hope Gabriel and Robin don't get in trouble hanging out with Sue and Beth. Great update.

Author's Response: Lol, there may be trouble and there may not be, we'll see! I'll update soon!

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Date: 07/04/10
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Date: 05/02/10
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love this story so far and the kids are adorable.

Author's Response: Thanks again! I will update more soon!

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Date: 05/02/10
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Glad Beth got the message.....Gabe is married. Hope she doesn't try to get in his pants again. Glad they still have their jobs.



Author's Response: No consequences this time! Thanks for reading!!!!

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Date: 11/04/10
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Mary Ann and Sue make be sick especially Mary Ann going after Robin!!! Hope Beth doesn't try any sh*t like they're telling her. Robin was weak and an a**hole doing that to Ruth. The Scum bucket!!!

Author's Response: Girl, I feel the same way! Damn you men and your weaknesses and damn the bitches who prey on it!! Lol, thanks for reading!!!!!!

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Date: 11/04/10
I Hate Christmas by Dimples
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary: This is the story of Keisha's cousin Tamesha Hill and Isamu Fujita. I don't do well with summaries so I hope the story speaks for itself.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 26421
Read Count: 6141
Published: 03/12/09
Updated: 24/05/10

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yay!! My story is back and I love it!!! Please, I need more!!!

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Date: 25/05/10
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Really glad she's giving him a chance to explain.

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Date: 13/12/09
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yes!!! Awesome update. I'm really loving some Isa. He sure gave Jeremy the beat down he deserved.

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Date: 13/12/09
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Awesome update!! Isa was the man!!!

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Date: 22/12/09
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh noooo!!! I hope whoever that is don't hurt Isa. Let Isa be the one to surprise them. I'm just loving this story.

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Date: 22/12/09
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Awesome update. Hanako is too much. She makes me laugh. Glad Isa is gonna put a ring on it. Loved it!!!!

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Date: 28/12/09
Beast by Onimosity
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1636]
Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 419663
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10

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Title: Chapter 25: I'll Be Long Gone

Loved it but it was sad. Wow, Sunny left Nikki!!!! Its his own fault and I'm sure he's regretting what he did. Hope he doesn't go after Darla but she did have a big mouth. Hmmm, not too sure about Serge though other than a friend. Hope he remains cautious around Nikki or he's gonna get burnt.

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Date: 19/01/10
Title: Chapter 24: I'll Send You a Sign...Just so You Know

Oh noooo, the shit has hit the fan for Nikki. Darla sure did him in. She may be trying to change but she didn't need to hurt Sunshine like that eventhough I think she still was trying to get back at Nikki. I feel Sunshine may do something in the heat of the moment and regret it. Nikki has alot of explaining to do and I just don't see him succeeding. I feel it will be splitsville for them. Sniff, sad!!! Darla needs to go hide under a rock.

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Date: 18/01/10
Title: Chapter 33: Around the Kinda Misery I Find Part 1

Awesome update. Why did his father have to be so stubborn when he knows he's dying??? It would have been nice to see him make peace with Nikki. Glad his mom wasn't too bad and was willing to move on and start afresh. Hmmm, Sunny made it safely to Sudan, hopefully she remains safe.

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Date: 13/02/10