Penname: swirly_girl [Contact]

Real name: Ny

Member Since: 04/08/14

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Trying my hand at a childhood dream. Hopefully, you'll like my style.




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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 204]
Summary:

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Serena Davis is a shy young lady that has had a crush on her boss Mr. Ki, king of jerks, for 2 years. Mr. Ki, in order to stay the head of his family company must marry. What happens when he suddenly asks her to marry him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5022
Read Count: 49548
Published: 27/08/08
Updated: 28/07/16


Title: Ki Fashions

Girl ya got skills! Hope more chapters like this one are to cum... lol.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 07/11/14

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I read your first one. I like how this chapter one ended better than your previous first chapter. I noticed you. Changed the family members somewhat and introduced his ex earlier into the story. Okay, curious to see how this second version unfolds.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 05/12/16

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

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A sequel to Romeo Must Die. A young beautiful physical therapist (Perri) is consumed by a dark stranger who haunts her daydreams. A reclusive night club owner (Craven) must find his destiny before he loses all sense of his humanity. Will either be set free from the force that tortures them or will they remain shackled to the freedom and power they intrinsically possess?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider. The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider, and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Graphics by SPAC 



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Categories: Movies, Books, Original Fiction
Characters: Perri Reed
Classification: Crossover, Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 27289
Read Count: 18372
Published: 27/03/09
Updated: 27/08/09


Title: Chapter 27: EPILOGUE

This was different from my usual kink, if you raise, get an editor.  The typos did not distort this tale, but the story changed here and there as to who was who in the story or as to who was loyal to who (Craven or the Desire'/un-named queen)?; those parts really irked me. It was confusing at sometimes. I got the feeling that they (the twinz) were jealous of Desire' but not of Perri, because they knew Perri was needed for Craven's plan. Oh well, this was different from my usual kink. Oh, and this was... soooo rushed.

But loved how it ended with Bradley, young Deacon, and Perri! I couldn't help but to have a slight smile at the end. Very sly ending. One other point, um hoe did Sundiata get the dagger or get to Ghana. Still leaving confusing throw-ins.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 08/03/15

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[Reviews - 231]
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 A Special Thank You to BlackMamba for the AMAZING banner

Suzette is a Diva in every way. From the way she dresses to the way she walks and talks. She is beginning to hate being the it girl and decides to take break to try this new spa retreat for some rest and relaxation. When her car breaks down on a country road she is more than happy to be rescued By Kyle a rancher and businessman.

Kyle is a mans man, he loves the outdoors and working with his hands. He is a cowboy after all. On one fateful day after doing some business in the city he is driving home when he rescues his destiny.

Suzette is a city girl in every way,in her high end jeans, expensive clothing and heels (who wears heels in the country?) but she was the most beautiful thing Kyle had ever seen he was a Big man and he loved a woman with curves, a woman who could handle a real man. From the moment he saw Suzette she was his.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9843
Read Count: 31470
Published: 29/05/09
Updated: 04/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this, it was a very nice "Love at first sight." Your wringing style is nice. You set a kind of fast pace story, but your tone is uplifting and pleasant; but as a British person, in America, especially a cowboy/western romance, no one refers to a mother as "mum". That is an English term, not American. Next time go with "momma" or "mom." My dad is a country boy. Please don't take offense, like I said your story is good. I've read it twice and enjoy it just the same.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 24/12/16

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

A series of vignettes from the point of view of Spock, Spock Prime, Sarek and Tuven, a male OC, about the illogical women at the center of their lives.



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Categories: Movies
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Film)
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 21283
Read Count: 26359
Published: 09/07/09
Updated: 18/02/10


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 10: Departures

Nice,  loved her doll, "Lady Jamison;I wonder if anyone missed that honorary reference. Very cool writing and FINALLY someone wrote about Spoke and Uhura having a child or children I wish you gave them more kids, considering that Vilcans are in desperate need to replenish their population. Oh well, still loved this one Candace.

I'm such a Trekkie and none of my female fri nds are into sci-fi, pity, this is a story I highly recommend.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 27/12/16

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 111]
Summary:

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"Never judge a book by its cover"

Sasha McPherson, 31 year old real estate agent has a dream.  A dream deeply rooted in the American Dream.  She wants to be a million dollar listing agent at Blitz Realty and make partner.  She's beautiful, charming, and with an otherwise open heart.

Pavlov Patrenko, 28 year old temporary resident from the Ukraine also has a dream.  A dream deeply rooted in the American Dream.  He wants to defect to the U.S., buy a home, and build a business in the land of the free.  But only a few things stand in his way-Sasha McPherson, her gilded suit of armor, and one huge 'f_ck off' sign spiked firmly on her forehead.

What happens when east meets west?

Surely Curves up Ahead!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC). The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC), and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Graphics by SPAC 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 22525
Read Count: 18841
Published: 14/08/09
Updated: 25/10/11


Title: Chapter 10: AUTHOR's NOTES

Looking forward, good story.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 06/12/16

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 127]
Summary:

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"This time and place, as I look upon your face..remember as long as you live,

                                                       it was my love  to give"   

                     -except from It Was My Love to Give by Barbara LaBarbera

       ~//~

Sally Parker had heard talk of Indian or "Injun" attacks out West, but that was just talk from around town. Right? Wrong.

Sally embarks on an enthralling, and often dangerous journey when she is kidnaped and taken into the Comanche Tribe. However, the journey isn’t easy, between battles with the increasingly, dedicated, hard-nosed, "war chief," Nakotah Quanah, and trying to fit into a strange society which she feels she doesn’t belong.

Just when things begin to look up, what happens when an enraged mistress wants her servant back and will go through all costs to get her back? Will this kick-off the beginning of many battles for the Comanche with the Texan government or can Sally defuse the situation in time?

Either way Sally is going to have make a life-altering decision that will not only affect her, but maybe for the ‘ayashe’ as well.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 8442
Read Count: 6536
Published: 23/10/09
Updated: 29/05/10


Title: Chapter 5: July 2, 1847

Will you continue this story, very curious to how it all turns out.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 24/12/16

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1636]
Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 411074
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10


Title: Chapter 15: I can feel everything you do...Hear everything you say

Nice comments on other stories floating out there.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 21/02/15

Title: Chapter 6: Wild is the Wind

You write like a pro. Loved it. Very intense.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 26/12/16

Title: Chapter 6: Wild is the Wind

You write like a pro. Loved it. Very intense.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 27/12/16

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

A challenge ficlet. Uhura is seriously injured on an away mission.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: None
Series: Constellations
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 484
Read Count: 2682
Published: 18/02/10
Updated: 18/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Night Blossom

Sweet.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 18/09/14

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

 

Camryn Jones has had enough, and Justin Blake is about to find out just how far she'll go.


 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1044
Read Count: 1883
Published: 07/04/10
Updated: 07/04/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it. Different, but I like it.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 25/12/16

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 42]
Summary:

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When they were young, Kendal and Keoni hated one another. But as they grew into young adults something changed. Now, on the verge of adulthood, they'll come to discover that the ones they've been looking for were right there all along.

A one shot for Nene and the Summer Prompt Fest.

 

Disclaimer/Credit: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Image from gettyimages.com.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5755
Read Count: 13695
Published: 04/05/10
Updated: 04/05/10


Title: Chapter 3: When we were in love

Didn't see that ending coming, no offense, but I won't read anything else you write, very depressing. You could have at least given a better time frame the prom to the 2 years pass his death. So nothing but her memories or how he died, uhm... oh well. Maybe I'm spoiled by the HEA writers. Sorry.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 25/12/16

Title: Chapter 2: When we were young adults

Please add main character death or character death however they allow you to select.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 25/12/16

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 88]
Summary:

Noelle and Trey are two individuals looking for the same thing, in Washington D.C.'s highly competitive social scene, where power and money are king. Though they are both from different worlds they both want... An Unconditional Love.

    

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I would like to send a big shout out to JUNEBUG66 for all of her help getting this story off the ground. She was a literal Slave Driver. But because of her drive and commitment, I finally got the beginning parts off the ground. So THANK YOU,  Sister girl. For helping a newbie like me :0). Hope to do us proud.

Disclaimer:  All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9393
Read Count: 20395
Published: 14/07/10
Updated: 14/11/11


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good story, more please. Lol

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 30/10/16

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 335]
Summary:

Kwan is one fifth of Korea's most popular idol group, and a dedicated, card carrying heartbreaker. But what happens when he is confronted with the girl from his past? the one that got away? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 65707
Read Count: 68686
Published: 06/12/10
Updated: 15/11/11


Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue

Cute story, I love the humor. The band and nCarla with Kwan was great!

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 06/12/16

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 61]
Summary:

 

Just when Georgina Akande thought she had rid herself of her creepy ex-fiance, he strolls back into her life in the worst way possible.

A misguided attempt to assert herself leads to some painful home truths, but, also, the opportunity to grow and love again.



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Love Is...
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 37015
Read Count: 8026
Published: 18/01/11
Updated: 31/05/11


Title: Chapter 4: Murphy's Law

The story has promise, but I kind of saw Celeste's betrayal coming... But George forgiving her... so unrealistic. Now my I'm pissed for the main character being so weak and a patsy to her family. See right there, I would be done with the controlling mom, deaf, mute, and dumb dad, and sneaky backstabbing sister. This does not sound like a 'real sista's (yes, I meant sista' and not sister) reaction to this mess. But then I'm a Black American woman reading a Black British woman's take on her somewhat twisted family dynamics. Now this is a hard read for me. 

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 16/02/15

Title: Chapter 11: A Cold, Wet Fish To The Face Part I

Still reading and enjoying the story, but once again the reactions to some situations... Come across unrealistic.

1. Rachel said "I HAVE to meet his wife and daughters." Do any of these women (Georgina and Rachel) have backbones? The husband was at fault, he starte an affair with a student, the girl was young and stupid, BUT she wasn't the one that said vows to his wife. It is really annoying when characters reactions are not the norm. Rachels's part should had said, "He wants me to meet his wife and daughters." 

2. Please have Rahcel and Hulk get together. Yeah the sperm donor wants to get to know the child he wanted aborted. Please do not let the cheating husband try to get custody... 

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 17/02/15

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 62]
Summary:

 

Panther Williams hated her life as a celebrity kid. She knew some people would kill to have her place and her money, but it wasn’t the glitz and glamour people always thought it was. She was basically 17 being treated like she was 7 and in the limelight of her parents career when she was trying to come out with her own career. Yeah, she would kill to have an ordinary life.

 

She yearns for that ordinary life more when her parents set her up with two of the wealthiest siblings in Hollywood, the Worthington duo Prima and Rider, in order to get their father to invest in her father's production company.  She overhears something she shouldn't have and has to deal with the duo and being a pawn in a twisted game.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Femslash, Incest , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 12645
Read Count: 14883
Published: 17/04/11
Updated: 30/08/11


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Interesting, 

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 19/12/16

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Klaus now owns ninety percent of mystic fall, Bonnie works for him. With his obsession for her, only bad things could happen. Maybe they's fall for each other, may be it's just a game. 

Pairing: Bonnie and Klaus

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=djACQfxYVl0



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Bonnie Bennett
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2686
Read Count: 859
Published: 25/05/11
Updated: 25/05/11


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked it... somewhat. I want more chapters, lol. And I like him being ruthless and crazy possessive.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 08/10/14

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 55]
Summary:

A True Blood AU story. What do Eric Northman, Alcide Herveaux and Russell Edgington, all have in common? Answer: they all need Tara Thornton.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Tara Thornton
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:Yes
Word count: 39647
Read Count: 33913
Published: 02/07/11
Updated: 27/08/11


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This was darn good. Funny for me, I could follow this story only because I had recently discovered True Blood on Prime by mistake earlier part of this year. So I totally got who was who except for the aunt, Pam, Terry, and maybe Jessica. Dry cool story. I even like how it ended.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 04/12/16

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 36]
Summary:

 

~A Gift Fic for Happy 2 B Nappy~

 

April Jenkins will do whatever Carter Beck requests. Can you blame her?

 

Loosely inspired by The Secretary starring James Spader and Maggie Gyllenhall.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: The Becks
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1478
Read Count: 5267
Published: 10/08/11
Updated: 10/08/11


Title: Chapter 1: A Day at the Office

I love it!!

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 18/09/14

Title: Chapter 1: A Day at the Office

I love it!! Damn, I need to train my husband.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 18/09/14

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

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Coffee Can be sweet and can also be bitter, a man that is know to be a monster and has done terrible things but yet he has the Taste for coffee and also the person who serves it to him. Can this cold hearted man warm up to this Coffee Girl.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5862
Read Count: 5162
Published: 13/09/11
Updated: 23/09/11


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Um... Wow, not sure what other reviews have stats, but you are in dire need of an editor. I like the aggressive nature of ur protagonist (especially how he starts off as the antagonist)... but please edit, it clears slows down the flow of the story. I like this so far. Please don't hate my constructive criticism.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 23/02/15

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

More c.c. (Constructive criticism)... I think u need to improve the of the characters. Meaning the guy seems irradical for an organized hitman. No the girl's personality fits her. His dialogue seems always rushed. The tone or the mood of the story should slow down, give more details of their surroundings so people can better visualize their environments/settings. This helps to slow the tale down too.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed
Date: 23/02/15