Penname: Cali2mt406 [Contact]

Real name: Pam (Paw)

Member Since: 13/09/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Born and raised in California, Until 2003 I moved to Montana!! Were  it is really cold I wonder often what I am doing here, other then the fact that it is beautiful here!! I love to read. Mostly romance novels. The authors on this board opened  my eyes to other storys beside the sappy ones I love and still will always read. However these lady's here write character with flaws and characters that love one antother dispite them. Lady's please continue to do your thing cause your doing it well.

 




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Beast by Onimosity
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1636]
Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

 Beautiful and amazing banner courtesy of BlackMamba


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 419663
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10

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Title: Chapter 22: You Know There's No Need to Hide Away

Awesome chapter!! What is Jaccob up 2!!

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Date: 13/01/10
Title: Chapter 40: I'm Gonna Get Up...

All I can say is wow. Sergei was willing to die for something that is really none of his business. Nikolai was right he isnt forcing Sunshine to be with him any longer he is who she wants to be with. So the gun went off wonder who got shot.? I hope know one got seriously hurt. I think Sergei needs to go back to were he came from. I hope Nikolai gets out of the business. Great chapter. Look forward to the last 2 chapters.Its been a wild ride reading about Sunshine and Nilolai.

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Date: 11/03/10
Title: Chapter 35: Around the Kinda Misery I Find Part 3

Loved, Loved, Loved this chapter. I think Sunny needed to hear what Royce had to say. Loved there talk and so glad she going to get out of there safe. Sunny has been through alot for her age. Great job!!! Keep it coming :o)

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Date: 16/02/10
Title: Chapter 35: Around the Kinda Misery I Find Part 3

This story is off the charts!!! Keep doing your thing girl!!!

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Date: 17/02/10
Title: Chapter 11: With your child's eyes ... You are more than you seem

Great update!!! So Pops is at the bar were Darla works!! Wonder what is going to happen there. Awesome story look forward to more.

 

Paw

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Date: 12/12/09
Title: Chapter 12: The places you've been ...The things you have learned ...They sit with you so beautifully

Awesome update. It seems Sushines Dad always trys to find the easy way out instead of facing his issues and I have a bad feeling he is going  to get mixed up with Darla.Cant figure out if Sunshine is falling for Nikoli or if she is just making the best of her situation. Great story.

 

Paw

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Date: 13/12/09
Title: Chapter 14: Making Holes in the Night

Sergei is so falling for Sunshine and it appears she only sees him as a friend!! A little scared for  him. Pops is hiw own worst nightmare and so wants to blame others for his short comings. Great chapter.. Look forward to reading about the vacation.

 

Paw

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Date: 18/12/09
Title: Chapter 16: We are Building Bridges Part 1

Hmm Darla is not as slick as she thinks she is and she should know better to think she isnt being watched!! Glad Jaccob hasnt said anything to her so far.Great update.

 

PAW 

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Date: 22/12/09
Title: Chapter 17: We Are Building Bridges Part 2

Awesome chapter> Glad Sunny is making friends. Seems Nikki doesnt like that she made a friend and wants to go out with them on Friday. Cant figure if these 2 love each other or If Sunshine is just making the best of her situation. Look forward to reading more.

 

Paw 

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Date: 23/12/09
Title: Chapter 18: A fire burns... Water comes

Have a Merry Christmas!! Loved the update. I had a feeling Nikki would fall in love with Sunshine, Darla sure wormed her way out of getting bootedout of New York!!

Paw

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Date: 25/12/09
Title: Chapter 19: Even When You're Miles Away Part 1

Awesome update!!!!

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Date: 27/12/09
Title: Chapter 26: Gotta Make My Own Way

Awww even though Nikoli hurt Sunny, I feel so bad for him. He really loves her and she loves him. Those 2 are hurting without each other. Nikoli needs to work hard to get Sunny back. Awesome chapter. Loving ths story its just wonderful.

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Date: 21/01/10
Title: Chapter 27: Today Is a New Day

Awesome update. I see sushine has finally got a clue about Sergi feelins for her. I am glad Nikoli is going to take her out on a date, he needs to whoo Sunshine. Loved the update. I am rooting for Nikoli and Sunshine getting back together.

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Date: 23/01/10
Title: Chapter 28: Different From Tomorrow You'll See

This was a sweet update. There phone conversation was a hoot to read. There playful banter made me smile. I am still rooting for them to get back together and hopeful that Nikoli will open up more. Still dont trust Sergi, something not right there. Thanks for the update.

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Date: 26/01/10
Title: Chapter 29: I'll Be High Flyin'

Wonderful chapter!! What have never know you werent feeling well, cause this chapter was off the hook. I am so glad Sunshine seems to be giving Nikiola a chance, there love may not be perfect but its there. Great job I just love this story and you have been doing your thing with it.

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Date: 29/01/10
Title: Chapter 30: By The Time You Make Up Your Mind

Didnt think it was possable but this story keeps getting better and beter. I love there normal couple time together and Nikki seems to really be trying  love that. I can see Jil was dissapointed but what he said to Sunshine came from the heart that was awesome. Thank you for another wonderful update. Keep them coming when you find time.

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Date: 03/02/10
Title: Chapter 31: By The Time You Come Round to Me

Awesome update!! The loving between Sunshine and Nikoli was super hot!! Dont blame Sunshine for ignoring the voice in her head and going with the bouncing. Still dont trust Sergei. Thank you for the wonderful update.

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Date: 06/02/10
Title: Chapter 32: Good Luck With Your Path

Awe wonderful update!! So glad Nikolai isnt going to try and force Sunny to stay!! Benjamin is wise beyond his years and I just love his character!!  This was a very emotional update, It was very touching that Nikolai love for Sunny brought tears to his eye. Hopping Sunny will be safe and this trip will bring the 2 closer.  Come on Sunny just tell Nikki you love him :o) 

This is such a wonderful story!! What a great job you are doing!! I personal like the translations at the end.

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Date: 09/02/10
Title: Chapter 38: But It Wasn't Built to Last

Wow what a update!!! I guess Sunshine really deep down doesnt want to know what Nikki does and the bad things he has done and to have to find out by someone else. Serg should have kept his mouth shut!! Dispite what Nikki does and has does I am still rooting for Sunshine's love for Nikki to over come his bad points and hopefully Nikis love for Sunshine will make him change. Awesome update

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Date: 01/03/10
Title: Chapter 39: Or We Might Take it Differently

Loved the long update!!  Stanisavskys talk with Sunshine was really nice, for someone so young Sunshine sure got his double meaning. I loved it. Gloria sure got put in her place. As for Sergei I knew there was a reason why I never like him, What a coward he is and he cant say he is doing it for Sunny he is doing it for his own selfish reasons. I hope Nikki doesnt get killed. Thank you for an awesome update!!!

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Date: 05/03/10
Finding Our Way by PassionK
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

Was It Puppy Love or Is It True Love??? (Not good with summaries.)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 24609
Read Count: 57530
Published: 09/12/09
Updated: 01/02/10

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Title: Chapter 5: I Can't Love Him Because I Love Him!

I am  glad Julia is going to stay true to herself! Dont trust Zach I think deeo down he knows Julia isnt that into him!!  Awesome update.

 

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Date: 19/01/10
Title: Chapter 4: Main Character

Just read the first 3 chapters and I really like what you have done so far with this story. I love the character pictures.

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Date: 14/01/10
Title: Chapter 6: How Could You?

Nice update. I hope its DC in her closet.

Author's Response: Thank you! Hey gotta read to find out. Wonder who'll be right... Thank you for reading and commenting.

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Date: 26/01/10
Title: Chapter 7: Care To

So glad it was DC in the closet. Awww there talk was so cute!! I am glad they got everything out in the open. There so young I hope they can make it workout. It helps that they have always been friends. Look forward to seeing what happens next with these 2. Great chapter, I loved it.

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Date: 28/01/10
Title: Chapter 10: This Is Goobye.

What a beautiful chapter!! I loved it !! Julia crying in her mom's arms was so heartbreaking, I even felt her pain. Great job with this story. I look forward to reading more of this couple.

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Date: 01/02/10