Penname: pmgayles [Contact]

Real name: Pam gayles

Member Since: 10/10/09

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A Heart Redeemed (Sequel to the Preacher's Son) by Brenda1257
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 196]
Summary:

 

 

 

 

This sequel picks up where the Preacher's Son left off.  More tales of those Ferguson men! Maxine tries to get better with therapy.  Matthew tries to deny the attraction he feels for Maxine. Nadine and Eric struggle to hold their marriage in tact while they try to help Max, raise their daughters and work!

 

A Heart Redeemed is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2009 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 60
Read Count: 73421
Published: 02/08/11
Updated: 03/08/11

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Title: A Heart Redeemed (Sequel to the Preacher's Son)

Max needs to talk to Dr. Grayson.  She put Matthew's health in jeopardy and that was just plain wrong and selfish.  And they ran away and avoided the issue, woman up Max!! Great story!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 03/08/11
Title: A Heart Redeemed (Sequel to the Preacher's Son)

That was so good, Max had a break through.  I just wish that she would quit running from from her problems.  I am so glad that Matthew is being so patient with her, this is awesome.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 03/08/11
Title: A Heart Redeemed (Sequel to the Preacher's Son)

Max, has come such a long, yet she has so much further to go.  I think maybe that Max and Matt would benefit from doing couples therapy.  Iam so glad that Rogers, that vermin, is finally dead!!!  I so love this story!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 03/08/11
Title: A Heart Redeemed (Sequel to the Preacher's Son)

Damn that was deep!!!  Rogers is still alive and that is just so wrong.  I am glad to see that Max is remaining strong.  Matt is the man!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 03/08/11
Title: A Heart Redeemed (Sequel to the Preacher's Son)

How was he able to avoid everyone that would have recognized him?  Rogers is evil and I can't wait for him to die.    I am so glad that Max and Matt seem to have worked out their differences.  Please don't let that evil man ruin it!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 03/08/11
Title: A Heart Redeemed (Sequel to the Preacher's Son)

I just had to read this last chapter again.  I love this story!!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 02/08/11
Title: A Heart Redeemed (Sequel to the Preacher's Son)

Matt is falling down that rabbit hole and he doesn't know what to do with himself.  I love!!  That was too funny that Jeremiah played along with them.  Awesome!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 02/08/11
Title: A Heart Redeemed (Sequel to the Preacher's Son)

That was great, will her father recognize  Rogers?  That man is sick, I want him beaten so bad that wish that he were back in his mothers womb!!!  Thanks for the quick updates, I love this story.  As I sex predator Rogers is not suppose to be around those children.  That maggot disgusts me!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 02/08/11
Title: A Heart Redeemed (Sequel to the Preacher's Son)

Matt is a goner and can't admit it!!!  Max is attracted to Matt, I love it!!!  Great story!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 02/08/11
Title: A Heart Redeemed (Sequel to the Preacher's Son)

That man is pure evil and I hope that Max's family beats the tar out of the fool.  Does Jessup know what crimes he was convicted?  The shit is about to hit the fan!!!  I can't to wait to read the next updates.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 02/08/11
Title: A Heart Redeemed (Sequel to the Preacher's Son)

I just had to read this story again Brenda!



Author's Response:

Thanks PM.  I've been so tied up with launching The Preacher's Son that I haven't had time to write like I should.   I'm going to try to get back to Alfred soon.  Right now the book is in the publishing stage.  I totally redid it and I hope that my friends on here who encougaged me, (especially you!) will like the updated version.  I've committed to Jacci to help other authors to publish and I am going to give a portion of my revenue from the book to The Chamber to help other authors here.  So stay turned!~

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Date: 13/11/13
Unsaid by Demain Soir
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Even after so long, Zane and Lana couldn't forget eachother...So what happens when two people with unsaid feelings meet again?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7487
Read Count: 2272
Published: 04/08/11
Updated: 22/08/11

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Title: Chapter 2: I needed you

Awesome.  I do hope that there will be more please!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! There'll definitely be more soon!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 05/08/11
Title: Chapter 4: If I'm with you, I can forget

Zane had an awful childhood, his parents just left and his sister to fend for themselves.  I hope that his parents lost everything!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 22/08/11
Title: Chapter 3: Let me lean on you...

That was sad,  Zane is being abused.  Why isn't anyone helping him?  Will  Lana tell her parents what she knows and then maybe Zane can get some help.



Author's Response:

Maybe she will, maybe she won't....who knows? You'll just have to wait and see won't you? haha, thanks for the review :)

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 07/08/11
Te Amo by She_So_Write
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 31]
Summary:

 

Banner made by me!

I kissed my sister's fiancé.

Not a friendly kiss on the cheek but a soul stirring, earth shattering, kiss that awoke an all-consuming hunger for him. Our friendship wasn’t even long enough to be a chapter in my book of life but it was one I’ll never forget.

After two years apart from him, I still want him-no matter how wrong and immoral it is. The problem with want sometimes is that it’s not always good for you and Trent could definitely destroy the life I built up.

But it’s a risk I’m willing to take.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 12608
Read Count: 4381
Published: 04/08/11
Updated: 16/08/11

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Title: Chapter 2: Bullets and barflies

Is Aubrey Amarie's mother?  Why did Thomas kiss Aubrey if he was marry her sister Natalie?  It seems as Aubrey has loved Thomas for a long time.  IS Aubrey's feelings for Thomas the reason that it didn't work with Tay?  Great story!!!  Please continue this story.

 



Author's Response:

The next two chapters should answer your question I promise!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 05/08/11
Title: Chapter 4: Precious and Fragile Things

So Trent  has feelings for Aubrey?   Trent, Trent , Trent, you are such an ass!!  You broke two womens heart because you couldn't admit how you felt.  Natalie has to know that how you felt about Aubrey and how Aubrey felt about him.  So I don't feel to bad for her especially since she abandoned her child.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Yes trent needs a good finger wagging!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 07/08/11
Title: Chapter 5: How Soon Is Now?

That was good, so now he realizes just how  much he loved Aubrey, so why did he really choose Natalie? 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 10/08/11
Title: Chapter 6: When Will We Get The Time To Be Just Friends

Trent is such numb nuts!!  There is not way that they can truly be friends again, after she is still in love with him.  This is going to turn out bad, I just get the feeling.  I want a  happily ever after please!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 16/08/11
Stereotypically Yours by Brenda1257
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 398]
Summary:

 

Stereotypically Yours

Matheson felt that VaLysia was just another angry black female when she brought her grandmother to dinner at his mother's request. VaLysia thought Matheson was just another uppity white prick. Neither of them expected the sparks to fly!

 

Stereotypically Yours is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2010 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 45
Completed:Yes
Word count: 171682
Read Count: 300212
Published: 05/08/11
Updated: 26/09/11

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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Past Hurts & Present Fire

This next chapter will be very entertaining.  Emiliy and George will each blow a gasket.  That was great, I am so glad that Matheson and Val got to have a heart to heart conversation.  Me likey!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 05/08/11
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Myths Everlasting

Mavis knew about her own history and still worked for that family.  It makes me wonder if Emily's devotion to Mavis is more about guilt than actual love?  I am not like Emily or her husband right now.  Grandma I understand!!



Author's Response:

There's more to this story than Mavis childhood memory.  More to come soon!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 05/08/11
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Rest and Relaxation

So awesome,  I am glad to see Hannah has thawed out.  Val is such a nice woman and she love Matheson.  Interesting that they name hie his mother's last name.  Most excellent!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 08/08/11
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Family Faceoff

That was funny as hell!!!  Hannah is a trip!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 07/08/11
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Calm Before the Storm

This is going to be good, Val is going to have to put that ole bitter *itch in her place.  You are such an awesome writer, I love how you write with humor.  Amazing!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 07/08/11
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Confrontation and Conflict

That was hard to read, but that confrontation had to take place.   I hope that Nana and that *itch realize that they won't be invited to the wedding.  There is definitely no love lost there.  Matheson and Val make a very beautiful couple.  I can't wait to read more.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 07/08/11
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Passion Night.

Damn, Val put it on Matheson and it knocked him out!!!!  That was hot.   That was too funny that they heard his parents getting busy.  This chapter was sexy!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 07/08/11