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Member Since: 26/12/09

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If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


~Jon Stewart




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Summary:

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Twenty-Two year old Mahogany Smith has dealt with one traumatising moment after another. The death of her single mother at the tender age of six. Her first love and fiance` breaking it off with her and then her younger sister trying to break her with every chance she gets. On the outside, the young pharmacist seems to have it all together. She's completely stable and follows a certain path. There's a side of her that's going to be released though.
Twenty-six year old Kheng Santana has just returned from the undeclared "war" overseas. At first glance, it would seem like the young man isnt affected by the tragedies that have taken place while serving the country; but at night the faces of the innocent people killed in the middle of two countries tango appears in his dreams.

“…you don’t see me”
“Ye-“
“NO! You don’t SEE ME!”



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 4751
Read Count: 2310
Published: 07/05/10
Updated: 24/05/10


Title: Chapter 3: One

Mahogany's beginnings was so tragic. For someone who has suffered so much in her young life, she's remarkably upbeat.  At least she found her Dad. Her stepmother and sister sound just wonderful.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/05/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 222]
Summary:

Island Interlude is the story of Gabrielle Hall, a young woman who teaches physical education and K.C. Whitfield an architect who comes to the fictional island of St. Sebastian. They meet and sparks fly but K.C. isn't who he seems and Gabrielle must decide if she can live with who he really is.    

island interlude                

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.  



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:No
Word count: 97729
Read Count: 235364
Published: 07/05/10
Updated: 01/02/11


Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I find Jarrod and Camille quite intriguing.

Author's Response: They would make for an interesting story. Let me think about it.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31/05/10

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Looking forward to the date.

Author's Response: One update coming up.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25/05/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 36]
Summary:

He has been in love with her ever since he first saw her one summer at the community pool in the slickest bikini ever. However, she was always just out of reach...and 9 years older than he was. Then Fate steps in and brings the two together during troubling times. Age aint nothing but a number but when does it start to count? When does it start to separate two people who seem so perfect for each other? Can it last? Or were they just foolish to even let it start? Inspired by songs from the 90's.

 

Genre: Romance, Comedy, Interracial

Rating: R (strong language/situations, sexual content)



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television, Movies, Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 35203
Read Count: 31870
Published: 15/05/10
Updated: 28/07/10


Title: Chapter 8: If

Now that's more like it. Aiyana taking things into her own hands, so to speak. Ha!

They should take that bath together. Yep, I'm wanting her to corrupt him.  But I'm thinking he might be able to teach her a thang or two. A young mind can be so inventive.



Author's Response:

Hhahhahah yes they should do that! They should explore both of their apartments huh? It would be a good type of corruption ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20/07/10

Title: Chapter 7: I've Been Thinking About You

Aiyana should just go ahead and bed this boy. When you're having dreams in the DAYTIME, ummm, it's time to act. hee...

I like this slightly older woman, younger man story. I'm thinking the real thang is going to blow Aiyan's mind, amongst other things. 

Carlos needs to go away.



Author's Response: Right?! And they are both single, might as well! Glad your enjoying it!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26/06/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 58]
Summary:

 

 

With a big break-out role in the 1840’s period piece, Lilies, Corrine Evans knew her career was going to change from stage and indie film actress to full on mega star. Working with one of England’s hottest leading men, Ian Foster, as a love interest in the film didn’t hurt either…



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 16836
Read Count: 11087
Published: 07/06/10
Updated: 28/11/10


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

You know, I'm really liking this one. Ian is a real ass. But this is one ass that I like. ;-)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15/06/10

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hope there are many more "dates".

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20/06/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

 

 

Kat Davis has never believed in love. who knew that a rainy spring night would change that forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2060
Read Count: 1224
Published: 20/06/10
Updated: 20/06/10


Title: Chapter 1: Content with loneliness

Short, but, oh so sweet. I really enjoyed reading this. At first, I thought she was dreaming. But thankfully, Thomas was for real. The note at the end was so romantic. This story made me smile gently.


Author's Response: Thank you!! the story is inspired by the only exception by paramore, the song is soo beautiful and sweet, and i wanted a story that was just like it! I'm glad you liked it and thank you again!! 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20/06/10

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

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It's for better...and for worse.

For the "Less Is More" Challenge 

Disclaimer/Credit: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Image(s) from gettyimages.com.

Shout out to my girl, KKMonroe. She encouraged me to share this with the world. She thinks I teach her, but really she teaches me I have much more to learn :) 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 94
Read Count: 3053
Published: 05/07/10
Updated: 05/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: The Papers

Damn, that was cold. Her final shot was mean but funny as hell. I'm intrigued as to what the hell happened. And if true, not one of the KIDS (?!?!?!) was his. Damn, just ruthless, ain't she? There's got to be some redeeming value in this woman. And who's to say that he's not just as ruthless. DAMNNNNN.

Author's Response: I know right?! In my head, she was the cold-hearted one who kept an an earth-shattering secret for over a decade. I have an entire back story for this couple but I had to choose which scene to convey to the reader. I choose the very end of this relationship because I don't think it much matters how it happened (though I tried to give little hints such as his line about bringing this upon herself). The point is, she did him DIRTY. I guess her redeeming quality is that she finally told him the truth? LOL! Thank you so much, Bella :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/07/10

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Summary: Denisha and Matt are in the midst of an argument.  Will Matt find a way to get back in Denisha's good graces?  My submission for the Less is More Challenge!

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 978
Read Count: 1156
Published: 08/07/10
Updated: 08/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very nice. glad he was able to shut her up. She needs to not sweat the small stuff.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/07/10

Rated: Teen or Above
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Summary: This is sort of an auto-bio of how I've been feeling about a certain guy.

Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 744
Read Count: 2465
Published: 09/07/10
Updated: 09/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Just How I Feel

This...

"Anyway, I went to his house and we caught up about what's been going on . We laughed and shared a couple of jokes. I told him what was going on with my family and friends. He asked me about a lot of things. Ya know, just a normal conversation."

might give you a little clue to this...

I just wish I had some sort of sign that he wanted me besides physically.

No advice, just this is what struck me about your story. Very well written, cheri.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/07/10

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

 


 


So much to do, so little time.


My (failed) attempt at the 1000 word fic challenge. 


Banner by curiouslyamused 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1060
Read Count: 2466
Published: 11/07/10
Updated: 11/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Please, Please, Please

This was just perfect, just perfect. They balance each other out. Jim is a keeper. I simply loved it. It was a pleasure to read this. It made me smile.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/07/10

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

pos·ses·sion   [puh-zesh-uhn]
-noun
1.
the act or fact of possessing.
2.
the state of being possessed.
3.
ownership.
4.
Law . actual holding or occupancy, either with or without rights of ownership.
5.
a thing possessed: He packed all his possessions into one trunk.
6.
possessions, property or wealth.
7.
a territorial dominion of a state.
8.
Sports .
a.
physical control of the ball or puck by a player or team: He didn't have full possession when he was tackled.
b.
the right of a team to put the ball into play: They had possession after the other team sank a free throw.
9.
control over oneself, one's mind, etc.
10.
domination, actuation, or obsession by a feeling, idea, etc.
11.
the feeling or idea itself.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 451
Read Count: 1714
Published: 24/07/10
Updated: 24/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OK, I hate to channel Paris Hilton.... but... That's Hott!

But seriously, the last sentence just got me. 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/08/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

My response to the "Less is More" Challenge. Enjoy!

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 998
Read Count: 1944
Published: 02/08/10
Updated: 02/08/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW!

Author's Response: I hope that was a good wow...

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03/08/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

 

A Yeardly Girls Story 

On the outside, Claudia Smith has the perfect life. A handsome husband, a thriving business, and an amazing home. But behind closed doors claudia feels she is losing her marriage, and has a foolproof plan to get it back.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: With This Ring
Series: The Music of the Yeardly's
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1918
Read Count: 1924
Published: 10/08/10
Updated: 10/08/10


Title: Chapter 2: Soul Food

he would've walked out with a few appendages missing. Why do they always have to have sex in the marriage bed? smh

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16/08/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

 

 A Yeardly Girls Story  

Cheyna is trying hard to get over Charles, and when he disappears without a trace things only get worse. But Cheyna will find help in the most unlikely place.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters
Series: The Music of the Yeardly's
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2982
Read Count: 1504
Published: 15/08/10
Updated: 15/08/10


Title: Chapter 2: Where Did He Go?

Wow, I like this! She's clueless about Aaron. I want more of them

Author's Response: she really is, but like i said earlier cheyna is naive. lol and you WILL get more of them!!! :D    

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16/08/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 50]
Summary:

 

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Banner made by Quila.  Thank you so much!  It's FANTASTIC!!

 

 

Soteria: Greek goddess of safety, deliverance and preservation from harm.

After tragedy struck four years ago, award-winning singer Rachel Bélanger is finally ready for her return to the stage.  However, a stalker has other plans. . .

 

Frank Kostopoulos of Soteria Security is hired to protect Rachel and her family after the latest incident.

 

The only thing standing between the stalker and Rachel is Frank.  He made a vow to do whatever it takes to keep her and her family safe. 

HUGE SPECIAL THANKS FOR JUNEBUG66!  She took the time to help me with this by reading it over, asking questions about things I added/missed, gave me encouragement when I got down, giving me a swift kick when needed and for being a very special person.

Thanks Junebug!!

BETA'D BT JUNEBUG66

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General, Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Movie Night
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 24185
Read Count: 6701
Published: 19/09/10
Updated: 20/04/11


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Two Part Two~The Past~

Wow, Frank, just wow. He's ALL Alpha. Let's see if he continue to resist the pull to Rachel. And there will be more fireworks with them clashing so much.

Marcus is a hot ass mess.

I so enjoy when you update this story.

Author's Response:

Yeah, Frank ain't no joke lol.

Marcus is the orginal H.A.M. lol.  The thing he is going to do.  . .crazy lol

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/12/10

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Two Part One: The Past

I like this.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/12/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 247]
Summary:

Lay Me Down

 

Life is hard. James knows this for a fact in which she picked a bad time to quit smoking. Working long days as a housekeeper and taking online college classes just adds more stress. With a troubled childhood and a dark past looming over her shoulder, James is untrusting of others therefore lets very few people into her life.

That is until she stumbles -- literally -- into Tristen, a computer software engineer who won't take 'no' for an answer. He's different, kind, and fun. And French. He wants to get to know her, but will her past drive him away like the others and if he does stay, can he endure damage of her skeletons tumbling out of the closet?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: City of Lights
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 63166
Read Count: 67191
Published: 22/09/10
Updated: 06/08/11


Title: Chapter 14: Joyeux Noël (Part I)

Wonderful chapter.

Future mother-in-law is going to have a conniption fit.

Congrats to James and Tristen.  James is a one of a kind character and I love her. And Tristen is just perfect. All alpha and protective when he needs to be. yum.



Author's Response:

Adele is most likely going to have a heart attack when she finds out, but there is nothing like yummy drama! ;) Hopefully, James will say yes because she knows that she loves Tristen. Why not tie the knot and be his wife? LOL, Tristen can be very alpha and protective when he needs to be and I think that truly balances out their personalities. Opposites do attract! Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/07/11

Title: Chapter 8: Caught Red Handed

very nice. uh oh, the L word! Wonder what James will do?

Author's Response: Thanks! :) Whatever James plans to do after that confession, Tristen will be right there to pound it into her brain that he meant every word.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19/12/10

Title: Chapter 5: Lesson Learned

My heart hurts for James.

Author's Response: It's a curse for what they did to her, but it's a blessing because her past is helping her find a man who could actually love her. 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24/10/10

Title: Chapter 6: Monsters, Songbirds, and Weaves

Pearl should be very afraid. James learned from the "best". It's a shame that she can't go to the cops. I was not expectingJames to react the way that she did. I'm glad she's not letting them make her afraid enough to cowtow to their demands.

Poor Tristen. How horrible. However, I don't think this will stop him from being with James.



Author's Response: Yes, James really did the unexpected, but she had to get the message across to Pearl and Trigger. Trigger sending his henchmen after Tristen was pretty much the last straw because he could have easily just send them after her, but instead he sent them after an innocent person. As for Tristen, he's a tough, brave man who knows want he wants. ;)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24/10/10

Title: Chapter 7: Just A Fool

short, but effective. Tristen isn't going anywhere. They've underestimated both he and James.

Author's Response:

Yes, Tristen definitely isn't going anywhere. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/12/10

Title: Chapter 9: Say It Again

She said it back to him. YAY! He was not going to stop until she came clean with her feelings. Now what will happen with him having to go back home soon?

Author's Response: Yes, Tristen is a persistent man! But that's what makes him so loveable. :) He knew the feelings were there, she needed a little push. As for him returning home, that will definitely be discussed in the next update! Thank you. :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23/12/10

Title: Chapter 10: Secrets and Complex Equations

I'm so glad Tristen knows about the pregnancy. Glad it didn't go in the direction where the woman decides not to tell the guy and he goes on with his life only to find out later about the bebe.

I was surprised and I wasn't, if that makes sense. The minute she had the grocery bag in the bathroom[!]. I knew, she thinks she's preggers and then with her symptoms, it clicked. James killed me with so many tests! and when the first one initially show negative, I was like, but what about all the symptoms and then the next pink line slowly showed, and even though it was devastaing for her, it made me laugh. I was like damn!

Now the question is how will he persuade her to go with him?

Author's Response:

LOL, I was laughing as I wrote that scene even though it wasn't a laughing matter for James. You know she is completely devastated! I don't think the story would be the same if Tristen hadn't of found out the way he did. Tristen getting hurt gave James the strength she needed to confront Pearl and Trigger, James being pregnant is forcing Tristen to take matters into his own hands.

As for how he is going to persuade her, I'll just say it's going to be something that everyone else expects. ;) Thank you!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31/12/10