Reviews For Breaking Through
Title: Chapter 1

Great update! I can't wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

Ahhh! azzure1020! Thank you for reading and reviewing it and liking it.

Reviewer: azzure1020 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 18 2014 08:12 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start. I like Kassidy's outgoing nature. Sometimes it's refreshing to read the reversed situation where the man has hidden feelings for the clueless woman since teenagehood ! I can't wait to read more about their interaction !



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for you review. I hope to keep it interesting for you.

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2014 03:23 am

Title: Chapter 1

Okay, so far Kassidy comes across as kind of a racist ass, and she should know better considering... not sure I like the character but interesting story premise.



Author's Response:

I don't think Kassidy is racist  just immature. We all have stereotypes about certain races but are mature enough to know that they are not always true and people are individuals. But, Kassidy still being a teenager has not reached that degree of maturity or life experience. I appreciate you reading and reviewing it. Thank you.

Reviewer: Eren Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 06 2014 03:54 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Don't like Kassidy's momma at all, and where is her father's spine?  Allowing his wife to treat his daughther that way.  Her mom is bitch and her dad is only a donor.  So sad, she needs Akira in her life.  Akira is fine!!!



Author's Response:

pmgayles!! Thank you so much for always reading and reviewing my stories. I really appreciate it. We will meet her father soon. And heck yes! Akira IS Fine!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2014 02:52 am



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