Why is Sally fighting her feelings for Storm so hard? I know that her psycho stalker is problem but Storm could help her if she would open herself up to him. I can't wait for officer Eastman to meet his sire Satan! !Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2014 08:25 pm
okay, loving the story.
Let's get ths stalker caught. He is a sorry cop and seems to have some mental problems. So far as Rhonda is concern, if she is involved with break ins she needs to get her head together or suffer the consequences.
Now Sally. I believe she has some inkling about Rhonda possibly being involved with the robberies; maybe from reading the newspaper/tv or whatever. Sally is coming to understand she is falling for Storm, who seems to be ready to give his love to a wife and family.
However, Storm needs to really put his foot down with Audrey. He needs to deal with her face to face before she really goes nuts. He saw the display of her foolishness on camera. That type of behavior indicates she is not too stable. She needs to be dealt with.
Now when will the update be posted??????Reviewer: A storm seems to be coming! Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 17 2014 05:24 pm
After reading these chapters I have to say that I don't like it. Not because it's badly written but because I feel like somehow you've stripped the story bare and it no longer has the soul that it had. The names feel all wrong and the small details feel like they're missing, ie the connection and chemistry that Storm had with Salina, I'm not feeling it with Storm and Sandy.
It's still early days though so I hope it gets better.
Good luck!Reviewer: A_Girl_Called_T Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2014 08:42 am
Yes, Sally is admitting her attraction to Storm. By the way, I love the name Storm!! Audrey is cray cray, Storm needs to get rid of her quickly!! I am looking forward to Sally opening up to Storm about her stalker.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2014 03:36 pm
I like it. Just the right touch of mystery to keep me going to the next chapter. One thing niggling at me. If she's strapped for cash and working in a seedy dive, why did she turn down the cash her friend was offering to cover for her? Maybe they could've split it, or did Rhonda need it more? That stuck out. Other than that, good stuff. Your writing has a very cinematic feel... Very descriptive. Good stuff.Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2014 10:16 pm
I had the feeling that Rhonda couldn't be trusted. How are Sally and Rhonda friends? Why is Sally using a bike that isn't registered in her name? I am liking this story, I can appreciate how build the story with each new chapter. Excellent! !Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2014 01:06 pm
I dont remember this one. So far I like what you have done. Continue. I am remembering your other story spiral. LOved it. So I know this will be great as well.Reviewer: Cherry Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 04:23 am