Title: Chapter 5 Michael delivers the news

While Michael is wrong and what he is illegal but I guess John won't know if Michael didn't push... This is messed up all the way around.



Author's Response:

Moonie Anonymous yes it is totally messed up.  Michael may have put his career on the line by having that blood test done but he's looking out for his brother.  Too bad the writers on OLTL did have imagination enough to make a good story line for Evangeline and John. They would have been a great power couple for the show.

Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2018 10:29 pm

Title: Chapter 5 Michael delivers the news

Thank you for the update. I think subconsciously, Evangeline wanted this and also knew this would happen. Truth be told, if she really wanted John out of her and the baby's life, moving away would have been the rational thing to do. John fighting to be part of his child's life and by extension hers as well, seems to be what she must actually desire. This coupled with the fact that she gets to punish him for his ill treatment towards her. I am really liking this story. I can't put all the blame on John for the fall of their relationship. Evangeline, more than played her part by staying  as long she did. Hate to say it...actually, I don't. I can't wait for John to find out and fight for his son.

You have done it again... your story has enchanted me.

Have a blessed and wonderful weekend.



Author's Response:

Sarah Anonymous you flatter me again with your kind words.  Yes Evangeline did stay too long before kicking John to the curb.  As far as John fighting for his son let us wait and see how the dust settles. What does John really have to offer?

A blessed and peaceful weekend to you too!

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 30 2018 01:23 pm



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