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Title: Chapter 8 Therapy

Glad that Evangeline has changed her mind



Author's Response:

Moonie Anonymous it looks like John's not the only one who needs therapy.  Our girl Evangeline has to make amends for her actions.

 Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2018 10:39 pm
Title: Chapter 8 Therapy

I👀 like it!😀

Author's Response:

Welcome back!  Thnx for the review.

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2018 05:31 pm
Title: Chapter 8 Therapy

 

Thank you for the update. Although, I don't like John. I am glad that he is getting help and is being allowed to see his son. This is similar to many real life cases, where women screw men over, just because their feelings got hurt. Not realising or caring that their child/children are the ones who will the price. I am happy Evangeline realised her part in the situation, and made steps to rectify it.

Johnny boy, calm down. Take it one step at a time. Try being  friends, getting to know each other. Go out as friends, without Peter. Learn about each other as individuals, likes, dislikes rather than being parents or wanting to be a family. Maybe if you and Evangeline had been friends, before you guys got into a relationship, some of the things that happened wouldn't have. She probably would have known you weren't in a good head space to become someone's boyfriend. You would have known what she expected and wanted out of a relationship. Maybe, just maybe, you would have possibly realised...that what she wanted, you didn't have in you to give, definitely not at that time.

You have written this beautifully. The storyline caught me from the first chapter. Hoping to see more.

Have a great weekend. Stay blessed.

 



Author's Response:

Sarah Anonymous thnx again for the review.  They both have much to do to make any kind of relationship work, whether as friends or not.  They are Peter's parents and must minimize the tension between them.  That's not to pretend that it doesn't exist but to deal with it.  They evidently have feelings for each otherwise they would not have been in any kind of relationship at all.  The journey continues for these two.  Have a great weekend too.  Thnx for the congrats on the book.  I appreciate it.

 Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 01 2018 09:42 pm


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