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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 204]
Summary:

KiFashions-2.jpg picture by Quania2004

Serena Davis is a shy young lady that has had a crush on her boss Mr. Ki, king of jerks, for 2 years. Mr. Ki, in order to stay the head of his family company must marry. What happens when he suddenly asks her to marry him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5022
Read Count: 49842
Published: 27/08/08
Updated: 28/07/16


Title: Ki Fashions

Ok, I'm all caught up!  Oh man, poor Serena.  Having an idea of what to expect and having it thrown into your face are two very different things.  Hope Jin-Hun will be more of a shoulder to lean on during this nasty time.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/03/09

Title: Ki Fashions

Uh-oh.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 20/03/09

Title: Ki Fashions

Wow.  Ki finally admits the truth, and it only took him 17 chapters!

 

It will be interesting to see how his relationship with Serena continues to develop in light of all the family drama.  Personally, I think his grandparents can go rot but it will be impossible for Ki to cut them out completely.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 25/04/09

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 140]
Summary:

Spencer Edwards is a happy bachelor. He’s got a great job, lives in a great penthouse, and thanks to his good genetics, a fair amount of luck where the ladies were concerned. Family was the furthest thing from his mind, but apparently, life had other plans.

 

His world is turned upside down when his older sister and brother-in-law die suddenly, leaving their two young children in his care. Spencer can barely take care of himself, and he’s not so sure he should be placed in charge of anyone else.

 

But a light appears at the end of the tunnel when spirited, no-nonsense live-in Nanny Reese Talbot enters their lives. Through ups and downs and self-discovery, Spencer learns just what it takes to be a Family Man.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 35037
Read Count: 11077
Published: 05/02/09
Updated: 07/08/09


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Uh oh.  Looks like his bed-hopping days and nights are over!

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 06/02/09

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

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A Boy Meets World, Shawn and Angela sequel which takes place two months after “I Do Love You”.  Upon discovering that his daughter is in love with her new white boy friend, Angela’s father, Master Sergeant Alvin Moore, meets Shawn for the first time.  However, the good impression Shawn makes doesn't last long. Consequently, Angela and Shawn learn that while breaking up may be hard, staying together is even harder to do.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Angela Moore
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Made For Each Other
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 60536
Read Count: 105756
Published: 08/02/09
Updated: 17/02/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I only wish the series had taken such a deep look at Shawn and Angela's relationship.  You have me hooked.

Author's Response:

One of the reasons I wrote "I Do Love You" and this one is because I felt just as you do.  To me, Angela and Shawn had the more complicated and interesting relationship,  I liked Cory and Topanga, but both Shawn and Angela had issues to work through.  It would have been much more compelling having see how those "issues" impacted their relationship on a deeper level. 

Yay, to your being hooked.  lol  Thanks for the reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/02/09

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary: A short story about two people and one dance neither will forget.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 752
Read Count: 2325
Published: 15/03/09
Updated: 15/03/09


Title: Chapter 1: The Dance

That just about broke my heart. :(

 

Plus, it goes to show that you have a gift with words if you can move me to tears like that.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/03/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

 

Looking back, he couldn’t quite find that moment when things started to change between them.

A Cold Case story written for the March "Friend or Foe?" challenge.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language
Challenges: Friend or Foe?
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3615
Read Count: 3488
Published: 29/03/09
Updated: 29/03/09


Title: Chapter 1: The Other Side

*thumbs up*  I haven't watched Cold Case in a long time.  Thanks for posting this!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading LP! I'm glad you liked it. :D

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 03/04/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 54]
Summary:

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Former high school sweethearts Shawn Hunter and Angela Moore are in their junior year at the prestigious Penbrook College.  The previous semester they broke up when Shawn decided that he wanted to meet “new people”.  Not long after the painful break up, he realizes his mistake but stubbornly refuses to try to win Angela back for reasons he can’t even explain to himself. 

Then Angela begins dating a new guy, one who is everything Shawn isn’t: well-to-do, family oriented and black.  As the two grow closer, Shawn finally realizes that he’s risking losing Angela forever by not telling her how he feels.  While struggling internally with himself and his demons, his wastrel father makes a fateful visit that forces Shawn's latent fear of abandonment to surface.  Is this what’s been immobilizing him from moving forward with Angela?  If so, can they still overcome the consequences of their failed relationship or is it too late?   

Banner by Minx



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Angela Moore
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Made For Each Other
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 39809
Read Count: 11308
Published: 23/09/09
Updated: 23/10/11


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two

Loving this story!

As much as I am a huge Shawn/Angela shipper (they were the ones that got me into BMW in the first place), I'm not feeling Shawn one bit at this point. To be honest, I want to shake him until his teeth fall out and THEN beat some sense into him. I can't blame Angela for wanting to move on inspite of her lingering feelings for Shawn. You can't turn your emotions off like a tap, unfortunately, but Shawn at this point represents a dead-end. He's going to have to do some serious maturing, soul-searching and demonstrating that he is the right man for Angela (and he's going to have to convince the hell out of me too). Otherwise, I'll say she's better off with Ron.

Ron's the other guy keeping my ship apart, but I cannot hate him. At least not yet. He'd have to be downright evil for me to do that at this point, and I don't think you're going for such a black-and-white (no pun intended) plot device. Besides, his thoughts brought up some key observations about Shawn's treatment of Angela and how he pretty much took the woman for granted. So far, Ron looks like a man who knows how to appreciate a good thing while he has it and that's also something that Shawn needs to learn (and fast). That said, I can't wait to see how this unfolds.



Author's Response:

Thanks LP.

Shawn is going to have to work and work hard.  He's going to go through a lot watching Angela's life from the outside.  There are lessons to be learned, and if he learns them, they have a shot.  But it won't be easy.

Angela's been burnt.  Once burnt; twice shy.

Thanks for reviewing.   

 

 

 

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 26/09/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

 

 

 

Banner By: Treble Clef

It's the 21st Century and the only thing they have even remotely close to po'dunk in their city is the brook that runs through the newly built park. So why are their friends and family in such a riot over their relationship

*Warning* Drug use, Language, Racism,

Disclaimer: Of course I am not, and do not own Allyson Felix. nor do I own any of the photos used in the banner.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 26064
Read Count: 4178
Published: 25/10/09
Updated: 18/01/10


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Other than Lucas, Andrew and Calijae's mum, I'd like to line up everyone and give them the mother of all bitchslaps.

Especially Calijae. She's going more and more out of Bitchville and into C-U-Next Tuesday territory every time she's rude to Lucas. He doesn't deserve it, and she and her friends are being the very stereotypes that they think that they're above - loud, mean black females.



Author's Response: I'd like to thank you for recognizing that. Often times we look at people and place ourselves above them, when in reality we're in the same boat. That's actually one of the messages I wanted to come through in this story. We're not always as "above it all" as we think we are...oh I almost forgot. Thanks for the read and review

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 26/10/09

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Sisters is probably the most competitive relationship within the family, but once the sisters are grown, it becomes the strongest relationship.  ~Margaret Mead



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Fall Family Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2130
Read Count: 2641
Published: 04/11/09
Updated: 04/11/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Only child! Praises be! No cranky, self-righteous siblings to deal with!

 

If Monica were more stuck up, she could presure coal into diamonds. I think Daphne ought to call Julian, because I highly doubt that Monica would be having a crisis of conscience if the roles were reversed.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 04/11/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1636]
Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

 Beautiful and amazing banner courtesy of BlackMamba


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 419663
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10


Title: Chapter 24: I'll Send You a Sign...Just so You Know

Uh-oh.

 

I can't even hate Darla for this. Sunny had the right to know everything about Nikolai's dealings with her father, not just what both told her on the surface.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 17/01/10

Title: Chapter 25: I'll Be Long Gone

It had to happen. I understand.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 19/01/10

Title: Chapter 3: You Touch Me

I'm just mad as hell as her dad. It was his immature actions starting years before that lead to this predicament for Sunshine. The massive debt with gangsters (<i>gansters</i>, of all people!) was just the icing of the giant cake of his financial stupidity.

 

And now his daughter is having to trade her body to keep her family from sinking lower. If this doesn't kick some sense into him, nothing will.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 05/12/09

Title: Chapter 4: With your kiss my life begins

*Raises hand* Permission to strangle the father? Please?

Also, a high five to Priscilla for slapping the sense of entitlement out of Darla. I never did like people who treated people in the service industry like turds.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 06/12/09

Title: Chapter 5: We are creatures of the wind

I'm really liking Sunshine in this story. She's backed into a corner against her will, but she's going to live with it on her terms. That girl has a great head on her shoulders (must get that from her mother). Great idea getting her brother away from her father. She may have to make a deal with the devil to do it, but at least her brother won't get much of a chance to absorb his father's maturity (or lack thereof).

As for her father...*sigh* i see he's adding alcoholism to his list of addictions. Sunshine made her demands at the right time.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 07/12/09

Title: Chapter 7: Cling to me.

*groans* Pops was the 'special' student at school, wasn't he?

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 09/12/09

Title: Chapter 8: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part I

If THIS doesn't convince Pops to get the help he needs and save his daughter, nothing will.

 

Sunny's a better person than I am. I would have written him off a long time ago.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 09/12/09

Title: Chapter 11: With your child's eyes ... You are more than you seem

<i>She puts the coffee cup down in front of him. “Call me Darla, just Darla.”</i>

Oh fudge.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 12/12/09

Title: Chapter 19: Even When You're Miles Away Part 1

Wow. Even Darla, of all people, seems to be getting fed up with Jacob - and it's in her best interest to keeping him on the road to perdition. That right there is telling.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 26/12/09

Title: Chapter 20: Even When You're Miles Away Part 2

Everytime I think of Peanut, I see the Jeff Dunham puppet. I dare say even that felt critter's smarter than this Peanut and Jacob combined.

Wow, you'd think Jacob didb't want his family back. 3+ years and the man's still relying on an itch and Peanut's plan (who listens to a fool named 'Peanut'?).

 

As someone else said, I'm wondering what (if anything) Jasmine ever saw in Jacob. She sounded like a women with wisdom and ambition. Jacob, however, is a parasite with more fantasies than sense.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 29/12/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

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 The Evil Dead

My name is Ash.

 

And I’m about to stuff my baby’s stocking.

A Gift for Minx .



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Family, Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: The "All I Want For Christmas" Challenge
Series: Tales of the Boomstick
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2010
Read Count: 3674
Published: 25/12/09
Updated: 25/12/09


Title: Chapter 1: Another Bad Santa

I always knew Santa Claus was a fat sack of evil. Santa? Satan? Yea, like they thought a 4 year old couldn't see through that.

 

Merry Christmas, B.M.! :D



Author's Response: Thanks Leo Princess! Hope you had a great one too!

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 25/12/09

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

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"People think it is holding on that makes you stronger, but sometimes it's letting go."

From the author of Into the West

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 5707
Read Count: 4103
Published: 23/03/10
Updated: 11/04/10


Title: Chapter 2: Like You'll Never See Me

Well, at least she's starting to wake up. If he's cheating on his wife, why would he be true to you?

Author's Response:

Exactly! Carla is based off a collection of women I know..time to wake up and smell the bullsh*t, is what I always say lol

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 24/03/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 233]
Summary:

             

 

After being betrayed by her best friend and being cheated on by her boyfirend, Aiyana Kendricks has decided to leave her hometown of Rochester NY behind. Moving to Las Vegas, she finds herself happy with new friends, a great party planning job, and a new boyfriend named Mark. But what happens when her past comes into her life again? Will the new couple be able to stay together when so many forces are trying to pull them apart?

~*~

Life's like a road that you travel on
When there's one day here an' the next day gone
Sometimes you bend, sometimes you stand
Sometimes you turn your back to the wind

~*~

LV Choppers Playlist

Something To listen to while reading LVC. All of the songs have inspired me in some way when it comes to the story and characters.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s), Other
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 34
Completed:No
Word count: 70063
Read Count: 32184
Published: 19/04/10
Updated: 19/01/11


Title: Chapter 33: Mommy Talks...Mommy Walks

*skips around* Ding Dong, the bitch is dead!

 

Well, at least her plans are dead! Someone needs to drop her, Ricky and Sophia into the ocean with some concrete platforms. >:)

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 18/01/11

Title: Chapter 34: Claire

Somara and Sophia are poster-children for how having working uterii doesn't make some women mothers.

 

On the upside, Mark finally quit that bitch for good. Yes, 'bitch'. She doesn't deserve to be called a woman.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 21/01/11

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Photobucket

It's for better...and for worse.

For the "Less Is More" Challenge 

Disclaimer/Credit: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Image(s) from gettyimages.com.

Shout out to my girl, KKMonroe. She encouraged me to share this with the world. She thinks I teach her, but really she teaches me I have much more to learn :) 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 94
Read Count: 3038
Published: 05/07/10
Updated: 05/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: The Papers

O_O DAMN!

Author's Response: LOL! That's about the reaction I was looking for :D Hope you enjoyed it Leo!

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed
Date: 05/07/10