Penname: neneburge [Contact]

Real name: Anita Brown

Member Since: 03/03/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

40+ year old mother of two..married 20years to same fella...who is extremely patient with me and loves it when you girls right the naughty cause it makes me amourous as he puts it..I just say horney..rotfl!

I am currently taking care of our neices who are 4yrs and 8yrs my (my kids: daughter is 21 and my son is 23) and it makes me feel young!!

I love to read. I love meeting new people. I love talking (as you can tell).

I work too hard but I am extremely grateful to have a job at this time!

I am very active in my church and with organizations I believe in because I believe that actions speak louder than words!!

I put God first in my life, my family second , my friends third and everything else falls into place!!

I am very happy I found this place and you wonderfully talented ladies!!! You make me smile, laugh, cry (rarely) and enjoy reading again!!

  

 




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S E E by Tae
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 26]
Summary:

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Twenty-Two year old Mahogany Smith has dealt with one traumatising moment after another. The death of her single mother at the tender age of six. Her first love and fiance` breaking it off with her and then her younger sister trying to break her with every chance she gets. On the outside, the young pharmacist seems to have it all together. She's completely stable and follows a certain path. There's a side of her that's going to be released though.
Twenty-six year old Kheng Santana has just returned from the undeclared "war" overseas. At first glance, it would seem like the young man isnt affected by the tragedies that have taken place while serving the country; but at night the faces of the innocent people killed in the middle of two countries tango appears in his dreams.

“…you don’t see me”
“Ye-“
“NO! You don’t SEE ME!”



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 4751
Read Count: 2313
Published: 07/05/10
Updated: 24/05/10

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Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

Ok must you break my heart with the first chapter ..Lawd have mercy. That poor woman...she was trying to protect her family and they killed her..I could cry. Thank goodness she locked that door or no telling what would have happened to that baby.

I want to know more and find out what happens to that beautiful baby...lord I hope it gets better ..so sad.

You are off to a great start sweetie...very good job!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/05/10
Title: Chapter 4: Two

I cannot wait to find out more about what is giving him nightmares from overseas..I can just imagine.

His mom is a hoot and siblings will be siblings!!

Nice updt sweetie...

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/05/10
Title: Chapter 3: One

Well is it is getting quite interesting..so her dad is white....that show make for some interesting interactions between her and his family and friends. Wonder how they took to the dark chocolate love child..we know his wife and daughter were less than thrilled. At least her dad took her ina nd treated her well even though he never knew about her..that had to be strange.

I wonder why her smile dropped?? Did she not get her degree? She is definitely hiding something!!

I cannot wait for more sweetie..good job and not boring..just story development..so it will all make sense later...that is very important!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/05/10
Love and Treats by EdenWrites
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 2]
Summary:

  Dean and Cassie decided to see each other when possible after he left her at the end of Route 666.

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I do not own Sam or Dean or Cassie I just like to play with them from time to time. No copyright infringement intended.

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Cassie Robinson
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Cassie/Dean (Supernatural)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3216
Read Count: 604
Published: 04/06/10
Updated: 04/06/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I read this at work and thought what a smart little look at vengence and reaping what you sow!! Her man was a jerk and bastard..and she taught him an appropriate lesson..cute story sweetie...very creative!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/06/10
An Oncoming Addiction by luckybrans
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

An Oncoming Addiction

"As an adult she'd gradually lost everything, including her free will and the only man who loved her as she was. Now there was a vampire with a hard-on for violence calling on her. Whatever happened next would involve a lot of blood."

Includes small spoilers for upcoming episodes of True Blood.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Tara Thornton
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1372
Read Count: 3135
Published: 27/06/10
Updated: 27/06/10

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Title: Chapter 1: An Oncoming Addiction

The end....nooo! That is a beginning chapter not an end! I need morre more more!

Franklin is dangerous and scarey but Tara under Franklin's influence can be just as scarey...I want and need more of these two together!!

Excellent sweetie just excellent!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading! There is something about Franklin and Tara together that intrigues me. I'm not liking how their relationship is playing out on the show. But hey, fanfiction corrects all!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/06/10
Final Dissolution by Renee Banks
Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

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It's for better...and for worse.

For the "Less Is More" Challenge 

Disclaimer/Credit: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Image(s) from gettyimages.com.

Shout out to my girl, KKMonroe. She encouraged me to share this with the world. She thinks I teach her, but really she teaches me I have much more to learn :) 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 94
Read Count: 3077
Published: 05/07/10
Updated: 05/07/10

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Title: Chapter 1: The Papers

OK that made me laugh out loud!! Way too funny!! Loved it NaNa!!

Author's Response: LOL! It made my mom laugh out loud too. Maybe this is more of a comedy...than a drama. *shrugs* Glad you enjoyed it Ne!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/07/10
Let No One Tear Asunder by mskel
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

What God has brought together, let no one tear asunder...



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 303
Read Count: 2428
Published: 08/07/10
Updated: 08/07/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So so wrong but deliciously hawt...loved it sweetie!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/10
Shut Up by Redbird
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary: Denisha and Matt are in the midst of an argument.  Will Matt find a way to get back in Denisha's good graces?  My submission for the Less is More Challenge!

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 978
Read Count: 1158
Published: 08/07/10
Updated: 08/07/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hawt, cute and ubber sexy!! Loved it sweetie!!

Author's Response:

Thanks Nene!

I have not forgotten your story.  I am still working on it!  :)

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/10
My Feelings by FrenchieJonesy
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary: This is sort of an auto-bio of how I've been feeling about a certain guy.

Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 744
Read Count: 2488
Published: 09/07/10
Updated: 09/07/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Just How I Feel

Tell him sweetie..better to get it out un the open so you know where this or is not going to go!!

You can miss out on something wonderful by keeping silent. He may feel the same or someone else may be in the wings waiting. Anyway it goes you need to be secure enough in who you are to request his true feelings..

Shae you are so cute too!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for the advice. I want to say something. (BELIEVE me.) I'm just a big fat chicken, when it comes to crap like this. I really am....*shakes head*

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/10
Keys to Understanding by Realstone
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:  

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 630
Read Count: 2221
Published: 11/07/10
Updated: 11/07/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That is my favorite pastor's motto.."In all your getting get understanding"...I think it is very true!!

I thought this was cute and funny!! and I wonder will she get the tat!! :)



Author's Response:

Between me and you, she will and he will enjoy reading it.  Enjoyed your writing.

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/07/10
Stay by Renee Banks
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 51]
Summary:

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Wouldn't it be easier to just stay?

For Nene

Disclaimer/Credit: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Image(s) from gettyimages.com.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9465
Read Count: 17287
Published: 24/07/10
Updated: 10/09/10

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Stay

Ok that darn ending had me in tears ..it was so sweet and beautiful!! I was so worried that he was going to lose her and she would lose her nerve...but the heart won out in the end.

I love her sisters and I wanted to drop kick her mama!!

It would have broke my heart for Matt to lose someone else but she asked him to Stay..and he did!!

Bravo sweetie..exceellent excellent job..I knew you could do it Na Na ...you are so incredibly talented...awesome awesome awesome!!My favvvv!!always..

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/09/10
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

I am loving the way this is developing...I love the back story...her attraction to him...falling fo him and wanting him.

I was suprised she agreed to marry a man she does not really care about and it did not surprise me that she gave into her feeling for him.

I hope she did not mary the other man after their night of passion that would be heartless, stupid and chicken...she seems like none of those things.

I cannot wait for more...geat job sweetie!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/08/10
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: You Glow

Nana I love it!!!

Already compelling , sensitive and complex. This is not going to be just a simple love story..just the fact that he fell in love with the woman who tokk care of his mother so wonderfully on her last days ..makes you want to know them better...

I worry what will happen with their connection after his mom dies or if she get smarried..so many things complicated their coming together that you left with an insatiable desire for more more more...

Great beginning sweetie...I love the whole set and cannot wait to see how you weave this beautiful little tale!!

Thank you Na Na ....you are my FAVVVVV..!!!!!!Great job sweetie...

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/07/10
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two: Heartbroken

Poor Matt...so heart sick over this beautiful ebony woman. I wonder does she eeven realize how much he loves her or is she clueless as she kinda seems.

I hope she does not marry Evan...he does not seem like her type..too possessive and suffocating...maybe I am pre judging because I want her to realize how much Matt loves her..

I am loving this story sweetie and I cannot wait to see where it leads us...excellent job excellent!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/07/10
Viper's Proposition by Dsmoothone
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

My response to the "Less is More" Challenge. Enjoy!

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 998
Read Count: 1945
Published: 02/08/10
Updated: 02/08/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Welcome back sweetie....I think this is a goos start but lawd knows we need more...what happens on this trip?? Will she give it up..lol!!! Why her and what has he got up his sleeve?? We need more....Great job sweetie!!!

Author's Response: Nope Nene...its a one shot...

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/08/10
You are my peace by dyehanna1
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Merlin is a British TV show that is close to my heart because it reminds me of home. I finally decided to write about the forbidden love of this lovely couple.

After Arthur won Gwen's heart from Lancelot, Gwen finds herself with Arthur's child. However, she doesn't want to make him choose between her and his duties to Camelot.

Lancelot,"Gwen's ex" is in town, making Arthur a little on the edge. Gwen and Arthur have come to the realization that they belong together and will forever bring each other peace, even in the midst of war.

Uther does the right thing for a change.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2994
Read Count: 3239
Published: 27/09/10
Updated: 27/09/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent job sweetie...I laughed and smiled a lot...I love these two also and the thought of them married makes me very happy but the thought of little piglets make me smile even more...good job I really enjoyed it!!le

Author's Response:

hello neneburge,

I'm really happy that I was able to make you laugh and smile. It would really be great if they can make babies now but I reckon it won't happen until the last season which is like three years from now. They are not even in a proper relationship yet, but who cares? Next week's episode will have some fantastic Arthur and Gwen moments in it. I'm super excited to make a new short fan vid of those two. Thanks again for the review, I'm glad you liked it.

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/09/10
Only Temporary by Renee Banks
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 64]
Summary:

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Advertising tycoon Alandra Meyer wants a child. The only problem is she doesn’t have any prospects, nor does she really want them. She’d rather cut off her left arm than rely on a man to do a damn thing for her. Men equal distractions and distractions just aren’t an option in her world. The only person she can depend to conceive the child she so desperately wants is herself…and possibly her oldest friend, Julio. However, before he agrees to be her humble donor, he has a favor of his own to ask. After a tug-of-war between the two, Alandra obliges her best friend's request. Hoping for the best but expecting the worst, she awaits said request to walk through her door that Monday morning, unbeknownst to either of them that his presence will change both of their lives forever.

Disclaimer: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 16062
Read Count: 20561
Published: 08/11/10
Updated: 15/12/10

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Title: Chapter 4: Public Persona

Hummm me thinks Julio cut out so his cousin and best friend could get a chance to get closer...I like Julio more and more..lol.

Alandra is feeling that drawing from that extremely sexy Portugese sexiness Mateus...if he just continues to be his sweet kind sexy self he may just have a chance with our girl.

I like how they are progressing actually..feels very natural and not rushed...though I have to amitt I cannot wait for the fire works!!

Great job sweetie...I lovvve this story..dont stay away so long next time ok!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/12/10
Title: Chapter 5: Darkest Fear

Oh no you did not stop there missy!! I was ready for tha hawt loving.yeah baby!!

I have to say Alandra is quite a Beotch to Mateus at times..she has so much attitude it can be very unattractive .but he seems to take it all in stride to his credit..he handles her well.

I knew eventually they would end up giving in to the nookie but I am surprised after the lights came on she was still forward..pleasantly surprised at that ..maybe that cold shell has got a little fire under it!!

Great job Nana but leaving us hanging dors nothing but make us beg for more!!



Author's Response: You know, I notice sometimes when I'm going for sassy I turn it into bitch. I don't mean to, I think I reflect a little bit of myself onto her. I'll try to soften her up so she doesn't come off mean. Thanks Ne, glad you like it!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/12/10
Title: Chapter 2: The Beginning

TGreat start...I am in love already!! Love Julio and I hope his cousin can melt that cold heart of his boss! I think Julio is trying to play matchmaker but knowing this lady just briefly his cousin better be darn good at melting ice queens becuase his new boss is one heck of one!!

I cannot wait to see how this evolves....I am so excited I could scream!!!

Thankies Na Na you are my jewel!!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/11/10
Title: Chapter 3: Gainful Employement

Ok I totally missed this chapter..anyway I a so digging Mateus...you describe him so well my imagination has gone willd lol...I can hear the accent and I am more drawn to hinm than our girl!!

I just wonder who baby that is she isw carrying and Julio's name does not come to mind either. Although I really like Alandra and julio's elation ship I think Julio may be doing a little matching making..we will see!

I am digging this story big time sweetie...I can hardly wait for more...I want to know about Mateus though I must say what I have learned so far is a bigg turn on!!

Great job sweetie..I can hardly wait for more!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/11/10
For Love & the Game by bana05
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 122]
Summary:

 

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Takeshiro "Shiro" Inoue is a star catcher in Puro Yakyū, the professional baseball league in Japan until injury forces him out. An old contact with the American Major Leagues has him returning to the States and to Lydia Holmes, one of the best pitchers he has ever faced and his best friend whom he'd met right before he'd started his career.  They have been close for eight years, the majority of which had been restricted to online interactions.  But now that they are on the same soil, his career isn't the only Shiro is interested in reclaiming.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 47035
Read Count: 17411
Published: 13/11/10
Updated: 02/03/11

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Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I am liking this one Bana...I cannot wait to read more!!!

Author's Response: Appreciate it!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/11/10
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

AAAAWW no Lydia!! How did such a wonderful night end so badly that you left in tears!!

I hoe Shiro goes after her..she is so prideful and stubpborn but she was just nervous and a little scaried..this is minor so hopefully they can ge past it quickly!

Shiro is so incredibly sexy! his looks, he words, his actions...Lawd all of him...when he said you are my heart I wanted to give him some..lol. Oh yes he loves him some Lydia and she loves him. We just got to get them past this akward stage...

Loving this story sweetie....I love how you write Bana ..I really feel like I know these folks and I really care about them also...I can hardly wait to seee what happens next....btw Lydia does need more female friends...they would have told her it was alright to let your guy pay for dinner...lol



Author's Response:

Lydia did let him pay! It was the tip she was going to leave to be all egalitarian. But you right, someone would'v told her a man will pay for everything in the beginning. She thought she was doing good, too. *pats her*

Thank you so much for reading. I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/12/10
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Lawd that man is sexy and this making love session is going to be off the chain for Lydia. We can only wish for a man like Shiro to be our first and to make love to us the way he is going to do to Lydia...He is sexy , sensitive and 00% alpha male..I am loving them together and how their relationship is progressing.

I love Shiro's fami;y..his mom is so honest anf he really seems to be his mother's son too...I cannot wait to see where they go after finally making love...great job sweetie..I hate it when the updt ends cause it always leaves me longing for more!!



Author's Response: Well, Shiro isn't Lydia's first partner but...yeah...:) Thank you so much for reading and I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/12/10
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Ok I missed this chapter at first..geesh!

I love how their relationship is progressing I think they both know where their hearts wants to take them but Lydia is a little more anxious than Shiro. I think she will come around..I hoope she will orr she is going to make Shiro hurt some body...lol

Great job sweetie...cannot wait for more..BTW Lydia's Dad and Mom are too cute!!



Author's Response:

LOL yeah, Lydia's parents are adorbs. :)

 

Thank you so much for reviewing! Lydia...*pats her*...

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/12/10
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Oh I love me some Shiro..he is a real man ..100%..I love how serious and real he gets when he discusses Lydia and their relationship...He got his little brother straight and I love it!

Now he is laying down the law to his woman..and though the conversation is not sexual..he is hella sexy talking...

I know Lydia wants him..I think as close as they are I would be afraid of losing that friendship too but a man that dog gone sexy and real well I just could not pass on the chance to be with him in a romantic way!!

I love this story sweetie..I cannot wait for more...what will Ms. Lydia's response be..we ill see!!



Author's Response: Thank you, Nene! Yeah, Shiro is...erm...intense when it comes to Lydia. It's a little scary for someone as inexperienced as she is.  But we'll see if Mr. Inoue can convince her, eh? ;)

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/12/10