Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Oh Bravo Chocolate! I so love the ending. Goodness, Blair needed her ass whopped and I'm glad that Evangeline was the one who gave out the asswhopped. You had me rolling with Evangeline tauting Blair with "He's Mine" song by Mokenstef. Girl, that brought back some memories. I just hate that Star and Jack had to witness to the craziness that is their mother. I love the dream home, the engagement party, that seeing Evangeline and Todd getting ready for marriage. It was so beautiful. Todd and Evangeline's Vows were spot on and so heartfelt. *sigh* Mama Lisa didn't come. Well that's her lost, yet I'm glad that Vicki and Todd made-up. Oh the carriage ride and the upcoming helicopter ride was to cool Chocolate. I can see Todd and Evangeline riding off the sunset like they did. *cries* I'm going to miss this version of Todd, Evangeline, Little Tangie, and the kids so much Chocolate. Maybe you can write a sweet one-shot of them in the future. I look out for this family dynamic and/or another Tangie fanfiction in the future. Because you always bring in the heart and heat of Tangie loving in your stories. Thanks for writing this sweet story Chocolate.
Author's Response: Hey M...
THANK YOU FOR AN AWESOME REVIEW!
Yeah the fight was something fun to write. I knew it had to go down no matter who started it but I felt that Starr's phone call to her dad would be the perfect opportunity. First I was going to use 'I've got your man and you can't do anything about it' but then this other song kept popping in my head...it does bring back some memories.
You actually gave me an idea about writing the family way into the future...so its not going to be a one-shot but not as long as this one. I've already got it outlined. I can give OLTL credit for one thing allowing me to see that was possible with them...even though they chickened out in the end.
Thanks for reading my story and I hope I can give all my readers the best as I continue to improve...
Reviewer: Megumi Signed
Date: 12/11/08