Penname: amlaamar [Contact]

Real name: Anne-Marie Laamar

Member Since: April 06 2012

Membership status: Member

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 216]
Summary:

31 year old self-made millionaire Dean DuPont has only one weakness--his wife Charlotte.  There is nothing he wouldn't do for her.

Nothing.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 21048
Read Count: 20107
Published: December 16 2012
Updated: January 02 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Two

Flawless...I was wondering how you were going to do it...how to bring out the "business proposal"....esp. considering how they do not get on in the office and the fact that its the wife's idea...but this is believable...thank you for pulling it off. I cant wait to read more.

Also looking forward to LT and Stereo's updates...I cant wait!

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed
Date: December 18 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Three

I was never a fan for literature with threesomes...and this is the first time venturing into that territory (all because its YOUR writting) and I have say I havent regretted it. I love how Kai and Drew argued the points across (same points going on in my head if I were put in the same situation), I find myself mentally nodding in agreement with every statement they said as to why they she should or shouldnt. I loved how you had Kai making real valid points but at the same time so did Drew and I cant hate him for it. And that confrontation in the boardroom was a killer. I was also greatly surprised when you had Kai ask that number one question and coming back to it again pressing the point of knowing the answer. I wanted to know the answer too. Ive never been in a situation even remotely resembling this but if I were, your story would be on point. Its totally believeable. I LOVE GOOD writing. 

Thank you. You are a brilliant writer. You probably already know that but I wanted to tell that all the same. 

 

Merry Christmas and Happy, Prosperous New Year!

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed
Date: December 24 2012

Title: Chapter 4: Four

WOW! I dont know how you did it....but you did it and did it beautifully, seamlessly, as always. I was hesitant reading about this story because of the subject matter involved (threesomes)...but Im so glad I did (only because it's written by you)...the dialogue delves into the depth of the matter on so many levels. Its not one dimensional (and it shouldnt be because of who they are and what they will be doing)...and its sooooo satisfying. I LOVE GOOD QUALITY WRITING. Thank you. I cant wait to read more.

If youre published please let me know the titles of your work, Id love to own them.

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03 2013

Retired
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

What's a girl to do, when she doesn't listen to her head but instead throws caution to the wind for one night?

We've all had an encounter with that guy, right? The one who knows that he is sex on two legs. That guy who you know should be avoided, but still manages to reel you in easily. That guy who is still in your bed, even though he is long gone.

No? You don't know him. Well, Ambi does. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 30393
Read Count: 47518
Published: December 29 2012
Updated: February 06 2014


Title: Chapter 3: I'm your naughty girl

All that talking. Just as sexy.



Author's Response:

All that talking...and they are both to hot for words!

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18 2013

Title: Chapter 3: I'm your naughty girl

I loved reading Ambi's inner thoughts during the sex scene. It adds just the right amount of 'chuckles' to the scene...making the naughty a tad sweet too. I like it.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. And the added chuckles was what I wanted. Next chapter is on the way.

 

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Date: March 18 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

 

The story of a slave whose only hope of survival is to become a mistress to the wealthiest men of the South. But as other slave women see the value of her success, will they help their fellow sister or compete for freedom?

 

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1091
Read Count: 3564
Published: January 01 2013
Updated: January 01 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Remembrance

Looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Looking forward to keeping you interested! Thank you so much for reading!!! XD

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 153]
Summary:

 

Mallory Ruskin lost her sight in an unfortunate accident five years ago. Can she push aside the fear of the assumed and the unknown to trust the one man who had her heart?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 28493
Read Count: 19565
Published: January 29 2013
Updated: May 19 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- First Impressions

I love that you made him have OCD. Its more common than we think. It makes him more human; the story more believeable. Looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

More is to come.I suffered from a fog last night while writing so I decided to take another approach. There should be a chapter today.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : Chance Meeting

Im loving it! I cant wait to read more. Please continue because you got me, hook, line and sinker.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! More is on the way!

 

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Date: January 30 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Smoke Without the Flame

Holding my breath to know how their second meeting turns out...



Author's Response:

It's going to be good :)

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 06 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 My Love

He cheated on her?!?!? While she was under the same roof?!?!?!

Im too angry to write.

 



Author's Response:

Yep, he cheated. A very unwise move but he said so himself- 

“I  was sorry for putting you through that, Mallory. Imogene…was a lapse in   common sense,”

Even though, he still made a very big mistake.

 

More will be revealed and there is certainly more to come!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13 2013

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 776]
Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108478
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In The Beginning

Oooohh! Goody goody! More please.

This is good. Would love to see how this turns out...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  More is coming soon.

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07 2013

Title: Regret

He's crazy. She's strong and rational. Ive believable. Im ready for more. Thank you!



Author's Response:

Now Now.  Jayden is just a little...uh...neurotic....different?  LOL  Background info. on Jayden in the next chapter.  Working on it now!

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08 2013

Title: Regret

The grandparents are EVIL they need Jesus too!

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Date: February 12 2013

Title: Regret

Dana cracks me up. I'm liking it. Cant wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Dana is a mess.  More is coming soon!

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 105]
Summary:

 

 

 

Professor Wilson is in the office late again grading papers. I wonder who'll stop by...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 19538
Read Count: 18960
Published: March 25 2013
Updated: November 24 2013


Title: Chapter 2: The Office

I so LOVED the build up. Sometimes, they can be just as hot as the sex scene....or even hotter....depending on how its written...and you wrote it so well. I look forward to reading more of your work. 

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Faith had always believed in fairytales. She dreamt of a soul mate that would mirror her existence to perfection.

What happens when you live on an island where your dreams are bigger than the span of a country on the verge of Independence? But even paradise held its dark secrets and prejudice for it was a world where the color of your skin dictated who you must fall in love with. Set in an era of strict moral turpitude a passionate young woman dreamt of the day when she would meet the man that would accept her faults and encourage her aspirations.

This is the story of Faith's journey to be one day closer to her realized dreams. 

Beta Reader: Anni Grey

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Historical, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1962
Read Count: 2252
Published: April 15 2013
Updated: April 15 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Carpe Diem

I like it. Its got substance. Looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Yes I do agree its got as you say 'substance' but I hope my convoluted and multi-layered thought process does not overshadow the romantic aspect of the story ith drudgery.

Thank you, I'm looking forward to writing more.

 

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 68]
Summary:

I never said I was the  good guy. I'm nobody's hero.

 

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 15545
Read Count: 8756
Published: May 11 2013
Updated: June 08 2014


Title: Chapter 1: The first time I met her

God I love anti-heros. Your opening is disturbing enough to make me not want to pass judgement on the guy's jerk ass. You do this everytime...only this time, I cant wait to see how you unravel this guys issues because with a past like that,he is going to be plenty crazy....and unraveling him is going to be an emotional roller coaster.....well, count me in for the ride.

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

Sometimes things just don't go as planned.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Sexual Healing, Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3801
Read Count: 17989
Published: May 14 2013
Updated: May 18 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

HAHA! I like it. It was entertaining seeing through his eyes and his thoughts are a riot. Definitely a guys and definitely workable. Im not a writer but Im a hard core reader and lover of all things literary and you my dear very well. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hahaha...that last sentence is LMFAO-funny in light of the situation.

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

“For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul.”

 

- Judy Garland

 

Truthfully, it was the simplicity of it all that made me believe the obvious. It was the caresses that occurred when you thought I was sleeping. It was the kisses that came at random. It was the loving stares that were hidden from everyone else except I. For the longest time, I thought love was not for me and you just did not care for it, but I guess, in the end we just needed each other to finally be shown the light.


 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 7257
Read Count: 2480
Published: June 03 2013
Updated: September 28 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Sometimes You Just Need a Little Push

So far I like. The story's 'voice' especially is somewhat reflective giving the story depth. And Gaia is a riot. Cant wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment and review. I tried to make the voice very reflective of the characters and I'm glad that I am accomplishing that. Hope you enjoy the following chapters!

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 06 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

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Troubled FBI Special Agent Michael Wolfe knows his fair share of loss and pain.  As a criminal profiler within the Behavioural Analyst Unit, he has seen many horrors. But none more haunting than witnessing the death of his wife. Consumed with grief and guilt Michael drowns himself in work.  His partner Special Agent Patrick Kepler suggests a very unconventional form of therapy.  Will he take it?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Psychological
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3656
Read Count: 12992
Published: June 06 2013
Updated: October 14 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Xanax

Very well done, the writing. I can almost picture the who office scene like Im watching a movie and getting a feel of the atmosphere. I cant wait to read more...

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

I am currently NOT working on this story and don't know when I will be again. Writing this takes a toll on me and I have kinda been posting other things here. Give them a looksie. :]

 

Kensington's battered body ached from abuse, each blow recieved slowly tearing her apart. She was drowning in the hell that once used to be her home until a mysterious stranger comes along. Will he be the one restrore Kensington's faith in the world?

Heads up: The beginning (meaning the first few chapters)  of this story is a bit DARK. If you are of a faint heart than I fear this story is not going to be appealing to you. 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 10114
Read Count: 12991
Published: July 25 2013
Updated: May 29 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I feel like standing up and clapping while shouting "encore!" Well done! Im definitely hooked. Very gripping chapter. Makes you want to know what happens with the characters as they continue to develope and grow...and most esp. the relatioship between them....whether its good or bad.....cant wait for more!

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25 2013

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