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[Reviews - 415]
Summary:

 

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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

& NOW KINDLE VELLAS TOP 250 FAVORITES LIST *

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When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214762
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

i was NOT expecting wes to break the G code!  how rude...

i wonder what the mystery is behind charlie's parents and ryan's dad?

i'm glad you're back; i really enjoy this story!  i hope everything is good with you now.

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: October 24 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 30]
Summary:

 

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A cop and a assistant discrict attorney hot moment.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1206
Read Count: 7763
Published: July 01 2012
Updated: June 17 2017


Title: One Last Time

I'm already in love with this story; I'm along  for the ride!

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: April 16 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 231]
Summary:

Nyla Rogers is a 26 year old widow, she has just rrecently begun to live again when she meets handsome Dr. Gavin McKeough. She doesnt feel she'll ever love again. Gavin wants to pick up the peices of her shattered heart will she let him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 70273
Read Count: 218698
Published: August 23 2012
Updated: August 29 2014


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

i hope she says yes to gavin's proposal; and i'm glad she is dealing with the grief head on.  great story!



Author's Response:

Nyla has more stregnth than most but she is going to need it. Please keep reading and commenting.

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: June 24 2013

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

She definitely went about it the wrong way, but I'm glad Nyla is working on herself so she can move on with Gavin. I hope she isn't hurt too terribly bad; they need to reconcile soon! :)



Author's Response:

I think this accident puts  everything in perspective for these two. Thanks for reading

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: October 04 2013

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I love this couple. I'm glad she faced her grief head on and can focus on Gavin now.



Author's Response:

They are one of my faves too. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: July 01 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 252]
Summary:

Matt was the love them and leave them type till he met Azalea. She turned the tables on him but not for the reasons he thinks. Will he forgive her when he learns the truth?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 45561
Read Count: 65818
Published: August 25 2012
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

noting like some grudge f*cking!  well done!!

Reviewer: LiLi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Lizbeth gets on my nerves! Matt needs to grow a pair and make Z his again. I am NOT here for Miguel and his shenanigans. 

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: April 16 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 117]
Summary:

Dr. Tyler Elijah Lenz Solomon Weber is a psychologist who works as the head of Human resources at a law firm. His life seems to be perfect. Not only he has the perfect job but he also is a visiting professor in many Universities for his innovitaive research in developmental psychology. He has a fiancée, Alexandra, who loves him unconditionatly.
However, under the surface lays a man that has been affected by his life experiences and cannot fully trust others. This is his story, and that of Alexandra, and Lucas, the man Tyler fears will take his woman away from him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 49503
Read Count: 16672
Published: December 26 2012
Updated: February 21 2014


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15: Everything Goes My Way

this broke my heart.  it was painful to read because i've been there.  they have a lot to sort out, but i hope they find happiness; whether it's together or apart.

great chapter...you evoked a lot of emotion in me with this one!  

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: September 21 2013

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

Terri Lawson, a middle-aged modeling agent had one job to do: find someone totally different then what the agency usually picks. When she runs into a young man way out of anything she'd ever consider...both of their lives change for the better.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back, On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: The Cougars
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 43892
Read Count: 64462
Published: January 04 2013
Updated: February 04 2014


Title: Chapter 9: Stay

Daniel is really good for her. I'm glad she's softening to him. 

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: July 22 2013

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 776]
Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108479
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Regret

I like jayden; his quirks are endearing. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: February 07 2013

Title: Regret

I can't stand his parents. I hope they become bond quickly so the grandparents look like idiots!  Great story!!

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: February 11 2013

Title: Regret

This chapter warmed my heart so much!  I love seeing how God is working with Jayden.  I am so wrapped up in this story!

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: February 25 2013

Title: Regret

Making love with no immediate shower? He knows his home is with her; how beautiful!  It's amazing how one is able to relax and let go of certain things when he's with his partner.  

Jayden's got a major fight ahead of him; I hope he has the mental fortitude to not let his "mother" manipulate him. I kind of want Tam to visit him there without the kids. That would speak volumes to her faith in him...And I think it will strengthen their bond in the long run. The battle with his parents is his own; but having Tam there--even if she stays home and waits for him while he goes to talk to them alone--will represent a united front.  

They have a bumpy road ahead of them, but I think if they stick together, they can work through anything. It's been 10 years and they still love each other with so much fervor; after the truths revealed, the children, and not even talking!  Yep, they just need to get Jayden from under his parents' manipulation so they can dedicate themselves to being a family.  

 

 



Author's Response:

Yes Jayden doesn't even realize the progress he's made.  He's going home determined, but trouble awaits.  More is coming soon.

Reviewer: LiLi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03 2013

Title: Regret

I loved this chapter. Jason needs to grow a pair and handle nancy because she needs her ass handed to her for what's she's done to Jayden.

 

Tam is as stubborn as a mule; it wouldn't take a month for me to go to Connecticut and see about my man. That's too long to go with no communication...And he knocked her up again, too?  Their hearts and bodies communicate on a level they themselves have yet to reach. I love them!  



Author's Response:

LOL LiLi:  Tam is stubborn, but she is going to New Haven.  More is coming soon!

Reviewer: LiLi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 05 2013

Title: Regret

Oh, how I've missed this story!  Thanks for the update. :)

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: March 29 2013

Title: Regret

Yes! I love the update! Tam needs to learn a lesson in forgiveness, I see.  I wanted to shake some sense into her, but I'm glad she listened to her mom.  

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: April 15 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In The Beginning

Yay! I loved the update.  I'm so glad Tam is coming around; I was getting sick of her foolishness.  Is Jay going to commit his life to Christ soon? I sure hope so!!

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: July 11 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

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Chance. I don't believe in it. Everything that happens in our life happens for a reason. I've always believed that. But, it's funny. Who would have thought a night of clubbing could result in my marriage to the tattooed quarterback for the San Francisco 49ers?    



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 88367
Read Count: 172823
Published: March 16 2013
Updated: March 14 2016


Title: Chapter 14: Yes or No

Great job on the sex scene! I'm glad arianna is opening up.

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: June 29 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 121]
Summary:

A sequel to Good Grief, Duplicity is full of mystery and intrigue. Will love conquer all things or are some things broken by nature?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 114
Read Count: 19934
Published: March 18 2013
Updated: May 14 2014


Title: Duplicity

Why didn't Sienna ask for credentials? There's no way in hell I'd agree to someone snatching up my family without verification. It's about. To go. DOWN.  Haha!  Great chapter; thanks!



Author's Response:

Hey there- So Sienna is convinced this guy is legit. I know probably in hindsight it might've been a risk for her but at that moment, she was so hungry for information on her brother and wants to find a way to help him. :)

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: April 20 2013

Retired
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 288940
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Savannah's a bitch and Henry's hot. Great story!

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: July 16 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

So sweet!

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: July 21 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Henry let her know how striking he finds her.  His patience and encouragement are what dreams are made of!  Great job!

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: July 22 2013

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196751
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I am on pins and needles with anticipation! This chapter was very well written!!!

Reviewer: LiLi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 15 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I love Dmitri! Nadia had better lay low before she gets a halo!  Haha



Author's Response:

haha. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: July 05 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 146]
Summary:

 

Quitting love is never easy; no matter the situation. That saying seems to follow Jake Ryder in the once vibrant form of Sierra Lewis. The cycle doesn't seem to stop, or maybe he just doesn't want it to.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: Impossible to Kill
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43800
Read Count: 20054
Published: June 08 2013
Updated: May 27 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Fireworks. Part I

i want monica's tacky ass to get dropped like a hot potato.  i don't like her one bit.  that little confrontation in the bathroom was absolutely unnecessary.  can't wait for part 2!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Lili! Part 2 is on the way.

Reviewer: LiLi Signed
Date: September 02 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.