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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

This story is the third of the series.  Cassie and Dean are married with four children.  Dean had settled into working at an auto shop and Cassie still writes. Sam and Sarah are married as well and living as best they can in a world where the yellowed eyed demon is dead but supernatural is still present in their lives.

 

 

No copyright infringement is intended.  All recognizable characters are still the property of the original creators. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Cassie Robinson
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Family, Mystery, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Cassie/Dean (Supernatural)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 36546
Read Count: 2676
Published: 02/07/10
Updated: 02/12/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the start and can't wait to read more!! What did happen to Cassie to make her angry???!!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/10

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh oh, wonder what Vicki would do next??? What was her motive in marrying John??? Please protect Dee dee, she is too much sometimes but I still love her. Vicki is evil. Hope Alexis is innocent of her mom's ways.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading.  I only have up to chapter Fourteen written on this one but i think that is real near the end of the journey for this one. 

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Date: 20/07/10

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved the update and agree with Cassie, Sarah is playing with fire or else she would have been upfront and let Sam know about meeting up with Clint.

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Date: 15/07/10

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Loved the update. Hope Sam can kill the thing without reprecussions. Maybe Vicki will decide to be good now.

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Date: 24/07/10

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Loved it. About time Courtney got her just desserts. Great story.

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Date: 03/12/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary: Logan finally gets the love he deserves.

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Categories: Movies
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 8414
Read Count: 2437
Published: 04/07/10
Updated: 04/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary: Finally edited this story and reposting. Thanks for bearing with me. I oringinally posted this in Jan. I love the Cam and Booth pairing on Bones. I stopped watching when they split them up. This story doesn’t follow the show.

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Camille Saroyan
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Cam/Booth (Bones)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 19276
Read Count: 4638
Published: 05/07/10
Updated: 05/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmmm, this story seems similar to something I read previously and I had absolutely loved it.

Author's Response:

I published it in January and lost the USB drive that I had it on. I asked my guy to erase my stories from one site and copy the ones I had on this one. He did it backwards. Thankfully a friend had copied most of them.

I remember your reviews they were flattering. I am taking the time to edit the rest of the stories then I'll repost them. I think you also like the Jason and Gia story.

Thanks for the review.

 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/10

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

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It's for better...and for worse.

For the "Less Is More" Challenge 

Disclaimer/Credit: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Image(s) from gettyimages.com.

Shout out to my girl, KKMonroe. She encouraged me to share this with the world. She thinks I teach her, but really she teaches me I have much more to learn :) 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 94
Read Count: 3038
Published: 05/07/10
Updated: 05/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: The Papers

Interesting but too short. What was the back story???

Author's Response: Yeah, it killed me it being this short. Believe me. I tried to give little clues as to what transpired between them. Things like, when he says, "You brought this upon yourself", or the fact that his kids aren't even really his. Couple of subtle clues, and other not so subtle ones were thrown in there as a glimpse of a back story. I'll work on it. Thanks for reading baha :)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

 

Young, beautiful and rich are three words that could best describe Mimi, Lilly, Karl and Leo. But although money gives them options and opens doors to power, parties and constant flow of Pomgracz champagne, it also brings pain and very high expectations.

 Mimi is always having to decide whether to follow her heart or her father’s wishes. Whereas Karl has swept Mimi off her feet and has invited her to stay in his fantasy world, but due to the nature of the lives of the rich and the very rich he finds it difficult to keep it a fantasy.

 On the other hand, Leo knows that everything is all about appearances and having learnt this the hard way is trying to recreate his own appearance. Lilly has lived her whole life keeping up appearances, and has now decided that she would rather just be who she is regardless the gossip and the lies.  

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5049
Read Count: 1260
Published: 05/07/10
Updated: 05/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: The Characters

Interesting cast pics.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/10

Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

Interesting start.

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Date: 06/07/10

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

 Connie is a young, beautiful, recent graduate who is finding her post matriculated life a lot harder than she expected. What lengths will she go to, to get the life she knows she deserves?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 625
Read Count: 2405
Published: 06/07/10
Updated: 06/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: The Decision

Interesting short but why did she go that path??? Definitely would read if story is extended.

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Date: 07/07/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

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So she poured out the liquid music of her voice to quench the thirst of his spirit.  ~Nathaniel Hawthorne

For 'The Less is More' challenge

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 724
Read Count: 1103
Published: 06/07/10
Updated: 06/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Serenade

Interesting short.

Author's Response: :-) thank you!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/07/10

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

I use to be a part of a fansite for two wonderful dancers from SYTYCD Season 2.  I was so inspired by some really awesome writers on that site to write my own little diddy. It was an experiment and it was fun. I thought I would share it with you all since a certain someone (Sebine) says I never write but I am always begging for stories :)!...I hope you enjoy it and remember I am not a writer so be kind!!

BTW it is Unbetaed..lol!!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2200
Read Count: 2817
Published: 07/07/10
Updated: 07/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved the twist in the story. Awesome!!! Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading Baha...I was sure you all would guess my little twist right away....hope it made you smile a little!!

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Date: 07/07/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 38]
Summary: Connie thought she wanted revenge on her cheating husband. She got more than she bargained for.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 995
Read Count: 9974
Published: 07/07/10
Updated: 07/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved Connie's style. Brice was definitely a DAWG!!! He didn't deserve her.

Author's Response:

Brice definitely didn't deserve Connie. I say good riddance to bad rubbish! lol

Thanks for leaving a comment!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/10

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

What God has brought together, let no one tear asunder...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 303
Read Count: 2395
Published: 08/07/10
Updated: 08/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Now that just wasn't right. Tsk! Tsk! Starting a marriage on deception. The scumbag!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/10

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary: Caught in a love Triangle between two best friends, Amanda must find out the hard way, which guy is right for her.

Table of Contents
Categories: Music
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 26899
Read Count: 31064
Published: 08/07/10
Updated: 22/07/10


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Interesting update but why the hell is she putting all her business out there let that??? Wasn't it Tati who wasn't speaking with her for a while??? She needs to keep her lips zipped because Tati is gonna spread her business the minute things don't go her way or she becomes jealous of her.

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Date: 10/07/10

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hmmm, when will she learn to go with her instinct???!!!

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Date: 22/07/10

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting story so far. Not liking the way Amanda is being bullied. Not too sure all will be well at the after graduation party for Amanda. Just not getting any good vibes from her acquaintances.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I appreciate your review. Your vibes may be right, lol. We'll see...

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/07/10

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow, why am I not surprised about Trey??? Never trusted the bastard. Glad she saw the light before it was too late. Hmmm, wonder what Tati knows about this seeing that she encouraged her????

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Date: 17/07/10

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, I'm thinking Mandy is a fool. She's that much in lust she can't see him for what he is....a disrespectful trash talking jerk!! Look at how he's treating/talking to Arielle, the girl he was hold up with just before meeting up with her. Trey is a plya and Mandy got set up by Tati. I just don't see this turning out to be a pretty picture that she has in his head. Now she talking trash herself???!!! Come on , she needs to open those eyes up wider.

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Date: 14/07/10

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ah!!! What a stupido!!! He's still treating her like shit and she can't see the light. He only wants to get in her pants. I bet that picture is of his GF. I'm disappointed in Amanda that she's letting him talk to her like that and thinks that its ok. Next he will be laying hands on her and not in a good way either. He obviously doesn't respect her. I still feel that she's gonna get burned.

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Date: 20/07/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary: Denisha and Matt are in the midst of an argument.  Will Matt find a way to get back in Denisha's good graces?  My submission for the Less is More Challenge!

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 978
Read Count: 1154
Published: 08/07/10
Updated: 08/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Short but sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you!  I am glad you liked it!  :)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

What if Franklin had bitten Tara the night they had sex? Unfortunately, Franklin takes things a bit too far and now Tara must deal with the consequences. Will she ever forgive him now that she is cursed with immortality? Can centuries of waiting and separation be overcome to reunite these estranged lovers? Massive AU. True Blood fic.

ShanniC



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Tara Thornton
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: They're Playing Our Song Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4416
Read Count: 1058
Published: 10/07/10
Updated: 10/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: I Will Wait For You

That was sweet. Loved it!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/07/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Dean hunts his love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Cassie Robinson
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Cassie/Dean (Supernatural)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: With This Ring
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1223
Read Count: 878
Published: 10/07/10
Updated: 10/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it. Glad they still have it going on.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/07/10

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

 


 


So much to do, so little time.


My (failed) attempt at the 1000 word fic challenge. 


Banner by curiouslyamused 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1060
Read Count: 2459
Published: 11/07/10
Updated: 11/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Please, Please, Please

Loved the story!!! It was cute.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/07/10