Penname: Dsmoothone [Contact]

Real name: Darnisha

Member Since: 13/07/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I love NFL, NBA and WWE... I'm a big sports fan and love writing stories about that life...




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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 79]
Summary:

Tavin Wilson and Cameron Caldwell have disliked each other for years. Something happens to change their opinion of one another, and they become friends. During their friendship, they learn that they were wrong about one another and their friendship develops into something more.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 141834
Read Count: 330118
Published: 07/09/08
Updated: 08/09/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is one of my all time favorite stories on The Chamber... can you give us a peek into their life now?

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/03/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary: Two people out having a night of fun and passion.

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Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: Jovan (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2894
Read Count: 961
Published: 29/10/08
Updated: 29/10/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a hot little number.  I enjoyed it. 

Author's Response: while thank you. i'm enjoy your story alot did i metion love that john cena in the story lol if not i do very very much. keep up the good work girl.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 07/08/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 272]
Summary:

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Art Historian Aidan Bell and student Collista Carson can't stand each other. Yet for some reason, he asks her to be his new assistant.  Although doubtful that they can co-exist without killing each other, Collista has her grade in his class to think about and so accepts the position.  One thing leads to another, and before long, the two are finding it hard to maintain their professional distance.

Then the specter of Aidan's murky past casts its shadow over the forbidden relationship.  Add a priceless painting, a ruthless art collector and soon Collista finds herself in the position of having to help Aidan solve a mystery before he goes down for the count.  Will he have enough time to teach her what she needs to know about the art of the steal?  

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:Yes
Word count: 131714
Read Count: 89860
Published: 22/02/09
Updated: 22/02/10


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Fifteen

Well, I must admit I'd been sleeping on this story and shame on it, it's fabulous!  I look forward to reading much more.

Author's Response:

LOL!  Better a little late than never.  Besides, I know how it is. There's so many stories on this site that I'd like to read, and although I love writing my own, I some times feel like I'm in prison because I can't do what I'd like to and that is read other's work. 

Anyway, I'm so glad that you found a little time and chose TAOTS as one of the one's to read.  That's a great compliment.  :-) 

There's more to come and thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/09/09

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Sixteen

oh lovely!!!! this is nice!

Author's Response:

Thanks D.  :-)

Now on to the drama. 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/09/09

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Seventeen

Oooh, this is such a mystery... I lobve it

Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the story, D.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/09/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

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Dr. Elaine 'Lainey' Winters, aka Navy Reserve Captain Winters, usually serves her compliance of one week per month at the Annapolis Hospital, in Maryland.  What happens when she is called as a witness in a case that hits pretty close to home and suddenly finds that she could possibly face a violation of the Navy’s strict no fraternization policy?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider. The original characters belong to their respective entities, but plot is the property of SparkApCider, and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Graphics by SPAC 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, Movies, Original Fiction, General Hospital
Characters: Lainey Winters
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Red Light Special , Behind the Uniform
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2598
Read Count: 1371
Published: 02/04/09
Updated: 03/04/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

How did I miss this?  Hotness!!!

Author's Response: LOL...thanks for reading!  :-P

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/10/09

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 15]
Summary:

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Fluffy little one shot about a bored waitress, a hungry musician, and an empty diner.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2144
Read Count: 8142
Published: 05/08/09
Updated: 05/08/09


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I love it.  It's really real.  Are you a big Mraz fan?

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I like his music but I love his quirkeness. He seems like such an adorable oddball.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed
Date: 05/08/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 74]
Summary:

Flashing Light

 

The flashing lights warm me.

The fans love me.

One man can save me.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 26963
Read Count: 9107
Published: 12/08/09
Updated: 08/09/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really am enjoying this. Your casting is perfect.  Ugh to both Maria and Chase.  Maria is a horrible mother to use her baby as bait.  Not cool.  I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Thanks boo! Maria is a mess and a half...but you'll witness it for yourself.

 

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 26/08/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 40]
Summary:

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Lieutenant Pete 'Maverick' Mitchell is a hot pilot who rises to the front of his squadron and gets a chance in a lifetime to train along side his best friend Lieutenant JG (Junior Grade) Nick 'Goose' Bradshaw with an elite group of pilots at the U.S. Naval Fighter Weapons School when the pilot above him (Cougar) in rankings drops out.   Maverick struggles to be the best pilot, stepping on the toes of his other students and Charlotte 'Charlie' Blackwood, a civilian instructor to whom he is strongly attracted.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC). The original characters and plot are the property of their respective owners, and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Graphics by SPAC 

Submission for the Up In Lights Challenge



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: General, Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Up In Lights Challenge
Series: i love the 80's
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 19116
Read Count: 7623
Published: 14/08/09
Updated: 31/08/09


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I like this alot.  This was my favorite movie growing up.



Author's Response: It was a great movie. I fell in love with Tom Cruise after this one. He was such so hot to me. Thanks D for reading. I'm going to try to push out more updates after next week when two of my other stories should be concluding.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/08/09

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Oooh, I am really enjoying this.  My favorite line so far... Slider, I think Ice needs his bat and balls polished. {CUTE}

Author's Response: Buah! And see a few readers won't read because they hate my choice for Slider.  But see I picked him because he makes a good ass kisser.  LOL!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20/08/09

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Oooh, I like this!  Like I said, this was my FAVORITE movie growing up.  And I like the "urban" flava...

Author's Response: Thanks Dsmoothone.  Glad you are enjoying, thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25/08/09

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 ©

oh my goodness... you had me at the first word! pure hotness... i love it

Author's Response: Thanks Dsmoothone for reading.  Naughty just didn't do it for me in the original.  Let the workout begin. 

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/08/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 43]
Summary:

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Uncanny X-Men

When she shows up that first night, he’s not surprised.



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Categories: Books
Characters: Storm/Ororo Munroe
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1550
Read Count: 2933
Published: 09/09/09
Updated: 09/09/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chaleur

Never gonna watch X-Men in the same light again... hotness times 2!!!

Author's Response: :D Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/09/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

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He danced by the name "Italian Ice"

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider. The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider, and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Graphics by SPAC



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2545
Read Count: 2136
Published: 11/09/09
Updated: 11/09/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooh, I like.  Man they almost got caught.  Whoo wee... not good, I can't wait to see where if, you go any further with this!

Author's Response: LOL DSM, yes they were nearly caught! I'm considering moving it on. We'll see. ;-)

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/09/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary: After a bad break up Mia threw herself into work. If she couldn't succeed in a relationship, she could excel at work. Yet all those lonely night of taking care of herself have gotten old. She needs to get out and have a little fun. Release a little stress another way. But the last thing she expects is to run into a man as gorgeous as Rick. He is into her as much as she is him. She may be bad at relationships, but it doesn't mean she can't have a little fun, especially if she gets breakfast out of the deal...

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2141
Read Count: 1275
Published: 16/09/09
Updated: 16/09/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HOT.  I really enjoyed that.  Hopefully this wasn't just a one shot (hint, hint).  Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Sorry Dsmoothone but this is a short. No continuation planned for it. But I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/09/09

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 29]
Summary:

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Gardner is a 25 year old singer trying to get her big break. Some how she ends up becoming the nanny of Edward Landon’s 3 year old daughter and his suicidal family’s golden retriever, he a VP at Cornerstone Records in Atlanta Georgia.

 

Edward Landon is a 31 year old husband, father, and a music exec in Atlanta Georgia. All he wanted was to find a nanny to take care of his daughter and his suicidal family dog. What he got was Keisha Gardner the beautiful and insane nanny.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 9314
Read Count: 10595
Published: 19/10/09
Updated: 30/11/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think it's really a good start.  You might want to re-read it before you post it, just to get the feel for the read. But I think it's a great start and I'm interested in seeing where this goes, since Heather's daddy is already married. Hmmm... great start!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your comments. I will try to do better on my editing next chapter.

All I can say there will be some Lucy and Ethal moments between Keisha and her best friend. Who will be putting in an appearance soon.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstar
Date: 19/10/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

For Keisha, Kappa Sigma’s annual Halloween party was supposed to be…well, a party. She never imagined it turning out to be the fight of her life when she meets, Tyler, a member of Kappa Sigma and her future monster…



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Rape
Series: The Chamber Grindhouse 2
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8291
Read Count: 14501
Published: 26/10/09
Updated: 07/11/09


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my damn... I'm scared already!

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/10/09

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh boy, he's setting her up.  This is getting very interesting.

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Date: 28/10/09

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh Lord... this is scary.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/10/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 37]
Summary: Adrienne Banks has been friends with Bradley Miller for years. Will a series of text messages and years of history make her re-evaluate thier relationship?

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 6106
Read Count: 3807
Published: 27/10/09
Updated: 04/11/09


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is good.  I look forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll keep posting. I'm glad someone is enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/10/09

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am doing the cabbage patch following it up with the running man.  Corny, I know but I totally love this story!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/10/09

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am really enjoying this.  I wish your updates were a little longer, then I wouldn't fiend for them as much.  Two thumbs up!

Author's Response: I wish they were too. LOL But my brain starts out as a lot but as soon as it gets on paper its an abridged version. glad you're still enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/10/09

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Okay, this is getting really interesting... so they have a lot of unresolved sexual tension. hmm.  Can't wait to see what happens from here.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/11/09

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary: Gwen's heart has been broken by Arthur and that makes her fair game for a force that wishes to use her for evil.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Guinevere
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Gwen/Arthur (Merlin)
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 37394
Read Count: 29923
Published: 01/11/09
Updated: 01/11/09


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Your writing was wonderful and very good. I could hear the actual accents when reading this.  I really enjoyed it and you get an  AWESOME , GREAT and FABULOUS for your first contributions to the site.  I look forward to more Merlin fiction from you!  TWO THUMBS UP!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so glad you enjoyed this and that you could hear the characters.  Thanks again for your review!

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/11/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary: This is the story of Keisha's cousin Tamesha Hill and Isamu Fujita. I don't do well with summaries so I hope the story speaks for itself.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 26421
Read Count: 6143
Published: 03/12/09
Updated: 24/05/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it. Please write more.

Author's Response: TY u I will keep writing. Plese keep reading.

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 04/12/09